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There have been 6 different discussions/RfCs on the question of including Duckworth's date of birth in the article. In each one the resolution was per WP:DOB policy to include the year of birth only. Please review these discussions before revisiting this topic. |
Request from Duckworth to withhold date of birth and mother's maiden name – multiple discussions
- The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section. A summary of the conclusions reached follows.
- The following request was confirmed as coming from Tammy Duckworth (if necessary, I will forward proof by email to any administrator upon request). The result of the discussion at the biography of living perons noticeboard (archive link is here) and in keeping with WP policy/guidline, consensus is to remove the exact date of birth and her mother's maiden name (as requested). Thanks, R. Baley 22:25, 19 September 2007 (UTC) For the most recent iteration of this issue, please see the archived biography of living perons noticeboard discussion link here. Essentially, regardless of whether or not the subject of a WP:BLP is a public figure, Misplaced Pages's policy on date of birth states that if a subject objects to the inclusion of their date of birth, simply list the year of birth instead. Regards, AzureCitizen (talk) 22:48, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
Hello. This is Tammy. I am requesting that all editors please leave my birth date and mother's maiden name off the page for protection from identity theft. I truly respect the free nature of this excellent page and know that I am now a public figure (if only a minor one). However, I would be grateful if we did not make it so easy for someone to have access to my personal information that is commonly used to verify identity. Thank you all in advance for your help. cheers, tammy. (IP address removed, R. Baley) 05:59, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
2007 Discussion of the issue |
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NOTE: This discussion then shifted to Misplaced Pages:Biographies_of_living_persons/Noticeboard/Archive26#Tammy_Duckworth_.28closed.29. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ybbor (talk • contribs) 02:52, 18 September 2007 (UTC) |
2009 Discussion of the issue |
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Back in 2007, Tammy Duckworth requested that her date of birth and mother's maiden name be removed from the article. Much of the debate, especially in the early going, centered around just how prominent a public figure she is and whether she was entitled to special treatment. At the time, Duckworth had recently been appointed Director of the Illinois Department of Veterans Affairs, and was less than a year removed from a run for Congress that received international attention. It was ultimately decided to accede to her request, and the information remains excluded. At least one person who supported granting the request specifically mentioned revisiting the issue if her profile rose. Since then, Duckworth was mentioned as a possible replacement for Barack Obama in the Senate. In fact, she was supposedly a favourite of Dick Durbin (and possibly Rahm Emanuel) before the Blagojevich arrest. Thereafter, she was mentioned in published reports as a possible Veterans Affairs Secretary and a possible candidate for Rahm Emanuel's House seat. Ultimately, she was appointed Assistant Secretary of Veterans Affairs for Public and Intergovernmental Affairs (she was confirmed April 22). I don't take a position either way, but I think it is time for a second look at this issue. A part of the discussion is above, but the full discussion is at Misplaced Pages:Biographies of living persons/Noticeboard/Archive26#Tammy Duckworth (closed). -Rrius (talk) 07:49, 24 April 2009 (UTC)
I see no reason to provide her actual day of birth, esp as per her request and the prev resolved dispute about it, but i think mentioning the month might be helpful in being able remove that really weird-looking "(Age 40-41)" desig atop the article, when we know she's 41 (and 1/2 ;-) now. I'm also gonna reword desig for mom & dad, to avoid people (frequently) trying to put in the maiden name (that Tammy requested be removed) Beansandveggies (talk) 09:55, 17 October 2009 (UTC) |
March, 2012 Discussion of the issue |
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Why is this still censored? She has been the head of the Illinois DVA and is a candidate for elected office yet again. 72.94.174.90 (talk) 18:10, 22 March 2012 (UTC)
Duckworth is a public figure and can not have any expectations that reliably published sources must withhold information like her exact birthday; indeed, it's been published on the Internet in news stories and articles, and that is readily verifiable. Further, everyone here agrees that Misplaced Pages is not censored. Her exact birth date, however, has not been "censored" for any arbitrary or impermissible reason; quite the contrary, it is based on a policy. That policy contemplates that Misplaced Pages may include "full names and dates of birth that have been widely published by reliable sources," but that if a person objects about the inclusion of their date of birth, we are to "err on the side of caution and simply list the year." You can read that policy at WP:DOB. Given the policy, what are your policy-based argument points that lead you to the conclusion that we should overturn the prior consensus? AzureCitizen (talk) 20:02, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
NOTE: This discussion then shifted to Misplaced Pages:Biographies_of_living_persons/Noticeboard/Archive160#Tammy_Duckworth. --AzureCitizen (talk) 22:48, 3 September 2012 (UTC) |
November, 2012 Discussion of the issue |
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Duckworth is now a duly elected Member of Congress and a representative of the US government; as such she is no longer a private citizen, but a public one, and it is the duty of Misplaced Pages to inform people about her, including her birth date. In short, if she didn't want her life publicized, she shouldn't have run for election. To summarize, I recommend we update her birth date. Grammarxxx 22:59, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
Redacting my words in this discussion is not very nice. It would appear Misplaced Pages is all about censorship. Censorship is what you want. Any fool can Google "Tammy Duckworth Brithday". Regardless of what Tammy want's the policy don't cover this and she is a major public figure, a congresswoman and has absolutely no expectation of that type of information to be private. Furthermore, the insistence to censor such information smacks of partisanship by you. 68.57.192.113 (talk)
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January 2013 Discussion of the issue |
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Personally, I don't think that WP:BLPN would be the appropriate forum for this, since the edit war has somewhat died down. We can agree that WP:DOB requires that the full date of birth be removed, but we can't agree on whether WP:DOB is constrained by other guidelines such as WP:WELLKNOWN and WP:OPENPARA. We are seeking a clear consensus on how to interpret all of these policies in a harmonious way. WP:RFC states that we can do this here (on the talk page) or in a separate page. I'll take a closer look through the policy pages to see where we should discuss this further. If the GA nominator decides to take this to GAR, this issue can also be revisited there. What do you think? Edge3 (talk) 17:45, 15 January 2013 (UTC)
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July–August 2013 Discussion of the issue |
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As Tammy Duckworth has previously requested to have her birthdate excluded from this article, we have complied as per WP:DOB. This decision is the result of a consensus developed over several years, as documented on #Request from Tammy Duckworth to withhold date of birth and mother's maiden name. The request may have carried more weight in 2007, when Ms. Duckworth had less notability as an official in the Illinois state government. However, now she serves on the US Congress and has less of an expectation of privacy, as per WP:WELLKNOWN. I am initiating this RfC to request that the community allow this article to display Ms. Duckworth's full date of birth, as per WP:OPENPARA and WP:WELLKNOWN. WP:OPENPARA states that "The opening paragraph should have... dates of birth and death, if known". Since the date of birth is known, the MOS urges us to include it. Furthermore, WP:WELLKNOWN suggests that we should publish information that is "noteworthy, relevant, and well-documented", even if the subject does not want it mentioned. For reference, the birthdate is published on her official, Congressional bio (). Edge3 (talk) 01:58, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
From: Duckworth for Congress <info@tammyduckworth.com> Date: July 31, 2013 Thanks for checking with us - we really appreciate you seeking the congresswoman's input. Rep. Duckworth still prefers that her birthdate not be published. Please let me know if there are additional steps we should take to weigh in. Thank you, Eve, Duckworth for Congress --Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 18:27, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Edge3 (talk · contribs) 02:42, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
Hello! I will review this article. Edge3 (talk) 02:42, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
I have partially reviewed the article against the good article criteria. I will follow-up with a complete review once the preliminary issues are resolved:
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- There are too many quotations in the article, especially in the "Political positions" sections. The "Recognition" section has a boxed quote that has unclear significance. It needs to be cited and further explained, if it is to remain.
- Fixed.
- There are too many quotations in the article, especially in the "Political positions" sections. The "Recognition" section has a boxed quote that has unclear significance. It needs to be cited and further explained, if it is to remain.
- B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
- Please reduce or remove the citations in the lead paragraph. (WP:LEADCITE)
- Fixed.
- Please reduce or remove the citations in the lead paragraph. (WP:LEADCITE)
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
Missing citation on first paragraph of "Post-military career". References also are not consistently formatted, especially the dates. Bare URLs in citations 9, 19, 28, 32, and others.This isn't a GA issue, per WP:GACN.
- C. No original research:
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- Please expand both subsections of "Congressional elections". The 2006 section could use some significant expansion, unless someone can demonstrate that there really isn't much to say about that election. As for 2012, the section is longer, but surely the civil suit isn't the only noteworthy part of the campaign?
- I've expanded both but I feel the 2006 election should be kept short since it has it's own article.
- Please expand both subsections of "Congressional elections". The 2006 section could use some significant expansion, unless someone can demonstrate that there really isn't much to say about that election. As for 2012, the section is longer, but surely the civil suit isn't the only noteworthy part of the campaign?
- B. Focused:
- Perhaps the "Political positions" sections could be merged and condensed.
- I've seriously cut down this section but I feel trying to put it in another section would be irresponsible.
- Perhaps the "Political positions" sections could be merged and condensed.
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- Ongoing content dispute about the inclusion of the date of birth. Please resolve this soon. I should point out that WP:OPENPARA says in part: "The opening paragraph should have...dates of birth and death, if known" (emphasis added). I'll look into this policy further, but it seems that including the date of birth might be necessary for this to meet WP:GACR, since the date of birth is known.
- The article's been protected so there'll be no more warring over her DOB.
- Ongoing content dispute about the inclusion of the date of birth. Please resolve this soon. I should point out that WP:OPENPARA says in part: "The opening paragraph should have...dates of birth and death, if known" (emphasis added). I'll look into this policy further, but it seems that including the date of birth might be necessary for this to meet WP:GACR, since the date of birth is known.
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- I'm placing this on hold for now. Edge3 (talk) 03:34, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- Pass or Fail:
Further comments:
- Early life, education, and military service
- Ref 5 (Slevin) doesn't support the statement: "Because of her father's work with the United Nations and international companies, the family moved around Southeast Asia. Duckworth became fluent in Thai and Indonesian, in addition to English."
- In the statement: "Following in the footsteps of her father and ancestors, who served in the Revolutionary War, World War II, and the Vietnam War..." — Ref 4 doesn't mention that she had an ancestor who fought in the Vietnam War.
- "The explosion 'almost completely destroyed her right arm, breaking it in three places and tearing tissue from the back side of it.'" — Quotation not contained in ref 11.
- Post-military career
- "She worked to develop state programs giving tax credits to employers who hire veterans who served in Iraq, Afghanistan, or Desert Storm; more state grants to service organizations; and backing for below-market mortgages for veterans." — This statement almost copies word-for-word the phrasing used in ref 16. Please rephrase or use a quotation.
- The Recognition paragraph begins with "Duckworth credits Dole..." without mentioning who Dole is until linking to Bob Dole in the third sentence.
- "Duckworth credits Dole for inspiring her to pursue public service while she recuperated at Walter Reed Army Medical Center in Washington, D.C." — Not supported by ref 22, which only says "Duckworth has cited Dole's experience as an injured veteran-turned-politician as an inspiration for her candidacy."
- "Former Republican Presidential candidate and Senator Bob Dole dedicated his biography One Soldier's Story in part to Duckworth." — First, it's an autobiography, not a biography. Second, perhaps it would be better to cite the book directly?
--Edge3 (talk) 15:32, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
More comments:
- Congressional elections
- The section for 2006 contains only one citation, which verifies only the final results between Duckworth and Roskam. The rest of the paragraph needs to be cited because there are statistics that need to be verified.
- "Duckworth defeated former Deputy Treasurer of Illinois Raja Krishnamoorthi for the Democratic nomination on March 20, 2012, then faced incumbent Republican Joe Walsh in the general election." — Not supported by ref 30.
- "Duckworth was considered the favorite, as the district had been redrawn to be significantly more Democratic than its predecessor." — Missing citation.
- "On October 11, 2012, during a live debate between the two, Walsh brought up the fact that Duckworth had been named in a civil suit filed by two employees against Patricia Simms, director of the Anna Veterans' Home in southern Illinois." — Refs 18 and 19 seem to be irrelevant.
- "... the first member of Congress born in Thailand." — Doesn't seem to be supported by the source.
- Political positions
- Entire "Veterans affairs" section directly copies text from ref 38
- Perhaps her stance on education isn't noteworthy? It's sourced to her campaign website's press release.
- The first "Iraq War" paragraph implies that the positions Duckworth expressed in her press release were also expressed in her response to Bush's weekly radio address. Please separate the two and clarify the difference.
- I'm not sure whether the quote in the "Iraq War" section is necessary.
- In the "Gun control" section, none of the three citations have working links, and the quotation does not have a reference.
I now conclude this review. Because I have identified close paraphrasing or copyright violations, I fail this article's GA nomination per WP:GAQF.
I have also noticed that edit warring occasionally resumes over the inclusion of Duckworth's DOB. Most recently, an anonymous user re-added the DOB today. This edit cannot be considered vandalism, per WP:VANDAL: "Even if misguided, willfully against consensus, or disruptive, any good-faith effort to improve the encyclopedia is not vandalism. Edit warring over content is not vandalism." Thus, the article currently fails GA criterion #5, which is also grounds for quick failure.
Even if there is no edit war, I would argue that the GA criteria urges that the full DOB be included, per WP:OPENPARA. (For the path, see GA criterion #1, which requires compliance with WP:LEAD. Go to the WP:LEAD#Biographies section, which in turn points directly to WP:MOSBIO. See WP:MOSBIO#Opening paragraph.) I should note that WP:GACR does not require me to check for compliance with WP:BLP. Because there seems to be a conflict between WP:GACR and WP:DOB, which is further complicated by the existence of WP:WELLKNOWN, this GA nomination cannot proceed without further clarification on how the guidelines and policies should be interpreted when we mix them together.
I recommend asking Tammy Duckworth if we can include her full birthdate on the article, since that would allow us to sidestep this debate entirely. Once all of the other issues I listed above are addressed, I recommend submitting this for renomination or, if you challenge my reasoning, reassessment. --Edge3 (talk) 02:48, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
Ancestors vs forefathers
This is a really well written article. Kudos to all who have contributed. It was only when I came to the use of the word ancestors that I felt that not quite the right word (nor the right tense in the subordinate phrase) had been used. Ancestor has the connotation of legal terminology on the one hand, biological descent trees on another, and spiritual and ethnic roots on another. In the context of military prowess and service to one's nation, it seems to me that either forebears or forefathers is the better term. Given that all the said fighting forebears were fathers rather than mothers, forefathers seems to me to be the right word here.124.186.93.5 (talk) 07:14, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
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