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This article is very far from meeting GA criterion 1a. A few examples, but the whole thing needs to be properly copyedited.
"After having its first tour in Europe in 1927, Peñaro won once again the Uruguayan championship in 1928 and 1929, and at the next year Peñarol beat Olimpia 1–0 on its first game in the Centenario Stadium of Montevideo."
"... though it was on this period that the stadium Las Acacias was inaugurated ..."
"On the years to come ..."
"... while it worst defeat was by 0–6 against Nacional"
"Peñarol holds various records, both locally and interantionally"
"The club is also the record holder for the biggest win, 11–2 al Valencia from Venezuela"
"Peñarol won the Uruguayan Championship in nine occasions"
"Moreover, the company MPC Consultants made a survey with 9000 Uruguayans, and it placed Peñarol at the top with 45% of the people inquired"
"... the confection process that was carried away by Argentinian Rody Soria, expert in the subject"
" Nonetheless, with Bayne in charge of CUR the sports team suffered its discrepancies."
"... thus seven out of eleven board members where from the official party"
I want to stress that these are just a few examples from many I could have picked out, and that simply fixing these will not address the serious prose problems this article has. Eric Corbett 21:20, 28 June 2013 (UTC)