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::In any case, I strongly reject that it is a non-neutral edit. My edit (and talk page discussion) was nothing to do with the fact that the Germans misused the term "euthanasia". I would welcome others' views and comments. ] (]) 08:54, 18 September 2020 (UTC) | ::In any case, I strongly reject that it is a non-neutral edit. My edit (and talk page discussion) was nothing to do with the fact that the Germans misused the term "euthanasia". I would welcome others' views and comments. ] (]) 08:54, 18 September 2020 (UTC) | ||
:I too find it utterly jarring to see the use of "euthanasia" as it is employed here, exactly as described above – divorced from context, it reads as indicated: like it's vernacular definition; a reference to humane death, applied |
:I too find it utterly jarring to see the use of "euthanasia" as it is employed here, exactly as described above – divorced from context, it reads as indicated: like it's vernacular definition; a reference to humane death, applied to those for whom it is a mercy, which in ''this context couldn't be more non-neutral''. It reads like something a nazi apologist might write. Don't get me wrong – I don't for a moment believe that is what's going on here in any way, shape or form – but that's ''the result'', given the nature of the subject, and we should not minimize how bad it really does sound. That is whay why that context absolutely needs to be either provided, if the word is to remain in use, or a term needs to be used that doesn't read like this, but can stand on its own without context, that very well may be beyomnd thew scope of an article that provides only summary entries. If any form of "euthenasia" is to remain, then, it needs some device to impart that context, such as scare quotes and linking to involuntary euthenasia, but I think "mass murder" suits fine, because it needs no context to pull it back from an unintended meaning.--] (]) 05:45, 19 November 2020 (UTC) |
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I have cleaned up this article again because it seems that a bunch of my edits were incorrectly reverted. Here are my edits:
- Per Misplaced Pages:Manual of Style, for quotations, use only quotation marks (for short quotations) or block quoting (for long ones), not italics.
- remove date links
- remove repeated links (e.g., "genocide") and links to plain English words per WP:REPEATLINK (e.g., nation, disease)
- remove boldface per WP:BOLDFACE
- spell out acronyms (like PKK) on first use per WP:MOS
- use a person's first and last name the first time he/she is mentioned (Tito, Obote, Mao)
Ground Zero (talk) 29 November 2010
Can I edit andcontribute to this this source
Can I edit this source? I really want to contribute to this wikipage.
Edit "Argentina"
At the moment it is stated that the "CPPCG does not include the elimination of political groups (because that group was removed at the behest of Stalin) ". While this maybe should just show the opinion of Judge Carlos Rozanski, it does not represent the more diverse historical facts. Actually, several states opposed the deletion of "political groups" from the convention and the finally successful attempt was led by Iran, Uruguay, and Egypt. Therefore, I think, that the Stalin part should be removed and the discussion of whose fault it is that "political groups" are not part of the Convention should be transferred to the Convention-article.
References
- LeBlanc, Lawrence J. (1988). "The United Nations Genocide Convention and Political Groups: Should the United States Propose an Amendment?". Yale Journal of International Law. 13 (2): 277.
Massacres
This article indeed has many examples of people murdering other people, but massacres of dissidents or rebels is not genocide, nor is people dying it introduced diseases unless such massacres or introduction of disease were intentional acts to exterminate a people. Are we deliberately watering down the definition of genocide for some nefarious means? 120.22.17.10 (talk) 23:16, 3 July 2020 (UTC)
It is a loaded and political question. High above us, humble Wikipedians to decide. If we find a couple of RSes which say smth is a genocide, we construct an argument here, taking POV amd DUE etc. into account. Pls correct me if I am wrong. Zezen (talk) 03:19, 25 August 2020 (UTC)
You mentioned: Determining what historical events constitute a genocide and which are merely criminal or inhuman behavior is not a clear-cut matter.
Two American colloquialisms for that are semigenocide, semiholocaust due to:
- not enough data
- not enough deaths
- not a single criminal side
- not enough international acceptance of the facts
or some of the above. {{subst:xsign:18:40, 9 July 2020 2a02:587:410e:ca26:206c:5769:e396:a34f}}
- They may be colloquialisms to you, but I've never heard them before, and neither has Google. , , so I don;t think they'd be of much use to us. Beyond My Ken (talk) 23:17, 9 July 2020 (UTC)
"Euthanasia" problem use in article
Use of the term 'euthanasia' here is not appropriate.
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Nowhere in that Misplaced Pages article can you find a sense of the word where it could be used appropriately to describe Nazi or similar crimes. Indeed, the Nazi program is discussed there specifically, and categorically stated as euphemistic. |
Mentions of it appear in the above-linked Aktion T4 article in inverted commas, e.g. "euthanasia campaign".
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By including it in this article, within a single sentence that lists
and yet
you create confusion. The contrast of terms is discordant, grotesquely so. And, most importantly, reduces clarity. Perhaps I did not select the most apposite replacement term, but I fail to see why my well-intentioned, and I believe, thoughtful, edit should be so summarily reverted by @The Banner: with no explanation whatsoever. Talk about a warm welcome! If someone has a better term, I'd be grateful if you put it into the sentence instead, but please, please, don't leave it as euthanasia, unmarked!122.105.187.37 (talk) 09:49, 17 September 2020 (UTC)
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While informally we may discuss the Nazi "euthanasia" program, with full understanding that we are speaking of an atrocity, it is unencyclopedic to use it here in this way. A person seeking understanding of Nazi genocide should not need to parse that, read between the lines, or contextualise.
- Reversion rationale - I have reverted your non-neutral edit. It is true that the Germans misused the term euthanasia, but it is the official term in many cases. See for example Aktion T4. The Banner talk 15:06, 17 September 2020 (UTC)
- Non-neutral to remove "euthanasia"?
- Your reply suggests the Nazi term is the only way to be non-POV (!), while saying nothing about how it may be confusing to the reader, as I contend.
- People commonly use and understand euthanasia as in the definition above.
- When people are all on the same page, or there is a fuller discussion around the issue, and Nazi use of the term euthanasia is contextualised, then referring to this mass murder program as “euthanasia" is not problematic.
- When it appears in a list of contemporaneous, associated crimes that contrast starkly with the blunt labels assigned them, as here, then that has the potential to obscure clarity.
- I was surprised to be directed to the Aktion T4 page, as it was evidence from that article that I used to support my change. The opening reads: "Aktion T4 was a postwar name for mass murder by involuntary euthanasia in Nazi Germany". Note here, as I mentioned in my earlier discussion, “euthanasia" appears in that article, but is perfectly clearly contextualised as mass murder, even if involuntary "euthanasia". As mentioned above, several WP articles use the word, but signal its dubious use by putting "-" around it, or other markers of non-standard usage. A similar understanding of the relevance and connotation of the terms is not present in, (and would not really be suitable for) the brief overview in Genocides in history article.
- In any case, I strongly reject that it is a non-neutral edit. My edit (and talk page discussion) was nothing to do with the fact that the Germans misused the term "euthanasia". I would welcome others' views and comments. 122.105.187.37 (talk) 08:54, 18 September 2020 (UTC)
- I too find it utterly jarring to see the use of "euthanasia" as it is employed here, exactly as described above – divorced from context, it reads as indicated: like it's vernacular definition; a reference to humane death, applied to those for whom it is a mercy, which in this context couldn't be more non-neutral. It reads like something a nazi apologist might write. Don't get me wrong – I don't for a moment believe that is what's going on here in any way, shape or form – but that's the result, given the nature of the subject, and we should not minimize how bad it really does sound. That is whay why that context absolutely needs to be either provided, if the word is to remain in use, or a term needs to be used that doesn't read like this, but can stand on its own without context, that very well may be beyomnd thew scope of an article that provides only summary entries. If any form of "euthenasia" is to remain, then, it needs some device to impart that context, such as scare quotes and linking to involuntary euthenasia, but I think "mass murder" suits fine, because it needs no context to pull it back from an unintended meaning.--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 05:45, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
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