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::::*The article looks fine. Where is there a requirement for an article to be 'stable' for DYK? I didn't see it at the top of this page. Did I miss something? (BTW, I added a 'the' to the hook for better grammar) ] (]) 20:41, 6 September 2008 (UTC) ::::*The article looks fine. Where is there a requirement for an article to be 'stable' for DYK? I didn't see it at the top of this page. Did I miss something? (BTW, I added a 'the' to the hook for better grammar) ] (]) 20:41, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
:::] Please give us a break. 4,199 character quote? I've never seen anything as bad as this. Changing my assessment to NO. --] ] 22:02, 6 September 2008 (UTC) :::] Please give us a break. 4,199 character quote? I've never seen anything as bad as this. Changing my assessment to NO. --] ] 22:02, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
:::: - NO indeed, per Poeticbent.--<sub><span style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">]|]</span></sub> 22:23, 6 September 2008 (UTC)


*... that '']'' journalist ''']''' was questioned by police in 1956 for leaking information about the investigation of suspected ] ]? -- new article, self-nom ] (]) 10:28, 6 September 2008 (UTC) *... that '']'' journalist ''']''' was questioned by police in 1956 for leaking information about the investigation of suspected ] ]? -- new article, self-nom ] (]) 10:28, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

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Articles created/expanded on September 6

lengths, date ok, but no in-line cites, so none for either hook ref. Johnbod (talk) 13:53, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

or,

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The Rosendale library, formerly All Saints' Chapel
The Rosendale library, formerly All Saints' Chapel
Abell 39 - WIYN/NOAO/NSF
Abell 39 - WIYN/NOAO/NSF

Articles created/expanded on September 5

Note: the reference is a book. Punkmorten (talk) 22:43, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
Actually the better of the many good refs on the article say they are original 12th century work. They are Romanesque, trather than Romanesque-style. Johnbod (talk) 02:21, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Oh yeah. I removed -style and changed it to 12th century. Thanks for reviewing this so soon. Intothewoods29 (talk) 06:11, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
date, lengths & hook ref ok Johnbod (talk) 13:40, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Thanks Intothewoods29 (talk) 16:49, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
I guess it could be changed to: ...that despite having immigrated from Poland, Dahn Ben-Amotz was often considered the epitome of the concept of the Israeli native "Sabra"? I believe it's within the 200 character limit. -- Nudve (talk) 11:50, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Thanks Nudve. That's exactly the kind of clarification that I had in mind. Tiamut 13:42, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
You're more than welcome. It's actually hookier this way. -- Nudve (talk) 18:12, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on September 4

A wild Giraffa camelopardalis peralta near Koure Niger.
A wild Giraffa camelopardalis peralta near Koure Niger.
The destruction of ‘’L’Orient’’
The destruction of ‘’L’Orient’’
Date, lengths, hook ref ok. Johnbod (talk) 15:21, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
  • I understand your concern about POV, but "unusal" isn't actually quantifiable either. If the word "bizarre" was to be used in the article with in-line citations (and preferably in quotation marks) I don't think it should be a problem. Boston (talk) 21:51, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
I've put a quote in. I've re-wrote the hook as "... that Rory and Paddy's Great British Adventure featured comedians Rory McGrath (pictured) and Paddy McGuinness taking part in "strange but quintessentially British sporting events", such as cheese rolling, pie eating, bog snorkelling and Eton Fives?" ISD (talk) 16:34, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
Great, I think that's just how you should format it. However, that's a very long hook. Can we do with less examples? - Boston (talk) 13:47, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Alt hook :
Refs, date, hook and length, check. Good to go. Tiamut 21:21, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on September 3

  • Well the hook is factually accurate and neutral as can be. It does not blame anyone just states simple historical fact. Regarding revert warring - there is no edit warring, except some attempts to insert false information ("more Poles that Jews died" etc), but those attempts ceased, so normal editing process is on its way. M0RD00R (talk) 16:34, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
  • The article looks fine. Where is there a requirement for an article to be 'stable' for DYK? I didn't see it at the top of this page. Did I miss something? (BTW, I added a 'the' to the hook for better grammar) Malick78 (talk) 20:41, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Please give us a break. 4,199 character quote? I've never seen anything as bad as this. Changing my assessment to NO. --Poeticbent talk 22:02, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Removal of my NPOV tag, further addition of controversial material - NO indeed, per Poeticbent.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 22:23, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
The Untertorbrücke in Berne, Switzerland, as seen from the Nydeggbrücke
The Untertorbrücke in Berne, Switzerland, as seen from the Nydeggbrücke
  • This article's hook is unsourced or too long or there are other content issues Expansion not five-fold. Prior length 950 characters; current length 3,786. Also lacks inline cite for the "Father of the Concorde" point, and I don't see the phrase in the internet references listed.Cbl62 (talk) 06:33, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Alternatively:
... that the 110-foot fresco The Age of Reptiles is the largest painting on the subject of natural history in the world? (Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs 02:52, 4 September 2008 (UTC))
... that in 1902 Isabel Gonzalez, a single Puerto Rican mother, challenged the Government of the United States and helped pave the way for all Puerto Ricans to be recognized as citizens of the United States? Tony the Marine (talk) 01:10, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
This article's hook is unsourced or too long or there are other content issues Article is too short, at only 908 characters. —97198 (talk) 07:20, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
Fixed. Aridd (talk) 21:35, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
It has potential, although I'd prefer a word other than "controversial"; and the article lacks inline citations; I've added a slew of fact tags, if you cite these sources - and add one or two more sources, I think it could be featured. Sherurcij 20:24, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
I added some, and removed some bits I couldn't find sources for (I copied this straight from the French Misplaced Pages). It could do with a fact check before being featured, as well as a thorough copyedit. how do you turn this on 20:59, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
If I may jump in? I don't like to be pedantic, but Edward was not Edward VIII at the time of his marriage as he had already abdicated. And I'm not sure about Wallis's surname - did she not revert (vague recollection here, may be wrong) to Wallis Warfield? George The Dragon (talk) 21:35, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
You're probably right, though this may be better discussed on the article talk page, then updated here. I know he wasn't King, that's for sure. But I wasn't sure what else to call him how do you turn this on 21:37, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
He was already Duke of Windsor when he married, so that ought to be how he's named here. This would appear to be a perfectly valid time to use the word "controversial", might be worth linking it to Edward VIII abdication crisis. David Underdown (talk) 09:55, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
No it wasn't! ALT:*... that the Gothic Collegiate church in Wislica, Poland was built in 1350 on the foundations of two earlier Romanesque churches? Johnbod (talk) 18:00, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
Article length, date, hook ref ok, but really needs a ce for English before hitting the main page. Johnbod (talk) 18:00, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
Oh yes, I messed up Roman and Romanesque. Sorry, I am still learning. Anyway, more help is appreciated. Tymek (talk) 18:22, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
copyedited & now ok to go. Johnbod (talk) 13:31, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
Date & length good; offline refs assumed good too. Nice hook! —97198 (talk) 14:11, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
Comment I just wikilinked road racing cyclist and national criterium and road race champion. However, I advise you to retain the surprise element (that she's not actually from America's Next Top Model). Mspraveen (talk) 14:36, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
I thought this would be an interesting hook: ... Brooke Miller, a road racing cyclist and the current US national criterium and road race champion, has a PhD in evolutionary biology? And If someone really wanted to play up name confusion, there may be an April 1 hook here somewhere. (By the way, currently at 1468 bytes prose - technically could use one more sentence to meet the 1500 byte guideline.) Gimmetrow 20:52, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
Added another paragraph so this should be OK now, I like your hook.Thaf (talk) 11:14, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
File:443-OE3-Gloster-Grouse-3-ES.jpg
This article's hook is unsourced or too long or there are other content issues I've got this expansion at 885 > 3240 characters, only 3.7x. —97198 (talk) 13:30, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
Date and length okay; offline ref accepted in good faith. —97198 (talk) 07:29, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
This article's hook is unsourced or too long or there are other content issues 230-character hook - shorten to under 200. —97198 (talk) 07:18, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

REDUCED IN LENGTH NOW Billy Hathorn (talk) 21:26, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

This article's hook is unsourced or too long or there are other content issues 238-character hook - shorten to under 200. —97198 (talk) 07:18, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on September 2

  • ... that Samuel Johnson's London, his first major work, contains the beginnings of his views on literature, politics and ethics? self-nom, new pages (with one "early life" explained - All pages contain information pulled over from other pages, but contain a lot of new information (over 3k worth each, plus headers, etc). I talked to some people about a dispute before - Johnbod, and Art LaPella are pushing forth an "unwritten" rule to say that content like this must be a five fold expansion above the information pulled elsewhere. I believe that there is no difference if I added in that information now or if I were to wait 5 days after to add it in after it went through DYK, especially when there is enough new information to warrant it as a topic without any problem. The only page that would be a problem here is the "early life" page, as the rest are all new and written together with the information placed on the main Samuel Johnson page and are not duplicate.) This is all a question on if early life should be bolded or not. The other three are new and not a content split, but pages created per FAC and then linked into the main page later. Ottava Rima (talk) 13:56, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
Indeed - discussion as to whether splits are allowed at all, or must be expanded x5, here. Comments welcome. Johnbod (talk) 02:45, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
I've restored based on improper procedure by John. I have already sufficiently proven that Art and John are using too narrow of a definition of "split", which Misplaced Pages has three terms (split, spin out, and spin off) all meaning the same - a secondary article that contains information pertinent to the first. I have already demonstrated how this definition applies to a large proportion of new articles, and that their understanding of the definition/use is problematic. I have already pointed out the logical fallacy of saying that an article should be "expanded 5x" when you can easily create the page and then import the text in after it reaches DYK. Furthermore, DYK is to promote all new pages that are notable, meet the minimum requirement of new text (i.e. 1,500 characters), and has appropriate citations for verifiability. Ottava Rima (talk) 19:46, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Article uses bare URLs for citations, is unwikified, and has other issues. The primary editor does not seem willing to address these concerns. - Boston (talk) 21:32, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- article says the seats came from Briggs Stadium, which appears to be an older name for Tiger Stadium. I suppose we should be consistent and change the hook to read "Briggs". Otherwise, size and refs check, not a stub -> almost ready to go. Truthanado (talk) 01:28, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
I helped with the hook (Dincher did the article and all the hard work). If "Tiger Stadium" is changed to "Briggs Stadium", I would make it clearer by changing it to "that were taken from Detroit's Briggs Stadium?" the alternate hook would be
Either hook is fine with me. I used Briggs Stadium in the article because that is what it was known as at the time. Briggs Stadium and Tiger Stadium are one in the same. Dincher (talk) 10:38, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- alternate hook is preferred, could be a bit shorter -> good to go Truthanado (talk) 22:22, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
Shorten as/if needed. Not sure what to cut. Dincher (talk) 23:20, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- size and refs check out, not a stub --> good to go Truthanado (talk) 01:19, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
Object. This wording is vague and subjective. How about this:
This article's hook is unsourced or too long or there are other content issues Article has no inline citations. —97198 (talk) 07:34, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- According to the article, the record was definitely broken, so "possibly" in the hook is misplaced. How about rephrasing it. Otherwise, size and refs check out, not a stub -> ready to go after rephrasing. Truthanado (talk) 01:44, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
I changed it around. Is that okay? Izzy007 Talk 17:04, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- rephrased hook is okay -> good to go Truthanado (talk) 01:50, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
I agree that the sources are legit, but the cherry-picking of information gives a one-sided view, with no criticism included whatsoever. I’m tempted to say it’s using an in-universe perspective to describe fiction. Here’s a few quotes:
  • "...to reach out to the 45% of Americans who believe that God created humans as they currently exist within the past ten thousand years and that they do not descend from apes."
  • "Dinosaurs became extinct following the Great Flood and that a pair of young dinosaurs accompanied elephants and lions on Noah's Ark." (This might be just faulty grammar, but as it stands it's ambiguous whether this is stated as fact or as the museum’s view.)
  • "...to show that changes believed by mainstream scientists to take millions of years can occur in as short a period of time as hours or days."
This article seems like little else that a Coatrack to promote creationism. I'd very much like to hear from others too. Lampman (talk) 17:27, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
I have reworded the last of these two slightly & I see you have added forthright mainstream criticism, so I really don't see a problem now. Johnbod (talk) 18:10, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Yeah, I decided to take it to task, so in its current state I'll change my opinion to . Lampman (talk) 18:19, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
The ref is on google books; it opens slap-bang at the top of the page referenced. I have however added the page number. Ironholds 10:07, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
No you did not. You added the chapter number; I corrected it. Neither one of the sources, however, supports the claim that this was a rare practice at the time, or, as the article says, that it became common practice in 1346. DNB simply considers it evidence that he was the senior justice. Lampman (talk) 21:30, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
My apologies; I was assuming it was the page number. The Plea rolls article notes that files were kept by the Custos Brevium, an organisation established in 1246; on the matter of how it establishes the hook, if you read the page offered as a reference from the book it says that he had earned "such a reputation as a judge that his plea rolls were preserved", showing both that it was a rare practice and that the preservation was due to his reputation. An earlier practice on the same page mentions that, of the core 15 judges at the time, Pattishall was the most respected. Ironholds 22:06, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
  • ... that Kapala, the tantric’s skull bowl has a link with Charnel ground or Sky burial practice in Tibet and the derivative name Kapalik well known as a tantric in India. the stub article Kapala with 1,824 bytes has been expanded to 14,558 bytes.--Nvvchar (talk) 06:26, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Bolded Kapala. —97198 (talk) 06:45, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Is it accepted or rejected?--Nvvchar (talk) 12:17, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
It doesn't meet the rules as it is. The hook is not well phrased, or linked, & the Kapalik part is referenced, via a mirror site, only to another WP article. There are plenty of potential hooks here & I suggest you read the rules & try another version of this or a different one. Date & article size ok. Johnbod (talk) 18:10, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
  • ... that Lonar Lake in the Buldana district of Maharashtra, India, a unique salt water lake in basaltic formation, is an explosion crater lake created by a meteor weighing about 2 million tonnes hitting the earth some 50,000 ± 6,000 years ago? Nvvchar (talk) 02:49, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
This article's hook is unsourced or too long or there are other content issues Hook is 239 characters - shorten to under 200. —97198 (talk) 06:19, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Pls wikify the hook while you shorten it. Thx. --74.14.18.83 (talk) 07:49, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
The artcile has been shortened from 15,336 bytes to 12134 bite. I was under the impression that artciles could be upto 30 kb size.--Nvvchar (talk) 12:17, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Hook is modified as -
The article has been shortened? Why? There is no cap on article size, but there is a cap of 200 characters on hook length. BTW, you may want to apply {{cite web}} in the article. You may also consider moving Lonar lake to Lonar Lake, and merging with Lonar crater. --74.14.18.83 (talk) 13:34, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Lonar lake is created under the category of List of Lakes in Asia under the sub list of List of Lakes in India and I consider it desirable to maintain the identity of the lake since it is popular in India as a lake rather than a crater, and the lake may also be considered for recognition as a Ramsar site for conservation. Lonar crater is a shorter article (dealing with geological aspects only) and it may not be appropriate to merge Lonar lake with it. Should I now create another article with the title Lonar Lake? As regards shortening the article, I got confused between Hook and article. I will restore it to the original size.Please consider retaining the article as Lonar lake.--Nvvchar (talk) 15:47, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Please don't create another article with the title Lonar Lake. There should be one article about the lake, not one about the lake and another about the Lake. The only reason I capitalized the word "Lake" in the title is because the word "Lake" is normally capitalized in that context – for example, Great Bear Lake not "Great Bear lake". If that rule is different in India, then maybe this is a WP:ENGVAR situation. In either case, the suggestion was to move the article – that is, change the title from "Lonar lake" to "Lonar Lake" – certainly not to write a duplicate article. Art LaPella (talk) 21:33, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Right. Pls see WP:MOVE. --74.14.18.39 (talk) 05:34, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
Date, length ok. Hook ref on AGF (& I remember it is right). Johnbod (talk) 03:02, 3 September 2008 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on September 1

This is only a 3.3x expansion, so feel free to reject. But since it was a pretty extensive expansion and there has been discussion that there are few life sciences DYKs, I figured I'd submit and let the admins decide whether to use it. Rlendog (talk) 19:59, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
The Nevada in drydock sometime in 1935; note the triple gun turret.
The Nevada in drydock sometime in 1935; note the triple gun turret.
Interesting nom, and nice that the Nevada article is developing, but it does not meet DYK criterion for a 5X expansion within 5 days. Measurement of 5X criterion is to based on number of characters in main text, which i didnt count. But in raw size article now at 19,000 or so bytes, was at 13,721 on 12 August 2008. doncram (talk) 19:14, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Didn't know what the specific count was...I just knew that I had expanded it... Sorry for the inconvenience! the_ed17 22:06, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Uplit stalactites in St. Michael's Cave.
Uplit stalactites in St. Michael's Cave.
Or:
—new article, self nom by Fvasconcellos (t·c) 01:25, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Article has a number of in-line citations, but I'm uncomfortable seeing Voith as the only citation that suggests it is the world's most powerful. Commercial producers often claim such things, and should only be believed if third-party sources agree with the claim. Sherurcij 20:28, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
Mastrchf91 & Nlu, becareful where you post your comments. I'm now moving the picture for the following hook where it should be. --74.14.18.83 (talk) 17:05, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
This article wasn't created or fivefold expanded recently. Olaf Davis | Talk 16:07, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
It was indeed expanded in the last few days, just not 5X yet. Please continue typing, Ominae. --74.14.18.83 (talk) 17:05, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
I did some expanding and all. Not sure if it's enough. Ominae (talk) 23:22, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
Sorry. Counting "prose only" (see #Instructions), I count 1807/1120=1.6x not 5x. Art LaPella (talk) 00:35, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Should I fix the proposed DYK sentence then? If not, let me know. Not sure on what to do next. Ominae (talk) 01:03, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
No, the problem isn't the sentence (although I just linked "JSDF"). It's that every DYK sentence should introduce an appropriate article. For details, see User:Art LaPella/No qualifying article. Did You Know is intended to introduce new articles. A fivefold expansion is considered new enough. A 1.6-fold expansion is not considered new enough. So you might want to triple the article size (or more precisely, triple its prose portion) within 5 days. Or you could start over with a new, 1500-character article. Art LaPella (talk) 04:12, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
I'll see if I can expand and dig more info, but I kinda doubt it since it's a Japanese firearm. Nevertheless, I'll try my best to do it. Will anyone check it soon since I'll try and increase it. I looked at the the DYK rules regarding prose. Sorry, I guess I was a bit confused. XP Ominae (talk) 07:46, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Now it's 2795/1120=2.5x. If the prose rule is confusing, then "Unwritten" rule A2 will either help explain the prose rule, or else confuse you further. Art LaPella (talk) 21:33, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Will this be accepted? Thanks. Ominae (talk) 04:16, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
No, sorry, not as long as the length is 2795, for a 2.5x expansion. The rule is 5x expansion. So you might want to double the prose portion of that article, or start a new one. Art LaPella (talk) 00:15, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
Length, reference and history verified. Daniel Case (talk) 16:29, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Length okay. "Bizarre"-ness of titles is subjective, and word is not sourced, does not appear in article. Could you compose a different hook? doncram (talk) 16:29, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
OK, what about something simple like "... that the BBC 7 sitcom Knocker looks at the life of a down-trodden market researcher?" ISD (talk) 16:49, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
Hook sounds promising, but when I look for source and compare 2nd ref to plot summary section, it shows very close paraphrasing (using phrases like "revolves around the unfortunate" and "accident prone" without quoting, and same structure). I don't know how to evaluate the adequacy of this sourcing for DYK; I'd rather it was rewritten in your own words or using explicit quotes. doncram (talk) 05:50, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
I say keep the original as "have titles such as", because it's definitely unusual on its own, no word to explicit the bizarreness are needed, really. Circeus (talk) 19:04, 3 September 2008 (UTC)

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Articles created/expanded on August 31

1.3K of prose. Falls short. Mspraveen (talk) 13:01, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Further expanded. M0RD00R (talk) 13:47, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
This article's hook is unsourced or too long or there are other content issues Article is just short at about 1440 characters. —97198 (talk) 06:42, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
It's also marked as a stub dm (talk) 19:08, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
People get fired for failing to do what their boss told them to do -- all the time. Need to be clear that neither the Empress nor the eunuch was supposed to be the chancellor's boss. --74.14.18.83 (talk) 17:19, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
This is the same exact hook. Daniel Case (talk) 02:36, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Actually, no. It added "the corrupt" (which was added to address 74.14.18.83's point). --Nlu (talk) 03:38, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Saying someone is "corrupt" does not in any way address that, nor incorporate your response. The hook should make clear, as you said, that neither person was his boss. Daniel Case (talk) 16:32, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Clarifying it would require the hook to be way, way too long. It should be clear already that a chancellor, by the virtue of the office, reported directly to the emperor. --Nlu (talk) 17:12, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
  • I respectfully, though nonetheless strongly, disagree. The main source is Trustees of Reservations website. Other sources are New England Forestry Foundation and Valley Viewpoint newspaper. The bits cited to a Tripod site are minor reiteration of facts stated elsewhere, plus a colorful quotation from someone whose been there to Bear's Den Falls and gushes about "this amphitheater of Mother Nature". It's fine to use a source like that when the article could stand without it -- and it could very easily, it would only be less enjoyable to read. I would be appreciative if another editor would please review this. Thanks. - Boston (talk) 13:39, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Sorry, but neither are new enough or expanded enough.--King Bedford I 10:16, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
but breuner's is brand spankin' new, i just finished writing it!?
No, according to Breuner Home Furnishings editing history, it was created August 10 and over half complete by August 15. "New enough" means 5 days (see #Instructions.) Art LaPella (talk) 23:40, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

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  • That article was written in 2007 and last updated in February this year. But either way, the four main criminals have been convicted and their convictions upheld. Their crimes took place in 2001 so the WP page isn't really hasty:) Malick78 (talk) 18:29, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
  • The article you link to says the 4 people have been convicted but authorities are investigating other people. The WP page says that 4 people have been convicted but authorities are investigating other people. Where's the problem? It's accurately reporting the situation, isn't it? Stick a warning at the top saying that the page covers ongoing events, but apart from that the page is fine. We can cover developing events you know. Malick78 (talk) 11:50, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
  • For those interested, Poeticbent has failed to provide a current source on the article's discussion page sourcing his concerns. I would humbly therefore say the article is fine for DYK. Other views would be welcome:) Malick78 (talk) 05:52, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
  1. The article has a delete template on it. This will need to be resolved
  2. I don't understand the description of the crime. The motive is not clear
- held until "AFD" is resolved Victuallers (talk) 22:08, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

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