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::::*The article looks fine. Where is there a requirement for an article to be 'stable' for DYK? I didn't see it at the top of this page. Did I miss something? (BTW, I added a 'the' to the hook for better grammar) ] (]) 20:41, 6 September 2008 (UTC) | ::::*The article looks fine. Where is there a requirement for an article to be 'stable' for DYK? I didn't see it at the top of this page. Did I miss something? (BTW, I added a 'the' to the hook for better grammar) ] (]) 20:41, 6 September 2008 (UTC) | ||
:::] Please give us a break. 4,199 character quote? I've never seen anything as bad as this. Changing my assessment to NO. --] ] 22:02, 6 September 2008 (UTC) | :::] Please give us a break. 4,199 character quote? I've never seen anything as bad as this. Changing my assessment to NO. --] ] 22:02, 6 September 2008 (UTC) | ||
:::: - NO indeed, per Poeticbent.--<sub><span style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">]|]</span></sub> 22:23, 6 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
*... that '']'' journalist ''']''' was questioned by police in 1956 for leaking information about the investigation of suspected ] ]? -- new article, self-nom ] (]) 10:28, 6 September 2008 (UTC) | *... that '']'' journalist ''']''' was questioned by police in 1956 for leaking information about the investigation of suspected ] ]? -- new article, self-nom ] (]) 10:28, 6 September 2008 (UTC) |
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Candidate entries
Articles created/expanded on September 6
- ...that the main candidate to replace Pope Callistus III died two days before the opening of the papal conclave, 1458? -- (self-nom). CarlosPn (talk) 23:46, 6 September 2008 (CET).
- ... that the molybdenum mines at Knaben was the target for 130 American B-17 bombers from the Eighth Air Force in a raid in November 1943? -- (self-nom). Oceanh (talk) 20:46, 6 September 2008 (UTC).
- ...that the Alliance for Open Society International ran drug rehabilitation programs for heroin addicts in Uzbekistan, Tajikistan, and Kyrgyzstan? - self nom by Boston (talk) 20:38, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Chicago Transit Authority has to keep the closed 58th station in operable condition because federal funds were used in its renovation? --New page, self-nom by TheCatalyst31 20:20, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Washington State Route 339 is actually a passenger-only ferry? Self nom, expansion. --Admrb♉ltz (talk) 19:21, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the National Cartoon Museum wandered between four homes before its acquisition by Ohio State University? (new article by User:Clarityfiend; Nom by dm (talk) 17:48, 6 September 2008 (UTC) )
- ... that the science-based panel game The What in the World? Quiz guest stars appearances from The Naked Scientists? Self-nom by ISD (talk) 17:36, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ...that Air Group Six was the Navy’s only carrier-based air group to carry out three complete tours of duty during World War II? New article, written by Marcd30319 ... the_ed17 16:02, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Tang Dynasty judge Pei Zunqing spared a group of soldiers accused of treason by pointing out they had neither money nor talent to carry out a rebellion? (self-nomination) --Nlu (talk) 15:53, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that when Singaporean Paralympic swimmer Theresa Goh took part in the ISMWSF World Wheelchair Games in 2003, she won six gold medals in the backstroke, breaststroke, butterfly, and freestyle events? — Cheers, JackLee 15:04, 6 September 2008 (UTC) (created and nominated article).
- ...that King Rother is the earliest known minstrel fairy tale? new article by --Doug Coldwell 14:41, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that actresses Jane Fonda and Liv Ullman were involved in a campaign for the release of refusenik Ida Nudel from exile? -- expanded, self nom. -- Nudve (talk) 12:09, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Dublin Virginal Manuscript shows examples of developing counterpoint in some pieces? New article, written by user:Nick Michael --nom by Gwib (talk) 08:53, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ALT... that the Dublin Virginal Manuscript represents an important step in the development of secular English keyboard music? New article, written by user:Nick Michael --Gwib (talk) 08:54, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- lengths, date ok, but no in-line cites, so none for either hook ref. Johnbod (talk) 13:53, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that poet David Wagoner's novel The Escape Artist was made into a film by executive producer Francis Ford Coppola? -- new article self-nom by —D. Monack 07:50, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Coast Range Arc in Washington, British Columbia, Alaska Panhandle and Yukon is the largest continental volcanic arc fossil in the world and the largest granite projection in North America? -- new article self-nom by Black Tusk (talk) 06:57, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that MV Westward, "arguably Seattle’s most famous motor yacht," was modeled after a salmon cannery tender. - Jmabel | Talk 06:48, 6 September 2008 (UTC) (self-nom)
- ... that architect Albert C. Martin sucessfully defended his design of the 28-story Los Angeles City Hall (pictured) against those who argued the city government could fit into the first four floors? new article, self nom. Cbl62 (talk) 06:45, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ...that though small in size, the underground drug market in Bahrain is growing?
or,
- ...that much of the crime in Bahrain is committed by a large South Asian population of guest workers?
or,
- ...that many Bangladeshi women who went to the Persian Gulf for working in legitimate businesses have been forced into prostitution in Bahrain? (new article, self-nom) Otolemur crassicaudatus (talk) 11:30, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that All Saints' Chapel (pictured), now the Rosendale, New York, public library, is faced in locally-produced Rosendale cement? Self-nom Daniel Case (talk) 20:50, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ...that the planetary nebula Abell 39 (pictured) is unusually spherical, yet its central star is offset from the center? Self-nom WilliamKF (talk) 21:12, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ...that John C. Ostlund, a Wyoming state senator and 1978 gubernatorial nominee, lost his eyesight to diabetes and penned his autobiography to benefit the training of seeing-eye dogs?--self-nom Billy Hathorn (talk)
- ...that Wawer massacre around Christmas 1939 in occupied Poland is considered one of the first large massacres of Polish civilians by Nazi Germany? --self-nom by Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 22:20, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 5
- ...that adults in septic shock who have low blood pressure despite adequate resuscitation can be treated with hydrocortisone if critical illness–related corticosteroid insufficiency is suspected? new article self-nom by Steven Fruitsmaak (Reply) 17:10, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the village of Anasartha, located in Western Syria and today known as Khanasser, derived its water supply until 1975 from a 12-kilometre long Byzantine-era qanat? (self-nom) Tiamut 09:27, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that David Block's 2005 book Baseball Before We Knew It, which brings fresh new evidence of the origins of baseball into play, received the 2006 Seymour Medal from the Society for American Baseball Research? new article self-nom by AdjustShift (talk) 08:19, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... it is believed Julius Caesar took a nap under the Caesarsboom yew in West Flanders? - I'm not sure this is long enough yet...self nom Boston (talk) 02:51, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- 1496 characters, so another word would be symbolically important... Art LaPella (talk) 03:02, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- I added a few words. Thanks! Boston (talk) 15:02, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Tang Dynasty chancellor Diwu Qi minted coins that were valued at 10 and 50 times ordinary coins and was blamed for the subsequent precipitous rise in food prices? (self-nomination, expansion) --Nlu (talk) 02:00, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Brazilian government turned down $40 million in anti-HIV/AIDS funding in 2005 because the U.S. Government requires all recipients to sign an anti-prostitution pledge? -- self-nom AxelBoldt (talk) 00:25, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length, date & reference verified.Cbl62 (talk) 06:11, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that television presenter Dan Børge Akerø started his career as a research fellow at the International Peace Research Institute, Oslo? -- self-nom by Punkmorten (talk) 22:43, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- Note: the reference is a book. Punkmorten (talk) 22:43, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length and date ok, ref accepted on good faith. Lampman (talk) 22:57, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Bronco Lane presented his severed toes to the National Army Museum? --new article, self-nom by Kernel Saunters (talk) 22:29, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that carved Romanesque stone heads (pictured) were added to the walls of Temple Cronan during renovation in the 12th century as decoration? --new article, self-nom by Intothewoods29 (talk) 21:40, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- Actually the better of the many good refs on the article say they are original 12th century work. They are Romanesque, trather than Romanesque-style. Johnbod (talk) 02:21, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Oh yeah. I removed -style and changed it to 12th century. Thanks for reviewing this so soon. Intothewoods29 (talk) 06:11, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Actually the better of the many good refs on the article say they are original 12th century work. They are Romanesque, trather than Romanesque-style. Johnbod (talk) 02:21, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- date, lengths & hook ref ok Johnbod (talk) 13:40, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that work by cartoonist Rube Goldberg and humorist Will Rogers was distributed by the McNaught Syndicate only months after it was created in 1922? --new article, self-nom by Fram (talk) 20:41, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that incidents of violent crime against foreign citizens are rare in Kuwait? (new article, self-nom) Otolemur crassicaudatus (talk) 20:23, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that "Spirit in the Night" was the first of three songs from Bruce Springsteen's debut album Greetings from Asbury Park, N.J. that was covered by Manfred Mann's Earth Band? -- new article self-nom by Rlendog (talk) 17:40, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Tang Dynasty chancellor Li Kui had once referred to future chancellor Yuan Zai as the son of a water deer or a rodent, drawing Yuan's eventual retaliation? (self-nomination) --Nlu (talk) 15:46, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that La Princesse, a giant mechanical spider, roamed the streets of Liverpool, England as part of the 2008 European City of Culture celebrations? self nomination. Roisterdoister (talk) 13:02, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- Please note: some of the sources cited mis-spell the name as La Princess (see article talk page for clarification); I also put the hook in the past tense as in 5 days' time she'll be gone (stomped on? Raided?) Roisterdoister (talk) 13:02, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length, date & reference verified. Hook and photographs both very nice.Cbl62 (talk) 06:06, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Dahn Ben-Amotz was often considered the epitome of the concept of the Israeli "Sabra"? -- New article, self nom. -- Nudve (talk) 09:11, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- Could you add something about the paradox of his reputation as a sabra in the hook? Sabra (person) generally refers to those Jews born in Israel and not those who immigrated there, as Ben-Amotz did. Tiamut 11:21, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- I guess it could be changed to: ...that despite having immigrated from Poland, Dahn Ben-Amotz was often considered the epitome of the concept of the Israeli native "Sabra"? I believe it's within the 200 character limit. -- Nudve (talk) 11:50, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length, date and references verified. Tiamut 13:42, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks Nudve. That's exactly the kind of clarification that I had in mind. Tiamut 13:42, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- You're more than welcome. It's actually hookier this way. -- Nudve (talk) 18:12, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks Nudve. That's exactly the kind of clarification that I had in mind. Tiamut 13:42, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that American writer, carpenter, and former Montague Bookmill proprietor David Lovelace published a 2008 memoir titled Scattershot: My Bipolar Family, about his family's battles with bipolar disorder?
- Nom by Once on a vending machine (talk · contribs). Hook is also too long at 290 characters. —97198 (talk) 06:24, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- He has since shortened it to 206 characters. Art LaPella (talk) 03:02, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- If we are to have a hook about a written work, at least there should be an article about the author. Punkmorten (talk) 22:45, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- I disagree. I don't think the author should have an article. His book is unique, and describes himself and his family. The interest is his book. Keep it simple, stupid. Once on a vending machine (talk) 22:57, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- You really know how to speak your case don't you. Punkmorten (talk) 23:39, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- But "Keep it simple, stupid" is a famous concept. Maybe it doesn't translate internationally. I just meant to keep it simple, all info about David Lovelace and his book in one article. Once on a vending machine (talk) 23:46, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- You really know how to speak your case don't you. Punkmorten (talk) 23:39, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- I disagree. I don't think the author should have an article. His book is unique, and describes himself and his family. The interest is his book. Keep it simple, stupid. Once on a vending machine (talk) 22:57, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- Hook now at exactly 200 characters, Length, date, and reference verified. --Captain-tucker (talk) 11:42, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Allen "Puddler" Harris, a pianist from Lake Charles, Louisiana, played in the bands of Ricky Nelson, Conway Twitty, and Jimmie Davis in a career that has spanned some five decades?---self-nom Billy Hathorn (talk) 01:39, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 4
- ... that the Croatian eurodance group Colonia won the first annual Eurodance contest with its song "Za tvoje snene oči"? -- Article expanded fivefold and self-nom by Grk1011/Stephen (talk) 16:11, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Dosso Partial Faunal Reserve of western Niger is the seasonal home of the last self-sustaining wild West African Giraffe (Giraffa camelopardalis peralta) population? -- new article self-nom by T L Miles (talk) 05:08, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Admiral Sir Francis Geary (pictured) missed out on the rewards from the victory at Louisbourg, and then missed the victory at Quiberon Bay? Benea (talk) 03:15, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- slightly more left-field:
- ... that Admiral Sir Francis Geary (pictured) was a noted bellringer, at St Bride's Church, Fleet Street, London? additonal reffed info added to the article by me, David Underdown (talk) 12:37, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that La púrpura de la rosa is the first known opera to be written in and performed in the Americas? new article self nom. This is the 5,000 article for WP:WikiProject Opera! Credit should also go to User:Kleinzach and User:Voceditenore. Nrswanson (talk) 03:27, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... after emigrating from England at age 18, Lucien Price "immortalized fond memories" of Kent and wrote for the Boston Globe until his death at age 81? self nom Boston (talk) 01:35, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ...ALT:... that "Woolwick" was a pseudonym for Kent in the writing of Lucien Price? Boston (talk) 13:34, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in the 1890s, Moloundou, Cameroon was "one of the richest rubber areas of Africa"? New article by --I'm an Editorofthewiki 00:19, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- … that Captain Benjamin Hallowell gave his friend Lord Nelson a coffin made from the French flagship destroyed at the Battle of the Nile (pictured), and Nelson was buried in it after he was killed at the Battle of Trafalgar? New article, self-nom by Karenjc 22:18, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Google has released a public beta version of a web browser, Google Chrome? SBIT (talk) 21:28, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Another Google Chrome hook is listed under September 1. Art LaPella (talk) 22:57, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the 12th-century St Wulfran's Church, Ovingdean (pictured) is one of only two extant churches in England with that dedication? ~ New article; self-nom by Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 20:47, 4 September 2008 (UTC). This is another pic of it.
- Date, lengths, hook ref ok. Johnbod (talk) 15:21, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Gilbert of Preston, despite serving as a royal justice since 1240, was not given a regular salary until 1253? new article, self-nom, 1570 chars. Ironholds 18:14, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length, date & ref ok. Lampman (talk) 22:54, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the New Jersey State Museum discovered that its replica of Hadrosaurus, unearthed in New Jersey in 1858, had been displayed for decades with an incorrect skull? -- new article by Alansohn (talk) 18:13, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Rory and Paddy's Great British Adventure featured comedians Rory McGrath (pictured) and Paddy McGuinness taking part in Britain's most bizarre sports, such as cheese rolling, pie eating, bog snorkelling and Eton Fives? Self-nom by ISD (talk) 17:57, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- "most bizarre" is certainly not quantifiable, I'd suggest "unusual". Sherurcij 20:57, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- I understand your concern about POV, but "unusal" isn't actually quantifiable either. If the word "bizarre" was to be used in the article with in-line citations (and preferably in quotation marks) I don't think it should be a problem. Boston (talk) 21:51, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- I've put a quote in. I've re-wrote the hook as "... that Rory and Paddy's Great British Adventure featured comedians Rory McGrath (pictured) and Paddy McGuinness taking part in "strange but quintessentially British sporting events", such as cheese rolling, pie eating, bog snorkelling and Eton Fives?" ISD (talk) 16:34, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- Great, I think that's just how you should format it. However, that's a very long hook. Can we do with less examples? - Boston (talk) 13:47, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that before comedienne Gladys Morgan could broadcast on BBC radio she first had to prove that she was Welsh? Self-nom by ♦ Jongleur ♦ 17:55, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Alt hook :
- ... that Welsh comedienne Gladys Morgan was renowned for her toothless, ear-splitting, infectious laugh?
- Alt hook :
- ... that Indian film Tahaan was the first to be filmed in the strife-torn region of Kashmir after a gap of 18 years? -- new article, self-nom by Mspraveen (talk) 16:32, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Refs, date, hook and length, check. Good to go. Tiamut 21:21, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Les Gibbard was accused of being a traitor after a cartoon he drew regarding the sinking of the Belgrano was published by The Guardian? -- self nom Dick G (talk) 06:37, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that if a National Football League player is placed on waivers after the completion of his fourth season, he becomes a free agent immediately?--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 06:22, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that although Kim Oler and Alison Hubbard's musical tracks for Little Women won the Richard Rodgers award in 1998, those exact tracks did not make it to Broadway? New article, self-nom. Mess around with the guy in shades all you like - don't mess around with the girl in gloves! (talk) 04:45, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the 2008 Kerry bogslide was described as "one of the most frightening and overwhelming events ever witnessed"? Self-nom, --Candlewicke (Talk) 02:39, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that although Mackerel scad are found from Nova Scotia to Rio de Janeiro, they do not seem common in the Gulf of Mexico? selfnom Ryan shell (talk) 01:57, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that although the mushroom Russula delica is technically edible, its smell of fish or bugs and acrid taste make it fairly poor fare? - User:Luridiformis & Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:24, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that after the Battle of Chmielnik, a major victory for the Mongols during their invasion of Poland, inhabitants of the Polish capital of Kraków abandoned their city? --self-nom by Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 01:58, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Ctenosaura bakeri of Utila Island is the only species of spiny-tail iguana to inhabit brackish mangroves, being forced there due to competition from a larger species, the Black spiny-tail iguana? -- Article expanded fivefold and self-nom by Mike - Μολὼν λαβέ 06:44, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 3
- ... that the Massacre of the Aqui Brigade provided the historical context for the novel Captain Corelli's Mandolin, which later became a Hollywood film? (created and self nom) Dr.K. (talk) 21:45, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Alternate:... that the Massacre of the Aqui Brigade was the largest prisoner of war massacre of WWII? Dr.K. (talk) 22:00, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in June, 1919 US President Woodrow Wilson appointed a commission, led by Henry Morgenthau, Sr. to investigate the Lwów pogrom and other excesses against the Jewish population of Poland? -- Article expanded fivefold by User:Boodlesthecat and User:Piotrus. Nom by M0RD00R (talk) 14:04, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- As one of the editors involved in expanding and rewriting, I object to a) DYKing (not the most neutral of the hooks) and b) more importantly, due the article being unstable (edit warring, see related 3RR report) and still not neutral. I am afraid this one needs to cool down a little.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 16:24, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Well the hook is factually accurate and neutral as can be. It does not blame anyone just states simple historical fact. Regarding revert warring - there is no edit warring, except some attempts to insert false information ("more Poles that Jews died" etc), but those attempts ceased, so normal editing process is on its way. M0RD00R (talk) 16:34, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- The article is a subject of a fierce edit war with massive breaches of Misplaced Pages:Article development guidelines. --Poeticbent talk 19:37, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- The article looks fine. Where is there a requirement for an article to be 'stable' for DYK? I didn't see it at the top of this page. Did I miss something? (BTW, I added a 'the' to the hook for better grammar) Malick78 (talk) 20:41, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Please give us a break. 4,199 character quote? I've never seen anything as bad as this. Changing my assessment to NO. --Poeticbent talk 22:02, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Removal of my NPOV tag, further addition of controversial material - NO indeed, per Poeticbent.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 22:23, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Daily Mail journalist Rodney Hallworth was questioned by police in 1956 for leaking information about the investigation of suspected serial killer Dr John Bodkin Adams? -- new article, self-nom Malick78 (talk) 10:28, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... Mike Francesa, host of the new radio show Mike'd Up, and former co-host of the first nationally known sports radio program, Mike and the Mad Dog, stated that he would never have a co-host on his new radio show? --brewcrewer (yada, yada) 19:28, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Timothy Creasey, a British Army officer, was commander of the Sultan of Oman's Armed Forces for three years before serving in Northern Ireland? Shimgray | talk | 18:10, 5 September 2008 (UTC) (article by self, User:Setanta747, and User:Kernel Saunters)
- ... that the 1964 Liberty Bowl was played in the Atlantic City Convention Hall, making it the first indoor major college bowl game and the first indoor game telecast nationwide in the US? -- new article by User:Karlporter, nom by Alansohn (talk) 04:14, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length, date & reference verified.Cbl62 (talk) 06:26, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the construction of the first bridge in Berne, Switzerland – the Untertorbrücke (pictured) – triggered a war? — Rewritten, expanded and self-nom by Sandstein 20:50, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- I added a picture caption, because "Panorama Nydeggbruecke Bern.jpg" sounds like it's a picture of the wrong bridge (Brücke or -bruecke means bridge). Art LaPella (talk) 22:57, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Hawaiian cultural advocate Bob Worthington served as the honorary consul of the Cook Islands to the United States? -- self nom Scanlan (talk) 20:14, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Erkki Nghimtina, Minister of Mines and Energy of Namibia, was only reprimanded for firing a gun shot near a relative after the teenager joined the opposition Rally for Democracy and Progress? self nom.--Thomas.macmillan (talk) 17:08, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Sir Morien Morgan is known as "the father of the Concorde" for his efforts to keep the Concorde aircraft project running in spite of tremendous technical and political challenges? Maury (talk) 12:09, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Expansion not five-fold. Prior length 950 characters; current length 3,786. Also lacks inline cite for the "Father of the Concorde" point, and I don't see the phrase in the internet references listed.Cbl62 (talk) 06:33, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the 110-foot fresco The Age of Reptiles depicts animals and plants spanning 350 million years of geologic history? -- self-nom by Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs 02:48, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Alternatively:
- ... that the 110-foot fresco The Age of Reptiles is the largest painting on the subject of natural history in the world? (Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs 02:52, 4 September 2008 (UTC))
- Can't access offline ref but article says "the largest paleontological painting in the world", not the broader "natural history". —97198 (talk) 07:35, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry, bad wording on my part. Fixed. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs 12:01, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Roy Staiger played for both New York Major League Baseball teams, the Mets and Yankees, but for no other Major League teams? -- new article self-nom by Rlendog (talk) 01:38, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that, Isabel Gonzalez, a pregnant Puerto Rican mother who in 1902 was detained in Ellis Island as an alien, challenged the Government of the United States in the groundbreaking case "GONZALES v. WILLIAMS", which helped pave the way for all Puerto Ricans to be recognized as citizens of the United States? Tony the Marine (talk) 23:53, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
304 character hook. Art LaPella (talk) 00:15, 4 September 2008 (UTC)Shortened. Art LaPella (talk) 01:19, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in 1902 Isabel Gonzalez, a single Puerto Rican mother, challenged the Government of the United States and helped pave the way for all Puerto Ricans to be recognized as citizens of the United States? Tony the Marine (talk) 01:10, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that, because Li Xian would not flatter him, the Tang Dynasty chancellor Yang Guozhong blamed torrential rains near the capital Chang'an on divine displeasure with Li Xian? (self-nomination) --Nlu (talk) 23:48, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Hungarian fencer Pal Szekeres is the only person ever to have won medals at both the Olympic and the Paralympic Games? -- new article, self-nom by Aridd (talk) 21:00, 3 September 2008 (UTC).
- Article is too short, at only 908 characters. —97198 (talk) 07:20, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Fixed. Aridd (talk) 21:35, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Article is too short, at only 908 characters. —97198 (talk) 07:20, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Far Hills Races has hosted the Breeders' Cup Grade 1 Steeplechase, which has been called "steeplechasing's richest race"? -- new article by User:Gwf expanded five-fold by Alansohn (talk) 20:14, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that prehistoric Orkney has provided so many ancient ruins (pictured) that one of the islands in the archipelago has been described as "the Egypt of the North"? (Self Nom) --Ben MacDui 19:51, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the controversial marriage of Edward VIII and Wallis Simpson took place at Château de Candé? how do you turn this on 19:23, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- It has potential, although I'd prefer a word other than "controversial"; and the article lacks inline citations; I've added a slew of fact tags, if you cite these sources - and add one or two more sources, I think it could be featured. Sherurcij 20:24, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- I added some, and removed some bits I couldn't find sources for (I copied this straight from the French Misplaced Pages). It could do with a fact check before being featured, as well as a thorough copyedit. how do you turn this on 20:59, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- If I may jump in? I don't like to be pedantic, but Edward was not Edward VIII at the time of his marriage as he had already abdicated. And I'm not sure about Wallis's surname - did she not revert (vague recollection here, may be wrong) to Wallis Warfield? George The Dragon (talk) 21:35, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- You're probably right, though this may be better discussed on the article talk page, then updated here. I know he wasn't King, that's for sure. But I wasn't sure what else to call him how do you turn this on 21:37, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- He was already Duke of Windsor when he married, so that ought to be how he's named here. This would appear to be a perfectly valid time to use the word "controversial", might be worth linking it to Edward VIII abdication crisis. David Underdown (talk) 09:55, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- You're probably right, though this may be better discussed on the article talk page, then updated here. I know he wasn't King, that's for sure. But I wasn't sure what else to call him how do you turn this on 21:37, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- If I may jump in? I don't like to be pedantic, but Edward was not Edward VIII at the time of his marriage as he had already abdicated. And I'm not sure about Wallis's surname - did she not revert (vague recollection here, may be wrong) to Wallis Warfield? George The Dragon (talk) 21:35, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- I added some, and removed some bits I couldn't find sources for (I copied this straight from the French Misplaced Pages). It could do with a fact check before being featured, as well as a thorough copyedit. how do you turn this on 20:59, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- It has potential, although I'd prefer a word other than "controversial"; and the article lacks inline citations; I've added a slew of fact tags, if you cite these sources - and add one or two more sources, I think it could be featured. Sherurcij 20:24, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Czech poet František Gellner (pictured) disappeared in Galicia in September 1914 and was never found? self-nom by Aloysius (talk) 19:10, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Gothic Collegiate church in Wislica, Poland was built in 1350 on foundations of two earlier Roman churches? self-nom by Tymek (talk) 17:41, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- No it wasn't! ALT:*... that the Gothic Collegiate church in Wislica, Poland was built in 1350 on the foundations of two earlier Romanesque churches? Johnbod (talk) 18:00, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Article length, date, hook ref ok, but really needs a ce for English before hitting the main page. Johnbod (talk) 18:00, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Oh yes, I messed up Roman and Romanesque. Sorry, I am still learning. Anyway, more help is appreciated. Tymek (talk) 18:22, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- copyedited & now ok to go. Johnbod (talk) 13:31, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Giovanni Soro is known to be the father of modern cryptography? Expanded article five-fold, self nom by --Doug Coldwell 15:11, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- No, and after reading the article, I still don't know it. I do know that Doug can't spell cryptanalyst, however. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 22:01, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... the Venetian Giovanni Soro, considered the father of modern cryptography. --Doug Coldwell 22:13, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- This would appear to be a Soviet press report that Doug found by Google; we prefer reliable sources, and articles that aren't out to prove things. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 22:18, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Here is the website for the publishing company's profile. --Doug Coldwell 22:29, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- So? I'm sure it accurately reprints the Soviet Press. This means it's exactly unreliable. 22:58, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Here is the website for the publishing company's profile. --Doug Coldwell 22:29, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- This would appear to be a Soviet press report that Doug found by Google; we prefer reliable sources, and articles that aren't out to prove things. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 22:18, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... the Venetian Giovanni Soro, considered the father of modern cryptography. --Doug Coldwell 22:13, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- No, and after reading the article, I still don't know it. I do know that Doug can't spell cryptanalyst, however. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 22:01, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- (ALT) ... that Giovanni Soro was likely the Western world's first great cryptanalyst? --Doug Coldwell 23:27, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Adamson House, called the "Taj Mahal of Tile", uses local handmade Malibu tiles (pictured) throughout and even has an elaborately tiled dog bath and a 60-foot imitation Persian rug made of tile? more than 5-fold expansion by Cbl62 (talk) 14:29, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Date & length good; offline refs assumed good too. Nice hook! —97198 (talk) 14:11, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Brooke Miller (not the one off America's Next Top Model, Cycle 7!) is a road racing cyclist and the current US national criterium and road race champion? User:Gimmetrow suggested I self-nominate this one. Expanded from 47 byte redirect page to 4,845 bytes. Thaf (talk) 14:07, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Comment I just wikilinked road racing cyclist and national criterium and road race champion. However, I advise you to retain the surprise element (that she's not actually from America's Next Top Model). Mspraveen (talk) 14:36, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- I thought this would be an interesting hook: ... Brooke Miller, a road racing cyclist and the current US national criterium and road race champion, has a PhD in evolutionary biology? And If someone really wanted to play up name confusion, there may be an April 1 hook here somewhere. (By the way, currently at 1468 bytes prose - technically could use one more sentence to meet the 1500 byte guideline.) Gimmetrow 20:52, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Added another paragraph so this should be OK now, I like your hook.Thaf (talk) 11:14, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- I thought this would be an interesting hook: ... Brooke Miller, a road racing cyclist and the current US national criterium and road race champion, has a PhD in evolutionary biology? And If someone really wanted to play up name confusion, there may be an April 1 hook here somewhere. (By the way, currently at 1468 bytes prose - technically could use one more sentence to meet the 1500 byte guideline.) Gimmetrow 20:52, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Apetito were given an award by Queen Elizabeth II for innovation in the provision of food to the elderly? --
new articleexpansion (from deleted article) self-nom by SilkTork * 13:58, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Gloster Grouse biplane (pictured), developed in 1922, never saw active service in the RAF? (Self Nom) --Fatal!ty 13:11, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that between 1221 and 1244, Robert of Lexinton served as a justice on Eyre on 64 occasions, acting as senior justice for 31? new article, self nom, 1900 chars. Ironholds 11:09, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Jewish community dates its presence in Eišiškės, Lithuania, back to the year 1097 or 1171? Expanded 6x from 1054 to 6579 characters of readable prose. Renata (talk) 10:46, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that though The Pool was directed by Milwaukee-based Chris Smith in Hindi, a language alien to him, it went on to win a special jury prize at the 2007 Sundance Film Festival? -- 5X expansion by Mspraveen (talk) 10:33, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that The Bostonian Society was formed in 1881 to prevent the Old State House, site of the Boston Massacre, from being moved to Chicago, Illinois? self nom by Boston (talk) 02:05, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Gerald Champion Regional Medical Center in Alamogordo, New Mexico is the first military/civilian shared hospital facility in the United States? -- new article, self-nom by Uncia (talk) 01:53, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ALT: ... that the food services department at Gerald Champion Regional Medical Center in Alamogordo, New Mexico includes a catering service and gets over half its revenue from outside the hospital? --Uncia (talk) 01:53, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Power Memorial Academy basketball team, led by Lew Alcindor in 1964, was named "The #1 High School Team of The Century" by National Sports Writers, and produced several NBA players? self nominated, new article by Truthanado (talk) 00:52, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- That's a 201-character hook, but I doubt anyone'll hassle you too much. —97198 (talk) 07:24, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Just in case, I dropped a few unnecessary words, it's 194 now. Truthanado (talk) 16:47, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that there are more than 1200 historical markers in Ohio? - article created by Novasource (talk · contribs) and expanded 5 times by Boston (talk · contribs).
- I've got this expansion at 885 > 3240 characters, only 3.7x. —97198 (talk) 13:30, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that James Lingan, officer of the Continental Army in the American Revolutionary War, was beaten to death by a mob in Baltimore, Maryland for defending the freedom of the press in the United States? --Jackyd101 (talk) 05:01, 3 September 2008 (UTC) (new article, self nom)
- ... that Australia's second largest gold mine is located in Telfer, Western Australia? (Hook is not cited in lead, but is cited within article.) New article, self-nom by Somno (talk) 06:59, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Date and length okay; offline ref accepted in good faith. —97198 (talk) 07:29, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that an Irish farmer's son Sylvester O'Halloran studied surgery under Antoine Ferrein in Paris in 1748, and his 1793 book on external injuries to the head suggested that Irish fights were often caused by drinking too much whiskey? Red Hurley (talk) 19:43, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- 230-character hook - shorten to under 200. —97198 (talk) 07:18, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Delta Music Museum in Ferriday, Louisiana, honors sixteen musicians of the Mississippi River delta country, including Jimmie Davis, Mickey Gilley, Jerry Lee Lewis, and Conway Twitty?--self-nom Billy Hathorn (talk) 00:32, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
REDUCED IN LENGTH NOW Billy Hathorn (talk) 21:26, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- 238-character hook - shorten to under 200. —97198 (talk) 07:18, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 2
- ... Commodore Nutt grew only 37 inches tall? self nom Boston (talk) 13:25, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Casey Nicholaw, after giving up an acting career, jumped right into a career as a choreographer and director, earning three Tony Award nominations for his first two shows on Broadway: The Drowsy Chaperone (2006) and Monty Python's Spamalot (2005)? -- Self nom. Ssilvers (talk) 17:14, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
252 character hook. Art LaPella (talk) 22:57, 4 September 2008 (UTC)Shortened. Art LaPella (talk) 00:09, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Casey Nicholaw received three Tony Award nominations for his first two shows on Broadway as a choreographer and director: The Drowsy Chaperone (2006) and Monty Python's Spamalot (2005)?
- ... that Samuel Johnson's London, his first major work, contains the beginnings of his views on literature, politics and ethics? self-nom, new pages (with one "early life" explained - All pages contain information pulled over from other pages, but contain a lot of new information (over 3k worth each, plus headers, etc). I talked to some people about a dispute before - Johnbod, and Art LaPella are pushing forth an "unwritten" rule to say that content like this must be a five fold expansion above the information pulled elsewhere. I believe that there is no difference if I added in that information now or if I were to wait 5 days after to add it in after it went through DYK, especially when there is enough new information to warrant it as a topic without any problem. The only page that would be a problem here is the "early life" page, as the rest are all new and written together with the information placed on the main Samuel Johnson page and are not duplicate.) This is all a question on if early life should be bolded or not. The other three are new and not a content split, but pages created per FAC and then linked into the main page later. Ottava Rima (talk) 13:56, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Indeed - discussion as to whether splits are allowed at all, or must be expanded x5, here. Comments welcome. Johnbod (talk) 02:45, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- I've restored based on improper procedure by John. I have already sufficiently proven that Art and John are using too narrow of a definition of "split", which Misplaced Pages has three terms (split, spin out, and spin off) all meaning the same - a secondary article that contains information pertinent to the first. I have already demonstrated how this definition applies to a large proportion of new articles, and that their understanding of the definition/use is problematic. I have already pointed out the logical fallacy of saying that an article should be "expanded 5x" when you can easily create the page and then import the text in after it reaches DYK. Furthermore, DYK is to promote all new pages that are notable, meet the minimum requirement of new text (i.e. 1,500 characters), and has appropriate citations for verifiability. Ottava Rima (talk) 19:46, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Indeed - discussion as to whether splits are allowed at all, or must be expanded x5, here. Comments welcome. Johnbod (talk) 02:45, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that over 80% of people in Bahia, Brazil are Afro-Brazilian? ~ New article by Quissamã; nominated by Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 12:23, 3 September 2008 (UTC). Offline refs and .
- ... that Archibald Russell was Bristol Aeroplane Company's Chief Designer for 25 years of his 44 year career? Maury (talk) 11:38, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the bookstore: Dark They Were, and Golden-Eyed was the largest science fiction bookshop and comic store in Europe during the 1970s? (Article created by WorthyDan) Nominated by --Fatal!ty 10:32, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Article uses bare URLs for citations, is unwikified, and has other issues. The primary editor does not seem willing to address these concerns. - Boston (talk) 21:32, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the critical editions of the Classics produced by Giovanni Andrea Bussi between 1468 and 1472 were criticised at the time for their inaccuracy? (self-nom) Srnec (talk) 04:51, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Detroit Tigers gave the Williamsport Tigers not only their name, but also grandstand seats for their minor league baseball stadium that were taken from Tiger Stadium? (self nom) --Dincher (talk) 01:01, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- article says the seats came from Briggs Stadium, which appears to be an older name for Tiger Stadium. I suppose we should be consistent and change the hook to read "Briggs".Otherwise, size and refs check, not a stub -> almost ready to go. Truthanado (talk) 01:28, 3 September 2008 (UTC)- I helped with the hook (Dincher did the article and all the hard work). If "Tiger Stadium" is changed to "Briggs Stadium", I would make it clearer by changing it to "that were taken from Detroit's Briggs Stadium?" the alternate hook would be
- ... that the Detroit Tigers gave the Williamsport Tigers not only their name, but also grandstand seats taken from Briggs Field in Detroit for their minor league baseball stadium in Williamsport, Pennsylvania? Ruhrfisch ><>° 02:18, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Either hook is fine with me. I used Briggs Stadium in the article because that is what it was known as at the time. Briggs Stadium and Tiger Stadium are one in the same. Dincher (talk) 10:38, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- - alternate hook is preferred, could be a bit shorter -> good to go Truthanado (talk) 22:22, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Shorten as/if needed. Not sure what to cut. Dincher (talk) 23:20, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- - alternate hook is preferred, could be a bit shorter -> good to go Truthanado (talk) 22:22, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Either hook is fine with me. I used Briggs Stadium in the article because that is what it was known as at the time. Briggs Stadium and Tiger Stadium are one in the same. Dincher (talk) 10:38, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Hong Kong is one of the healthiest places in the world? New article by Joowwww (talk); Nom by Captain-tucker (talk) 00:49, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- - size and refs check out, not a stub --> good to go Truthanado (talk) 01:19, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Object. This wording is vague and subjective. How about this:
- ... that Hong Kong residents have the second highest life expectancy in the world? —D. Monack 09:49, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that composer William Turner was kicked out of the Chapel Royal choir when his voice broke? self nom. by Nrswanson (talk) 00:47, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Article has no inline citations. —97198 (talk) 07:34, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Daniel Kievsky was the first Russian travel-writer? self nominated, new article by --Doug Coldwell 22:27, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Object Badly written, ill-sourced article, researched by Google, and containing such writing as Kievsky traveled during the time of the middle ages. (To pile Ossa upon Pelion, Kievsky isn't a surname, it's a post-positive adjective.) Septentrionalis PMAnderson 18:54, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- The main reference for the article is the 1911 Encyclopædia Britannica Eleventh Edition which I based my article on. --Doug Coldwell 22:42, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- I based my article also on Merriam-Webster's Encyclopedia of Literature. --Doug Coldwell 23:01, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- The article is also based on JSTOR article The Oldest Monument of Russian Travel.
- Expanded article from a detailed Ukrainian website
- Replaced the objected use of "Kievsky" with his first name of "Daniel". --Doug Coldwell 23:55, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Object Badly written, ill-sourced article, researched by Google, and containing such writing as Kievsky traveled during the time of the middle ages. (To pile Ossa upon Pelion, Kievsky isn't a surname, it's a post-positive adjective.) Septentrionalis PMAnderson 18:54, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that when one of the rare recordings of "Stormy Weather" by The Five Sharps', a 78 rpm record, was broken, the blame was placed on a pet raccoon that supposedly sat on it? selfnom by Izzy007 Talk 20:37, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- According to the article, the record was definitely broken, so "possibly" in the hook is misplaced. How about rephrasing it.Otherwise, size and refs check out, not a stub -> ready to go after rephrasing. Truthanado (talk) 01:44, 3 September 2008 (UTC)- I changed it around. Is that okay? Izzy007 Talk 17:04, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- - rephrased hook is okay -> good to go Truthanado (talk) 01:50, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- I changed it around. Is that okay? Izzy007 Talk 17:04, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that creationist museums present a young Earth creationist view that Earth and life on Earth were created some 6,000 years ago and that the Earth was created in six days as described in the Bible? -- new article by Alansohn (talk) 18:12, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Written like an ad. Should not be featured - or even kept - without major rewriting. Lampman (talk) 22:49, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- Disagree with Lampman! Written very neutrally & sourced from mainstream media that is mostly opposed to creationism - in the case of The Guardian very strongly so. Date, lengths, hook ref all ok. A 3rd opinion would be useful. Johnbod (talk) 15:30, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- I agree that the sources are legit, but the cherry-picking of information gives a one-sided view, with no criticism included whatsoever. I’m tempted to say it’s using an in-universe perspective to describe fiction. Here’s a few quotes:
- "...to reach out to the 45% of Americans who believe that God created humans as they currently exist within the past ten thousand years and that they do not descend from apes."
- "Dinosaurs became extinct following the Great Flood and that a pair of young dinosaurs accompanied elephants and lions on Noah's Ark." (This might be just faulty grammar, but as it stands it's ambiguous whether this is stated as fact or as the museum’s view.)
- "...to show that changes believed by mainstream scientists to take millions of years can occur in as short a period of time as hours or days."
- This article seems like little else that a Coatrack to promote creationism. I'd very much like to hear from others too. Lampman (talk) 17:27, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- I have reworded the last of these two slightly & I see you have added forthright mainstream criticism, so I really don't see a problem now. Johnbod (talk) 18:10, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah, I decided to take it to task, so in its current state I'll change my opinion to . Lampman (talk) 18:19, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- I have reworded the last of these two slightly & I see you have added forthright mainstream criticism, so I really don't see a problem now. Johnbod (talk) 18:10, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Seimas of the Grand Duchy of Lithuania was officially abolished by the Union of Lublin in 1569? Article by Renata3 (talk · contribs) nom by M.K (talk · contribs) Alternatives are welcome, M.K. (talk) 10:32, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Simon of Pattishall, Chief Justice of the Common Pleas between 1190 and 1217, was considered such a notable judge that his plea rolls were kept after his death, a rare practice at the time? (New article, self-nom, 194 char hook, far-past 1500 char article). Ironholds 09:31, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Ref is a book, but page number is missing. Lampman (talk) 23:02, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- The ref is on google books; it opens slap-bang at the top of the page referenced. I have however added the page number. Ironholds 10:07, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- No you did not. You added the chapter number; I corrected it. Neither one of the sources, however, supports the claim that this was a rare practice at the time, or, as the article says, that it became common practice in 1346. DNB simply considers it evidence that he was the senior justice. Lampman (talk) 21:30, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- My apologies; I was assuming it was the page number. The Plea rolls article notes that files were kept by the Custos Brevium, an organisation established in 1246; on the matter of how it establishes the hook, if you read the page offered as a reference from the book it says that he had earned "such a reputation as a judge that his plea rolls were preserved", showing both that it was a rare practice and that the preservation was due to his reputation. An earlier practice on the same page mentions that, of the core 15 judges at the time, Pattishall was the most respected. Ironholds 22:06, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- No you did not. You added the chapter number; I corrected it. Neither one of the sources, however, supports the claim that this was a rare practice at the time, or, as the article says, that it became common practice in 1346. DNB simply considers it evidence that he was the senior justice. Lampman (talk) 21:30, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- The ref is on google books; it opens slap-bang at the top of the page referenced. I have however added the page number. Ironholds 10:07, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that two-thirds of pioneers arriving in Indiana from Louisville used the Buffalo Trace to settle the state?(self-nom)--King Bedford I 08:14, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Kapala, the tantric’s skull bowl has a link with Charnel ground or Sky burial practice in Tibet and the derivative name Kapalik well known as a tantric in India. the stub article Kapala with 1,824 bytes has been expanded to 14,558 bytes.--Nvvchar (talk) 06:26, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Bolded Kapala. —97198 (talk) 06:45, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Is it accepted or rejected?--Nvvchar (talk) 12:17, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- It doesn't meet the rules as it is. The hook is not well phrased, or linked, & the Kapalik part is referenced, via a mirror site, only to another WP article. There are plenty of potential hooks here & I suggest you read the rules & try another version of this or a different one. Date & article size ok. Johnbod (talk) 18:10, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Tang Dynasty chancellor Lü Yin was poor in his youth and was only able to start his civil service career due to the financial support by his father-in-law? (self-nomination) --Nlu (talk) 06:07, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- ALT: ... that Lü Yin grew up in poverty and would not be able to start his civil service career and eventually become a Tang chancellor without the financial support from his father-in-law? --74.14.18.83 (talk) 07:49, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Lonar Lake in the Buldana district of Maharashtra, India, a unique salt water lake in basaltic formation, is an explosion crater lake created by a meteor weighing about 2 million tonnes hitting the earth some 50,000 ± 6,000 years ago? Nvvchar (talk) 02:49, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Hook is 239 characters - shorten to under 200. —97198 (talk) 06:19, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Pls wikify the hook while you shorten it. Thx. --74.14.18.83 (talk) 07:49, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- The artcile has been shortened from 15,336 bytes to 12134 bite. I was under the impression that artciles could be upto 30 kb size.--Nvvchar (talk) 12:17, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Hook is modified as -
- ... that Lonar Lake in India, a unique salt water lake in basaltic formation, is an explosion crater lake created some 50,000 ± 6,000 years ago?--Nvvchar (talk) 12:45, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- The article has been shortened? Why? There is no cap on article size, but there is a cap of 200 characters on hook length. BTW, you may want to apply {{cite web}} in the article. You may also consider moving Lonar lake to Lonar Lake, and merging with Lonar crater. --74.14.18.83 (talk) 13:34, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Lonar lake is created under the category of List of Lakes in Asia under the sub list of List of Lakes in India and I consider it desirable to maintain the identity of the lake since it is popular in India as a lake rather than a crater, and the lake may also be considered for recognition as a Ramsar site for conservation. Lonar crater is a shorter article (dealing with geological aspects only) and it may not be appropriate to merge Lonar lake with it. Should I now create another article with the title Lonar Lake? As regards shortening the article, I got confused between Hook and article. I will restore it to the original size.Please consider retaining the article as Lonar lake.--Nvvchar (talk) 15:47, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Please don't create another article with the title Lonar Lake. There should be one article about the lake, not one about the lake and another about the Lake. The only reason I capitalized the word "Lake" in the title is because the word "Lake" is normally capitalized in that context – for example, Great Bear Lake not "Great Bear lake". If that rule is different in India, then maybe this is a WP:ENGVAR situation. In either case, the suggestion was to move the article – that is, change the title from "Lonar lake" to "Lonar Lake" – certainly not to write a duplicate article. Art LaPella (talk) 21:33, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Right. Pls see WP:MOVE. --74.14.18.39 (talk) 05:34, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Please don't create another article with the title Lonar Lake. There should be one article about the lake, not one about the lake and another about the Lake. The only reason I capitalized the word "Lake" in the title is because the word "Lake" is normally capitalized in that context – for example, Great Bear Lake not "Great Bear lake". If that rule is different in India, then maybe this is a WP:ENGVAR situation. In either case, the suggestion was to move the article – that is, change the title from "Lonar lake" to "Lonar Lake" – certainly not to write a duplicate article. Art LaPella (talk) 21:33, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that despite total defeat of the Polish forces in the Mongol invasion of Poland, the Mongols did not occupy the country? --self-nom by Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 22:17, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Date, length ok. Hook ref on AGF (& I remember it is right). Johnbod (talk) 03:02, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that The Portraitist is a 2005 Polish television documentary film about the life and work of Wilhelm Brasse, the famous "photographer of Auschwitz"? -- article by User:NYScholar, nom by Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 23:07, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 1
- ... that the monkey Marcel on the television show Friends was a White-headed Capuchin? -- Article expanded and self-nom by Rlendog (talk) 19:59, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- This is only a 3.3x expansion, so feel free to reject. But since it was a pretty extensive expansion and there has been discussion that there are few life sciences DYKs, I figured I'd submit and let the admins decide whether to use it. Rlendog (talk) 19:59, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Chrome, a new browser developed by Google, was launched with a comic by Scott McCloud -- new article by User:Azertus ; Nom by SilkTork * 19:00, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Another Google Chrome hook is listed under September 4. Art LaPella (talk) 22:57, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the German Renaissance Little Masters specialized in very small engravings (example right), often treated erotically? self-nom by Johnbod (talk) 12:53, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the North Bloomfield Mining and Gravel Company was the defendant in the first environmental lawsuit in US legal history? ~ New article by Rosiestep; nominated by Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 12:35, 3 September 2008 (UTC).
- ... that Dante Alighieri shared a five-part poetic correspondence, called the duol d'amore, with Dante da Maiano? (self-nom) Srnec (talk) 04:51, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
... that the USS Nevada (BB-36) was the first U.S. Navy battleship to feature triple gun turrets? .....self-nom; if you see something that is more interesting in the article, go ahead and use that instead. the_ed17 17:43, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Interesting nom, and nice that the Nevada article is developing, but it does not meet DYK criterion for a 5X expansion within 5 days. Measurement of 5X criterion is to based on number of characters in main text, which i didnt count. But in raw size article now at 19,000 or so bytes, was at 13,721 on 12 August 2008. doncram (talk) 19:14, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Didn't know what the specific count was...I just knew that I had expanded it... Sorry for the inconvenience! the_ed17 22:06, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Interesting nom, and nice that the Nevada article is developing, but it does not meet DYK criterion for a 5X expansion within 5 days. Measurement of 5X criterion is to based on number of characters in main text, which i didnt count. But in raw size article now at 19,000 or so bytes, was at 13,721 on 12 August 2008. doncram (talk) 19:14, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the name of Lithuania was mentioned for the first time in the Annals of Quedlinburg (excerpt pictured) back in 1009? Self nom by M.K (talk · contribs) Alternatives are welcome, M.K. (talk) 16:15, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Copy-edited hook. Renata (talk) 23:17, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Gibraltar's St. Michael's Cave (pictured), prepared as an emergency hospital during World War II, at present contains an auditorium and receives almost 1,000,000 visitors a year? -- Article expanded fivefold and self-nom by Gibmetal 77 00:55, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- Would it be more comprehensible to spell out "1 million" or "one million"? —97198 (talk) 06:28, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that despite being a popular treatment for cystitis in the Nordic countries since the 1970s, the antibiotic pivmecillinam is not available in the United States?
- Or:
- ... that despite being a popular treatment for cystitis in most of Europe since the late 1970s, pivmecillinam is still effective against over 95% of strains of the bacteria it was first found to kill?
- ... that worldwide resistance to the antibiotic mecillinam is still remarkably low, even though it has been widely used as a treatment for urinary tract infections since the 1970s?
- ... that a prodrug of the antibiotic mecillinam was developed so that it could be taken by mouth and not just IV, but the inactive component of the prodrug was later found to deplete the body of carnitine?
- —new article, self nom by Fvasconcellos (t·c) 01:25, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that apricitabine, a new antiretroviral drug, was invented at a Canadian drug manufacturer, which was bought by Shire plc, who sold the drug's development rights to an Australian pharmaceutical company? —article expanded from 341 characters to just over 1700 by Anypodetos (talk · contribs) and yours truly, in a (successful) attempt to save it from AfD. The hook's pushing it at 198 characters, but I think it's OK :) Fvasconcellos (t·c) 01:19, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Voith Maxima 40CC locomotive (pictured) is the world's most powerful diesel-hydraulic locomotive? self-nom by Btrs (talk) 01:03, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Article has a number of in-line citations, but I'm uncomfortable seeing Voith as the only citation that suggests it is the world's most powerful. Commercial producers often claim such things, and should only be believed if third-party sources agree with the claim. Sherurcij 20:28, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that after Lake Sidney Lanier was completed in Georgia, USA, it isolated a locally historic church in Oakwood, Georgia, and nearly drove it to abandonment? -- new article self-nom by TurtleShroom! :) Jesus Loves You and Died for you! 00:39, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Jean-Baptiste Tati Loutard (pictured), Minister of State for the Republic of the Congo, has been described as the "outstanding poet of his generation"? self nom Victuallers (talk) 20:40, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Tang Dynasty chancellor Wang Yu was credited with incorporating the custom of burning joss paper into imperial worship ceremonies? (self-nomination) --Nlu (talk) 19:01, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the French ship Le Foudroyant was captured in 1758 (pictured) and fought against the French as HMS Foudroyant - self nom, article created from redirect. Benea (talk) 18:06, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Tang Dynasty chancellor Zhang Gao, prior to his civil service career, would attend feasts held by officials just for the purpose of getting drunk? (self-nomination) --Nlu (talk) 16:59, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Tang Dynasty official Miao Jinqing was demoted after he and his colleague Song Yao ranked another colleague's son, Zhang Shi, first in the imperial examinations despite Zhang's lack of knowledge? (self-nomination) --Nlu (talk) 14:53, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- Hook currently has 204 characters. Mastrchf (/c) 15:27, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- OK, what about --
- ... that the Tang Dynasty official Miao Jinqing was demoted after he ranked a colleague's son, Zhang Shi, first in the imperial examinations despite Zhang's lack of knowledge? --Nlu (talk) 16:58, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- Mastrchf91 & Nlu, becareful where you post your comments. I'm now moving the picture for the following hook where it should be. --74.14.18.83 (talk) 17:05, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- Hook currently has 204 characters. Mastrchf (/c) 15:27, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Minebea PM-9 submachine gun was created for the JSDF using the Mini-Uzi as a basis? (self-nom by Ominae)
- This article wasn't created or fivefold expanded recently. Olaf Davis | Talk 16:07, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- It was indeed expanded in the last few days, just not 5X yet. Please continue typing, Ominae. --74.14.18.83 (talk) 17:05, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- I did some expanding and all. Not sure if it's enough. Ominae (talk) 23:22, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry. Counting "prose only" (see #Instructions), I count 1807/1120=1.6x not 5x. Art LaPella (talk) 00:35, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Should I fix the proposed DYK sentence then? If not, let me know. Not sure on what to do next. Ominae (talk) 01:03, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- No, the problem isn't the sentence (although I just linked "JSDF"). It's that every DYK sentence should introduce an appropriate article. For details, see User:Art LaPella/No qualifying article. Did You Know is intended to introduce new articles. A fivefold expansion is considered new enough. A 1.6-fold expansion is not considered new enough. So you might want to triple the article size (or more precisely, triple its prose portion) within 5 days. Or you could start over with a new, 1500-character article. Art LaPella (talk) 04:12, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- I'll see if I can expand and dig more info, but I kinda doubt it since it's a Japanese firearm. Nevertheless, I'll try my best to do it. Will anyone check it soon since I'll try and increase it. I looked at the the DYK rules regarding prose. Sorry, I guess I was a bit confused. XP Ominae (talk) 07:46, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Now it's 2795/1120=2.5x. If the prose rule is confusing, then "Unwritten" rule A2 will either help explain the prose rule, or else confuse you further. Art LaPella (talk) 21:33, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Will this be accepted? Thanks. Ominae (talk) 04:16, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- No, sorry, not as long as the length is 2795, for a 2.5x expansion. The rule is 5x expansion. So you might want to double the prose portion of that article, or start a new one. Art LaPella (talk) 00:15, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Will this be accepted? Thanks. Ominae (talk) 04:16, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Now it's 2795/1120=2.5x. If the prose rule is confusing, then "Unwritten" rule A2 will either help explain the prose rule, or else confuse you further. Art LaPella (talk) 21:33, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- I'll see if I can expand and dig more info, but I kinda doubt it since it's a Japanese firearm. Nevertheless, I'll try my best to do it. Will anyone check it soon since I'll try and increase it. I looked at the the DYK rules regarding prose. Sorry, I guess I was a bit confused. XP Ominae (talk) 07:46, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- No, the problem isn't the sentence (although I just linked "JSDF"). It's that every DYK sentence should introduce an appropriate article. For details, see User:Art LaPella/No qualifying article. Did You Know is intended to introduce new articles. A fivefold expansion is considered new enough. A 1.6-fold expansion is not considered new enough. So you might want to triple the article size (or more precisely, triple its prose portion) within 5 days. Or you could start over with a new, 1500-character article. Art LaPella (talk) 04:12, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Should I fix the proposed DYK sentence then? If not, let me know. Not sure on what to do next. Ominae (talk) 01:03, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry. Counting "prose only" (see #Instructions), I count 1807/1120=1.6x not 5x. Art LaPella (talk) 00:35, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- I did some expanding and all. Not sure if it's enough. Ominae (talk) 23:22, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- It was indeed expanded in the last few days, just not 5X yet. Please continue typing, Ominae. --74.14.18.83 (talk) 17:05, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the vulnerable and restricted Queensland shrub Grevillea venusta is an easily-grown garden plant and parent of cultivars G. 'Firesprite' and G. 'Orange Marmalade'? Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:37, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length, reference and history verified. Daniel Case (talk) 16:29, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the episodes of the BBC 7 sitcom Knocker have bizarre titles, such as "Privinvasionacy", "Obselejectivitysence" and "Confidentialitydence"? Self-nom by ISD (talk) 08:39, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length okay. "Bizarre"-ness of titles is subjective, and word is not sourced, does not appear in article. Could you compose a different hook? doncram (talk) 16:29, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- OK, what about something simple like "... that the BBC 7 sitcom Knocker looks at the life of a down-trodden market researcher?" ISD (talk) 16:49, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- Hook sounds promising, but when I look for source and compare 2nd ref to plot summary section, it shows very close paraphrasing (using phrases like "revolves around the unfortunate" and "accident prone" without quoting, and same structure). I don't know how to evaluate the adequacy of this sourcing for DYK; I'd rather it was rewritten in your own words or using explicit quotes. doncram (talk) 05:50, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- I say keep the original as "have titles such as", because it's definitely unusual on its own, no word to explicit the bizarreness are needed, really. Circeus (talk) 19:04, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- OK, what about something simple like "... that the BBC 7 sitcom Knocker looks at the life of a down-trodden market researcher?" ISD (talk) 16:49, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length okay. "Bizarre"-ness of titles is subjective, and word is not sourced, does not appear in article. Could you compose a different hook? doncram (talk) 16:29, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in Buckeye Check Cashing, Inc. v. Cardegna, the U.S. Supreme Court held that challenges to the legality of a contract must be heard by an arbitrator if the contract has an arbitration clause? Self-nom Daniel Case (talk) 13:58, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
Expiring noms
Articles created/expanded on August 31
- ... that Russian philologist Mikhail Gasparov was also a poet, but only one of his poems was published during his lifetime? -- new article by Colchicum; Nom by M0RD00R. M0RD00R (talk) 08:45, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- 1.3K of prose. Falls short. Mspraveen (talk) 13:01, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Further expanded. M0RD00R (talk) 13:47, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in the 25 years since being founded in 1983 Signature Properties has built 5,000 housing units in 50 different projects in the Greater San Francisco Bay Area?♥INchile 00:12, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- Article is just short at about 1440 characters. —97198 (talk) 06:42, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- It's also marked as a stub dm (talk) 19:08, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Article is just short at about 1440 characters. —97198 (talk) 06:42, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Tang Dynasty chancellor Li Lin was removed from office for his refusal to follow the wishes of Empress Zhang and Li Fuguo? (self-nomination) --Nlu (talk) 04:36, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
- People get fired for failing to do what their boss told them to do -- all the time. Need to be clear that neither the Empress nor the eunuch was supposed to be the chancellor's boss. --74.14.18.83 (talk) 17:19, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- OK, what about:
- ... that the Tang Dynasty chancellor Li Lin was removed from office for his refusal to follow the wishes of the corrupt Empress Zhang and Li Fuguo? --Nlu (talk) 17:58, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- OK, what about:
- This is the same exact hook. Daniel Case (talk) 02:36, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Actually, no. It added "the corrupt" (which was added to address 74.14.18.83's point). --Nlu (talk) 03:38, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Saying someone is "corrupt" does not in any way address that, nor incorporate your response. The hook should make clear, as you said, that neither person was his boss. Daniel Case (talk) 16:32, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Clarifying it would require the hook to be way, way too long. It should be clear already that a chancellor, by the virtue of the office, reported directly to the emperor. --Nlu (talk) 17:12, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Saying someone is "corrupt" does not in any way address that, nor incorporate your response. The hook should make clear, as you said, that neither person was his boss. Daniel Case (talk) 16:32, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- Actually, no. It added "the corrupt" (which was added to address 74.14.18.83's point). --Nlu (talk) 03:38, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- This is the same exact hook. Daniel Case (talk) 02:36, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ALT ... that Tang Dynasty chancellor Li Lin was removed from office due to the political machinations of the Emperor's wife and the eunuch Li Fuguo? dm (talk) 19:06, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Metacomet, sachem of the Wampanoag Indians, may have met with allies near Bear's Den Falls (pictured) to plan attacks on Massachusetts towns during King Philip's War? self nom by Boston (talk) 04:04, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
- Sources don't look particularly reliable (Tripod site and a tea site).-Wafulz (talk) 13:56, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
- I respectfully, though nonetheless strongly, disagree. The main source is Trustees of Reservations website. Other sources are New England Forestry Foundation and Valley Viewpoint newspaper. The bits cited to a Tripod site are minor reiteration of facts stated elsewhere, plus a colorful quotation from someone whose been there to Bear's Den Falls and gushes about "this amphitheater of Mother Nature". It's fine to use a source like that when the article could stand without it -- and it could very easily, it would only be less enjoyable to read. I would be appreciative if another editor would please review this. Thanks. - Boston (talk) 13:39, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Breuner's, a furniture big box store that went out of business in 2004 after 148 years, was founded to supply the demand for furniture during the California Gold Rush around Sacramento?♥INchile 05:32, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry, but neither are new enough or expanded enough.--King Bedford I 10:16, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
- but breuner's is brand spankin' new, i just finished writing it!?
- No, according to Breuner Home Furnishings editing history, it was created August 10 and over half complete by August 15. "New enough" means 5 days (see #Instructions.) Art LaPella (talk) 23:40, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
- but breuner's is brand spankin' new, i just finished writing it!?
Articles created/expanded on August 30
- ... that "Skin Hunters" is the media nickname for four hospital casualty workers from the Polish city of Łódź, who murdered patients and sold information regarding their deaths to funeral homes? new article, self-nom Malick78 (talk) 11:50, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
- This article in Polish says that the investigation is on-going. Aren't we a bit too fast? --Poeticbent talk 00:41, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- That article was written in 2007 and last updated in February this year. But either way, the four main criminals have been convicted and their convictions upheld. Their crimes took place in 2001 so the WP page isn't really hasty:) Malick78 (talk) 18:29, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- It's your opinion against mine I'm afraid. --Poeticbent talk 00:38, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- The article you link to says the 4 people have been convicted but authorities are investigating other people. The WP page says that 4 people have been convicted but authorities are investigating other people. Where's the problem? It's accurately reporting the situation, isn't it? Stick a warning at the top saying that the page covers ongoing events, but apart from that the page is fine. We can cover developing events you know. Malick78 (talk) 11:50, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Real names are protected by the courts. The article uses initials. In a final statement one of the convicted said he’s innocent. DYK can certainly do without. --Poeticbent talk 16:01, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- For those interested, Poeticbent has failed to provide a current source on the article's discussion page sourcing his concerns. I would humbly therefore say the article is fine for DYK. Other views would be welcome:) Malick78 (talk) 05:52, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- The article has a delete template on it. This will need to be resolved
- I don't understand the description of the crime. The motive is not clear
- - held until "AFD" is resolved Victuallers (talk) 22:08, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- The motive has now been explained better. If you think the article deserves to be kept, please vote:) Malick78 (talk) 05:58, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
See also
- User:AlexNewArtBot/GoodSearchResult – This is an automated list of promising new articles generated by AlexNewArtBot (talk · contribs · logs).