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*'''General''': Improve continuity and citations. Explain difficult terms and concepts for laypeople. Trim unnecessary details, and add concrete observations and clear examples to ground concepts and explain the evidence for various theories. |
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*'''Lead section''': Make article consistent with consensus on common ancestors and genetic drift. Improve coherency and smoothness of explanation of adaptation, speciation, and common descent. |
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*'''Controversy section''': Clean up. NPOV check the eugenics/social darwinism paragraph. Integrate into a slightly larger "Social effects" section to also discuss other aspects of evolutionary biology's impact on society, e.g., evolution in popular culture. A couple of paragraphs on this makes just as much sense as "controversy" paragraphs. |
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*'''General''': Improve continuity and citations. Explain difficult terms and concepts for laypeople. Trim unnecessary details, and add concrete observations and clear examples to ground concepts and explain the evidence for various theories. |
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*'''Lead section''': Make article consistent with consensus on common ancestors and genetic drift. Improve coherency and smoothness of explanation of adaptation, speciation, and common descent. |
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*'''Controversy section''': Clean up. NPOV check the eugenics/social darwinism paragraph. Integrate into a slightly larger "Social effects" section to also discuss other aspects of evolutionary biology's impact on society, e.g., evolution in popular culture. A couple of paragraphs on this makes just as much sense as "controversy" paragraphs. |