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== ] ==

Editors:

Please do not continue to revert other users' contributions. Reliable, sourced information should only be changed if it disrupts the neutrality of the page. If there is a challenge to the neutrality of sourced information, please discuss it on the talk page. This is a 3RR warning.

== RfC: "Christian" vs. "affiliated with a Christian organization" ==

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Should the first sentence of the "Religious affiliation" section say:
*"The overwhelming majority of CPCs in the US are affiliated with a Christian organization", ''or:''
*"The overwhelming majority of CPCs in the US are Christian in nature"?

I (]) argue that both first-party and third-party sources, as cited, refer to the centers as Christian, that many evangelize and still more require staff to be Christian, that their philosophy and/or material is based on the Christian religion, and that to say they are merely "affiliated with a Christian organization" is to ignore both the ''descriptions'' in the sources and the ''behavior'' described in the sources. ] wishes to say "affiliated with a Christian organization," rather than "Christian."

-- ] (] &sdot; ]) 23:39, 28 February 2011 (UTC)

:I thought we discussed this in talk archive 2. ] (]) 00:08, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
::We did indeed. But our friend doesn't seem to be satisfied with previous consensus (perhaps is hoping to take advantage of Dylan's ban?), and I can't revert because of the new rules on abortion-related articles. Sarek suggested I start a new RfC. ] (] &sdot; ]) 00:12, 1 March 2011 (UTC)

*'''Christian in nature''' is the wording I would select from the two possibilities listed. Primary and secondary sources describe the largest CPCs as Christian ministries. ] (]) 00:27, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
*'''Christian in nature''' seems much more appropriate. "Affiliated with a Christian organization" would be a more appropriate designation for associations that are supported by Christian organization in terms of finance or manpower but do not have a religious focus, which CPCs are not. It would also imply a specific church affiliation, e.g. the Catholic Church or the Jehovah's Witnesses, which also doesn't seem to apply to an "inter-denominational" group like this. ] (]) 00:54, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
*'''Comment''': Haymaker hasn't provided a reason for why he advocates his wording, but I'd imagine that he will do so eventually, so editors who have already expressed their preference for "Christian in nature" should check back in case his reasoning might change their minds. ] (] &sdot; ]) 01:00, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
*'''run by pro-life supporters who are typically conservative Christians''' - the current wording seems most accurate. ] (]) 03:22, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
:That's actually a new and undiscussed edit by WikiManOne (it previously said "run by pro-life supporters and typically Christian" rather than "run by pro-life supporters who are typically conservative Christians," which changes the meaning) - I suggested that he join this discussion so we can have everything going on in one place. In any case, I think "run by conservative Christians" is preferable to "affiliated with a Christian organization" (note also that these are two separate parts of the article) but it still doesn't capture the essentials here. As someone else pointed out in an earlier discussion, a Burger King restaurant might also be run by conservative Christians, but these centers describe themselves as Christian and evangelize to others. I think the centers themselves can reasonably be described as Christian ] (] &sdot; ]) 03:29, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
*'''Oh my,''' I am shocked that NYyankees actually agreed with one of my edits. I obviously like my edits the most since it makes clear who is running them. I don't have very strong feelings either way. <sub>]</sub>]<sup>]</sup> <sub><span style="border:1px solid #ffa500;background:#ffce7b;"><small>Please leave me a wb if you reply</small></span></sub> 05:04, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
*We agreed to "affiliated with a Christian organization" in the past because that is where our sources point, it more accurately describes CPCs and that is where consensus landed us. Have any of our sources shifted since then? - ] (]) 18:30, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
:::Closing admin should note that this user voted below, and be careful not to count anyone's vote more than once. ] (] &sdot; ]) 18:19, 16 March 2011 (UTC)
::Can you point to where that discussion and agreement took place? I was able to find the RfC that seemed to point the other way in archive 2 (thanks, Binksternet), but I haven't seen the agreement you're referencing yet. As an editor who has had no previous involvement with this article or the issue at stake, I'd like to be able to review all the relevant arguments. ] (]) 18:52, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

*I apologize for editing part of the article that was currently under dispute on the talk page with an open RfC. I was vaguely aware of it, but have been out of the loop for awhile, so sorry about that. Anyway, I strongly feel that the phrasing "run by anti-choice supporters and Christian in nature" is not only a poor choice of words, it is grammatically incorrect, and thus poor English. It was also way to verbose, so I changed it to "typically run by pro-life Christians", and I honestly felt that I did not change the meaning of the sentence, and only simplified it and made it flow better, improved the grammar and such. If there was some other meaning in the phrase, it was not being conveyed well enough. If there is a more agreed upon wording (as long as it doesn't contain the POV phrase "anti-choice"), I'd be glad to self revert back to a prior version, and understand that the discussion on this topic is pending. Now my opinion on whether "CPCs are Christian" or "CPCs are run by Christians", I honestly don't see much of a difference between the two phrases. I really don't care, and would rather focus on more important matters. Sorry I can't be of more help there. Hope my edit wasn't too controversial, considering the open RfC, and again, sorry for editing without noticing. -]&nbsp;</sup>]] 00:20, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:Don't worry about it - I didn't mean to call you out, just to direct you here so you could join the discussion. Since your wording is now the preferred wording of three editors, do you think I should begin a new subsection to choose between it and "Christian in nature," and call back the editors who voted early? ] (] &sdot; ]) 00:52, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
*'''affiliated with a Christian organization''' ] (]) 01:10, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
:] ] (] &sdot; ]) 02:37, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
*We need to be specific - I assume the article is not referring to mainstream Protestantism. ] (]) 03:27, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
:I think you may have meant ]? Anyway, when I originally wrote the section, I was as specific as I could be (eg. which centers were Catholic) but most of our sources aren't more specific than "Christian" or "faith in Jesus Christ" etc. If you can find sources that allow us to be more specific, that would be great! (I think I recall reading that Care Net was evangelical, though I don't remember where - it may not be a citable source.) ] (] &sdot; ]) 03:42, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
*'''Christian in nature'''. They describe themselves this way, third-party sources describe them this way, they evangelize, their materials are religious, they require staffers to be Christians. There's no reason not to admit it. ] (] &sdot; ]) 19:29, 14 March 2011 (UTC)
*'''Affiliated with a Christian organization''' seems a lot more accurate. - ] (]) 16:49, 16 March 2011 (UTC)
*'''RFC Comment''' - There is a question as to what exactly qualifies as "Christian" - does it mean groups operated and staffed by Christians, motivated by Christian principles, or in some way supported by Christian organizations, perhaps financially, through volunteers, etc.? There may also be a question with how the phrase "overwhelming majority" is sourced, I don't know. First, I would like to have presented exactly what the sources for the statements are, and how good those sources are. An Austin newspaper article is a good source, but there clearly could be better ones.

*Personally, the extreme ambiguity of just calling them "Christian", to me, makes the phrasing "Christian in nature" less preferred. Unfortunately, the phrasing "affiliated with a Christian organization" doesn't necessarily resolve all those problems. What makes those organizations "Christian", and how many of the questions I asked above apply here? Would a political party with the word "Christian" in either its name or platform qualify as Christian? This might be most relevant to Europe and other areas where several party names include that word. I might prefer a more detailed description if such were available, like maybe "CPCs generally receive very significant assistance from organizations with a Christian perspective". ] (]) 16:17, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
:In this case, all of your above qualifications (run by, motivated by, supported by) are met - see the "Religious affiliation" section in the article. Many also evangelize. As for sourcing, we have both third-party news sources and the organizations' websites. Summary:
:#Major CPC networks: "ultimate aim...is to share the love and truth of Jesus Christ" (Care Net, from their website), "Christian association" whose materials are "consistent with Biblical principles" (Heartbeat Int'l, from their website), "Christian-based pregnancy crisis centres" and is a division of a larger Christian charity (CareConfidential, from the BBC and their own website), "Catholic pregnancy centers" whose philosophy is "in conformity with the Magisterium of the Roman Catholic and Apostolic Church" (Human Life Int'l, from their website), "Christian charity" whose affiliates "adhere firmly to Christianity" (CAPSS, from their website and from the Toronto Star), other CPCs also are religious (we cite a few more newspapers and CPC websites)
:#Evangelism: "strongly believes that sharing the Gospel is an essential part of counseling women in pregnancy help medical clinics" (NIFLA, article by its president), claims to have achieved 23,000 conversions to born-again Christianity (Care Net, from their website), visitors report unwanted Christian evangelizing (New York Times, Pasadena Weekly, Colorado Springs Independent, Connect Savannah)
:#Staff: Care Net requires a statement of Christian faith from any worker at any affiliated center (from their website), so does CAPSS (from both their website and the Toronto Star), other CPCs also require workers to be Christian (websites of two other CPCs/small CPC networks)
:So...yeah. ] (] &sdot; ]) 19:46, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
::One more: referring to HBI. ] (] &sdot; ]) 05:03, 22 March 2011 (UTC)


*My opinions on this issue run along the lines of John Carter's comments posted above.
**'''Strongly oppose''' using the phrase "Christian in nature" as it suggests that the beliefs espoused by those involved in CPCs are "indisputably Christian" as contrasted to to "being held by some Christians and possibly rejected by others". There is not a single orthodoxy on Christian doctrine such that abortion is uniformly understood by all Christians as a sin. It's not as if the Nicene Creed identifies abortion as a sin (and the Nicene Creed is about the only set of doctrines that are accepted by most Christians). If it is possible for an individual to work in a CPC on the basis of having a Christian faith that accepts abortion as moral, then I retract this objection. If, however, the requirement for "a statement of Christian faith" carries the implied requirement for a rejection of abortion as sin, then "Christian in nature" is unacceptably POV as it takes a side on the debate as to whether abortion is acceptable within Christian doctrine.
**'''Oppose''' using the phrase "affiliated with Christian organizations" without qualification as to what kinds of Christian organizations CPCs are affiliated with. This is akin to asserting that liberation theology movements have been and are led by Catholic clergy. The assertion is true but omits the important fact that the Catholic clergy who supported liberation theology did not represent the entirety of Catholic clergy worldwide.
**<s>'''Strongly prefer''' "run by pro-life supporters who are typically conservative Christians" or any other locution which clearly characterizes those who operate CPCs as being associated with pro-life movements within Christianity rather than characterizing them as representing all of Christianity.</s>
--] (]) 21:16, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
*Propose "The major CPC networks require affiliated centers to be staffed by individuals who are required to subscribe to statements of principles that oppose abortion and birth control. These principles are typically associated with conservative Christian movements."
::This seems to stem from a misreading of the statements of faith, and also ignores the primary and secondary sources that describe centers as Christian. I get what you're saying about not wanting to imply that all Christians have these political views; perhaps "identify as Christian" could solve that problem? ] (] &sdot; ]) 16:04, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
:What do you think of "run on a conservative Christian philosophy"? ] (] &sdot; ]) 23:49, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
:The main problem point seems to me to be ], which, apparently, has about 400 affiliated CPCs but does not apparently advocate a Christian position. It seems to me to be problematic to apparently not take it into account. ] (]) 16:13, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
:::We do mention Birthright in the religion section as an organization with a stated commitment to not evangelizing, but is there more you think we should do? (It doesn't seem especially problematic to me to generalize, even accounting for BI. The number of Christian-oriented centers still vastly outweighs Birthright's numbers.) ] (] &sdot; ]) 17:50, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
::::I think I mentioned BI specifically because, based on my own clearly limited knowledge of the subject, it is, so far as I know, maybe the most active of the CPCs, regardless of their number. Relative activity may also be important, particularly if there are multiple CPCs in the same area with a large population. The one most frequently used, if there is a clear differentiation there, would I think also be relevant. ] (]) 21:06, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::It would be great if we had more recent sources on CPC activity, and not just for this section, but I'm not sure "anecdotal belief that BI is the most active" justifies ignoring other sources that indicate that most CPCs identify as Christian and/or require employees to be Christian and/or evangelize. We would need sources in order to consider these sorts of changes. Are there any that you can find? (Interestingly, while BI has a stated intent of non-evangelism, centers affiliated with it, it seems, may sometimes identify as Christian - I found by searching on "birthright international christian." So maybe the umbrella organization isn't explicitly Christian and prohibits affiliates from evangelizing, but doesn't prohibit them from otherwise describing themselves as Christian or operating based on their interpretation of Christian philosophy.) ] (] &sdot; ]) 22:02, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
::First, a disclaimer: I know almost nothing about CPCs so I'm relying on a good-faith assumption that what you guys say about them is true.
::@Roscelesce: I'm OK with saying things like "operate based on conservative Christian principles/beliefs/philosophy (whatever)". It's important to me that a word such as "conservative" or "fundamentalist" be used to qualify the term "Christian" in this context.
::@John Carter: If Birthright International does, in fact, operate 400 CPCs, then the article should certainly mention it as a notable organization. Are there any other organizations that operate that many CPCs or more? If so, they should be mentioned as well. (Rule of thumb: Mention all organizations representing more than 10% of the total) However, I wonder if Birthright International might be the exception that proves the rule (that CPCs generally operate on pro-life conservative Christian perspectives). Are there other organizations that operate CPCs without a Christian pro-life agenda? What is the total number of CPCs affiliated with organizations that avoid a pro-life Christian advocacy? Are there any sources that discuss Birthright International and contrast it to the other CPCs? Birthright International operates 400 centers (worldwide?). There are 4000 CPCs in the U.S. alone. If Birthright International is unique in its commitment to not advocating/evangelizing the Christian pro-life position, it would appear to be in the minority (i.e. representing less than 10% of the CPCs in the U.S.). Let us, by all means, mention Birthright International as an organization with a significant presence in this area but let us also put it into perspective as unique in its refusal to advocate/evangelize the pro-life Christian view.
::--] (]) 17:12, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
:::We do mention Birthright in the religion section as an organization with a stated commitment to not evangelizing, but is there more you think we should do? ] (] &sdot; ]) 17:50, 20 March 2011 (UTC)

Keep in mind that the second sentence in this entire article read "CPCs are owned and operated by ] Christians.". I have (in accordance with our sources) toned that back down to "CPCs are, with few exceptions, typically run by ] Christians. - ] (]) 18:34, 20 March 2011 (UTC)

Now that I have done a little bit of research via Google, I have a slightly more informed opinion than I had when I first responded to the RFC.

I think the article would benefit from relying more on what the sources say and less on what we "know" to be true about CPCs. Trying to make generalizations about "affiliation with Christianity, even 'conservative Christianity'" runs the risk of ] and ].

I have provided two sources in the section titled lower on this Talk Page. The key thing that we know as a fact is that CPCs affiliated with CareNet and CAPSS commit, as a condition of their affiliation, to require their employees to subscribe to a Statement of Faith or Statement of Principles that explicitly opposes abortion and forbids employees from referring CPC clients to an abortion center. Making that linkage explicit and clear is far more useful than trying to come up with the right formulation of "pro-life", "conservative Christian", etc. The opposition to abortion is the primary point. That CareNet and CAPSS consider this opposition to be an inherent component of Christianity is an important point but it's secondary to the fact that CPCs in these two networks are required to be anti-abortion. I don't think either network cares what a CPC employee thinks about gay marriage, divorce, ordination of women as clergy, etc. In other words, you don't need to be a "conservative Christian". To work at a CareNet or CAPSS-affiliated CPC, you need to be "anti-abortion" and "anti-birth control". We should say that and avoid tarpit phrases such as "conservative Christian" which carry along with them other beliefs (e.g. about homosexuality) that are not requirements of CareNet or CAPSS affiliation. --] (]) 15:39, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
:Well, you also need to believe in the divinity of Jesus to work for Care Net or CAPSS. I would venture to say that that is a fairly significant requirement. ] (] &sdot; ]) 16:04, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
::First of all, I hope my comments are taken as constructive rather than prickly or disputatious. If I start to sound that way, lt me know. It's not my intent to get stuck on defending a particular POV. I'm looking for NPOV ways to describe things based on what reliable sources say. That said, there are different levels of reliability among sources. We have to be careful not to rely entirely on the opinions of anti-CPC sources although there are certainly useful points to be gleaned from those sources. We just have to consider the POV of the source when using what they say. And, when describing what CareNet or CAPSS believes, it's best to go to their statements about themselves.

::So... from the CareNet website (1100 centers)

:::The ultimate aim of Care Net and its network of pregnancy centers is to share the love and truth of Jesus Christ in both word and deed. As a result, the hearts of women and men are being changed by Christ's love to desire positive and healthy choices. In addition, those struggling with past abortions are finding God's healing and forgiveness.

::Thus, it's safe to say that CareNet identifies itself as Christian.

::From the CAPSS website (71 centers)

:::The Canadian Association of Pregnancy Support Services (CAPSS) is a national, non-political, registered Christian charity, committed to equipping pregnancy support services.

::There are 4000 centers in the U.S. alone. Can we account for the other 2800 of them? Are they independent or are they affiliated with other networks? What statements can we make about the majority of centers? How about "Most centers are affiliated with Christian charities which are opposed to abortions."? All I'm looking for here is a way to avoid implying that all Christians are opposed to abortions. I'm not challenging the fact that CareNet and CAPSS self-identify as Christian. I'm just saying the two points are belief in Christ and opposition to abortion. These are a subset of the belief system called "conservative Christianity" but they are not all of it and I don't think you have to subscribe to all of conservative Christianity to work at a Christian CPC, just the two points of belief in Christ and opposition to abortion.

::--] (]) 17:05, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
:::Oh, I don't think you're being disputatious. Your comments are helping us find a more precise phrasing, and the objection makes sense. Most centers ''are'' Christian charities rather than merely ''affiliated'' with Christian charities - and shifting "Christian" to the affiliated centers doesn't really solve the problem you refer to, because those larger charities also have opposition to abortion as their primary purpose - but does "identify as Christian" (without using "conservative") solve the problem, getting across what needs to be got across without implying that anti-abortionists have a monopoly on Christianity? ] (] &sdot; ]) 17:10, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
::::Agree with Roscelese above. It is important to differentiate between those which are clearly tied to Christian charities, either as stand-alone entities or as subunits of a broader Christian charity, and those which are comparatively independent. The last point you raised above could be addressed by perhaps directly saying something to the effect that while there remains significant disagreement within the Christian community at large about abortion, many of the abortion opponents are actively involved in the anti-abortion movement. However, I do still think that if it is possible determining the relative size and activity of the various CPCs might also be useful, particularly if, as I think might be the case, BI is among the larger, better "staffed", and more active of the CPC entities. ] (]) 21:06, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::As above, I agree that it would be awesome to have information on the activity of the various CPC networks, particularly if that information is more recent than the info we have. It isn't a good idea to make decisions based on the presumption that Birthright is the most active unless we have a source indicating this, though (for all we know, it's just the more active one in your local area while Care Net is the most active elsewhere).
:::::I don't think it's necessary to say that not all Christians oppose abortion. We'll just have to be more careful to avoid making statements that imply that they do, rather than saying outright that they don't. ] (] &sdot; ]) 22:02, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::Just that phrase. It has a variety of meanings and it is not clear how it is being used. - ] (]) 12:54, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::I agree with Roscelese: stating that not all Christians oppose abortion is a digression. I'm satisfied that we avoid implying that Christianity=anti-abortion or that all those opposed to abortion are necessarily "conservative Christians" (whatever that nebulous term means). Just stick to the "two points" that are required by the CPCs: belief in Christ and opposition to abortion. Now, if there's a source that explicitly asserts that CPCs tend to be staffed by "conservative Christians", we can consider including it but it really would open up a can of worms and I'd be inclined to stay away from it. --] (]) 16:17, 23 March 2011 (UTC)

=="Run by"==
What does "Run by" mean? If it just means "a lot of Christians work/volunteer there, then that is more or less every place in North America. - ] (]) 07:57, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
:I don't think that's enough either, but I don't really see what you're objecting to in the text; it currently reads "run by pro-life Christians according to a conservative Christian philosophy." ] (] &sdot; ]) 08:06, 23 March 2011 (UTC)

== Ireland, redux ==

I've already ] problems with the section on Ireland. I'm really questioning now whether it should be included at all. While similar terms are used, the centers are much more like ] than the CPCs we're describing in this article. I think in order to discuss Ireland, we would have to focus our coverage on these "rogue agencies" whose behavior matches that of (American/Canadian/British) CPCs, rather than on programs that are superficially similar but that lack the defining characteristic of a CPC as we've defined it, ie. the refusal to help a client obtain an abortion. ] (] &sdot; ]) 06:59, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
:What makes you the arbiter of what is and is not a CPC? They are CPCs funded by the Irish government, if this is a global article I don't see why they wouldn't be included. - ] (]) 17:33, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
::So, in your opinion, CPCs are ''not'' "pro-life" organizations and ''do'' help women obtain abortions? That's in stark contrast to the sources we have about CPCs, so you'd have to provide references to support your view. ] (] &sdot; ]) 19:08, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
::(You also forgot to re-add the part about rogue agencies. Would you mind?) ] (] &sdot; ]) 19:17, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

::: supposed re-adding of the Irish section by Haymaker was greatly flawed in that it did not restore the negative information about "rogue agencies". I consider the restoration very non-neutral. ] (]) 19:42, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

== Lead Issues ==

Sarek reverted my change to the lead "While they provide women with information related to abortion, pregnancy and childbirth, they have routinely been found to disseminate ], usually but not exclusively about the health risks of abortion." This sentence as listed implies that ALL CPCs do this. There is nothing in any of the cites that say that they all do. It is impossible to actual say that all do. You have to remember that this article isn't like the Planned Parenthood article where you have a root company that is in charge of the individual clinics. This would be similar to saying ALL abortion clinics do x, y, and z when you know that the independant clinics may do something totally different. If you read through the section talking about this MOST of the sentences say some clinics have been found to say x, some say y, some say z. But it is OR and SYN to extend this to the ALL case. The only things that you can say about ALL CPCs is that they do not refer people for abortion, beyond that most things only apply to certain centers or organizations that run the centers. I personally know someone that operates a center, is a nurse and claims to never give out any of the information in this article that is listed as false information.] (]) 16:11, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
:We have more than enough citations now that the absence of citations to the contrary justifies "routinely." ] (] &sdot; ]) 16:40, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
::You can have all the sources you want, but unless something says they all do it, and they all do it routinely the sentence as currently worded is OR and SYN. It is impossible to prove the ALL case. The sentence after this one is much better at phrasing things in a way that shows that many may, but not all do.] (]) 16:58, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
:::No one has said "all." We can say that not all CPCs advertise deceptively because this is what our sources indicate, but we can't say "not all CPCs lie about health risks" because we have no source about any CPC ever telling the truth. ] (] &sdot; ]) 17:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
::::The sentence as written currently implies "all" that is where I get the all. Sourcing this is like trying to prove a double negative. To imply ALL CPCs routinely give out incorrect information you need a source for that. That is the higher burden of proof. To say some of them is only what the sources provide and which should be in the article. None of the sources say all CPCs give out bad information. Like I said before due to the lose structure of CPCs the only things you can say about all of them are things like they don't refer for abortion. Most of the other stuff only varies location to location, organization to organization, operator to operator.] (]) 17:05, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::Can you suggest an alternate wording that would satisfy your concerns without implying that we have sources about CPCs that ''don't'' give out false information/without implying that the sources we do have say that the CPCs that do are outliers? ] (] &sdot; ])
::::::Maurauder's point is well taken. "They" needs to be quantified. And removal of the tag I placed indicating there is an issue could potentially be viewed as disruptive. If there is an issue, which there is, the tag should remain until the issue is resolved. ] (]) 06:43, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::And I suppose you've joined this discussion because you have a reliable source up your sleeve about CPCs that ''don't'' lie? ] (] &sdot; ]) 06:46, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::The issue, as I understand it, is as followed:
::::::::*There is an entity type A = CPC
::::::::*Many examples of A are said to do B
::::::::*Sentence implies all examples of A do B
::::::::If my interpretation is correct, then ]'s logic is at fault, because we do not have definitely knowledge on CPC's that were not mentioned by the sources. Suppose you've read twenty sources saying individual Republican senators are adulterous and none that say any isn't, can you make a claim that all Republican senators are adulterous? ] (]) 07:23, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::That's why I've asked these users to suggest alternative ways of wording the sentence that address their problems without implying that we have sources that say these lies are rare or that attest instances of CPCs ''not'' lying. I'm hoping one of them will suggest something new, because Marauder's previous wording ("Some clinics have been found that..."), which did suggest that, was obviously not suitable. Do you have any ideas? ] (] &sdot; ]) 07:36, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::To add to my comment, I wouldn't have a problem saying "Republican senators are routinely found to be cheating on their spouses" because I don't feel that "routinely" implies "all" - "routinely" for CPCs lying seems to me to be comparatively generous! But like I said, I'm open to alternate ways of wording the sentence as long as it doesn't take the implication in the other direction. ] (] &sdot; ]) 07:43, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::::"Routinely" is a rather subjective quantifier and would require ] to back without ]. "Some", on the other hand, works because it simply states there is a non-zero number of CPC that satisfies a certain condition (i.e. whatever legal/moral infringement you guys are talking about). I'd say you should post this on the NPOV notice board. ] (]) 08:03, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::::Will do. ] (] &sdot; ]) 08:06, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::::::By the way, I'd advise you not to go against consensus alone and edit-war even if you think you are absolutely right. These issues can get you into a great deal of trouble regardless of whether or not your ''opponents'' are wrong or disagreeing with bad faith. In this case, I think they actually do have a point and so you shouldn't be so fast to dismiss their views. Anyhow, let's hope this upcoming RfC/NPOV discussion will help you guys sort things out. ] (]) 08:13, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::::::I agree that striking out boldly against consensus is a bad idea, but there certainly isn't consensus! Even if I ''was'' the only user opposing Lionel's and Marauder's edits, two against one does not consensus make. (Posted at NPOVN.) ] (] &sdot; ]) 08:15, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
{{outdent}}In that case, you'd be acting without consensus. While majority rule certainly has its flaws, that's really how WP works for the most part. That's not to say there aren't ways to legitimately contest faulty majority decisions, but these things tend to be hard. ] (]) 09:00, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
:"In that case, you'd be acting without consensus" - LOL, that's true of both adding the tag and removing it! That's why we have talkpages. :D ] (] &sdot; ]) 09:07, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
::Yes, but it's better to accuse others of breaking the rules than having others accuse you of breaking the rules. ] (]) 09:45, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
:::RS listed only documents 8 in Toronto area at one point in time, changed 'they' to 'some' and removed routinely. ] (]) 10:56, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::<s>Ohforchrissake is it really so difficult to look at the section where this is written up in detail?</s> Sorry, that was unnecessary - you're new to the article and maybe you didn't notice. (It's wikilinked.) We have seventeen separate sources. It would be obnoxious and disruptive to add them all to the lead. It's not just the 8 in that one article. ] (] &sdot; ]) 16:41, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
::::I agree with the current format. I also agree with the comments on the NPOV noticeboard that say the entire article reads like an advocacy piece. A couple weeks ago I thought I was going to take a swipe at working on the NPOV issues but the "battleground" that was ] delayed that and this week I had very little online time, maybe next week I will get a chance to look at it in detail.] (]) 14:02, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::Ha, you should have seen it a little while ago! ''Somehow'', it didn't occur to the editors working on it to include anything that people might see as bad. Anyway, as you may have seen from looking at this talkpage, I've suggested other sections that could be written - for example, would you be interested in helping write a section about how CPCs are sometimes seen as a new strategy in the political fight over abortion? Some of our sources take that view (ex. Gibbs). And Dylan Flaherty a while ago had suggested just providing more details about "a visit to a CPC," which I think is a fine idea and which you can find in the talkpage archive. (Also, do we have newer sources on the sonogram thing? Do we know what percentage of CPCs, or even a raw number, use sonograms?) And the "funding" section can be expanded - I'm sure there are notable laws relating to CPCs, we already mentioned that they got some money from abstinence funding but there must be more to say. In short, there are dozens of things one could add if one feels there is a neutrality problem! That's what I did, and if you think I've swung it too far the other way, you can do the same. :) ] (] &sdot; ]) 16:41, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::Also, with regard specifically to the sections that some might view as unfavorable, why don't we add perspectives from "pro-life" people, so that we at least have their point of view? I'm thinking specifically of one person commenting that women had no right to information that would allow them to have an abortion, ie. he thought it was a lesser evil. (Possibly in an article already cited, I don't recall.) I think this was in reference to advertising, but I wouldn't be surprised if we found something like that for medical stuff too. And we mention Birthright's criticism of the Pearson Foundation - do we have coverage of more "pro-life" groups criticizing some specific tactics? ] (] &sdot; ]) 17:36, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

* Since you think "routinely" implies too many, and I think "some" implies too few, would it solve the problem to just remove quantifying words and say "...they have been found"? ] (] &sdot; ]) 16:41, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
::Until we have sources that say "routinely", some is accurate. - ] (]) 17:33, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
:::I've already expressed my concerns with "some." Can you suggest an alternate wording that addresses your concerns without implying that we have sources on CPCs that don't lie? ("Frequently"?) ] (] &sdot; ]) 19:09, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
::::At this point, with 4 editors objecting to "they", I think we have consensus on "some" versus "they." Thus, I withdraw my issue regarding Ros's unwarranted, unjustified and disruptive removal <nowiki>{{how many}}</nowiki> tag.] (]) 19:40, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::Yes, I recognize that people disagree with "they" and "routinely," that's why I'm suggesting other ways of wording it, and asking for more suggestions, that address ''both'' sides' concerns. Given the seventeen cited sources on CPCs lying and the total absence of sources on their telling the truth (I also have a few more sources bookmarked that I'll get around to citing), would you support, for example, "many" (as subject) or "frequently" (as adverb)? Alternately, we used to have the sentence in the active rather than in the passive - would a phrasing like "Undercover investigations by journalists, congressional investigators, and pro-choice advocates have found..." better convey that this is what all our sources say, without, in your view, implying anything about the ones that aren't described in any sources? ] (] &sdot; ]) 19:48, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::I find Lionelt's "unwarranted, unjustified, and disruptive removal" comment to be a bit strong. So far, I don't see any deliberate POV-pushing, so try not to get too excited. ] (]) 21:53, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::What do you think of my more recent suggestions? ] (] &sdot; ]) 23:47, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::With all due, Bob,
:::::::#Unwarranted: the tag did not harm the article in the least-removal was unnecessary
:::::::#Unjustified: she had no policy justification for removal whatsoever
:::::::#Disruptive: it probably prevented editors from joining the discussion because they were unaware of the discussion--and this kind of behavior will eventually result in a block. I mean...look at this thread!!!!! The tag was fully w/in policy. This is outrageous.] (]) 22:04, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::These threads are nothing in terms of unproductivity compared to ones I've recently experienced :p. Anyway, at least you guys are getting somewhat productive now. ] (]) 01:10, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

Another suggestion: getting rid of the contrastive sentence entirely. Bobthefish2 also suggests using "CPCs" instead of "they." How does this sound? (the italics and strikeouts denote changes from the current version)

"CPCs provide peer counseling ''related to abortion, pregnancy and childbirth'', and may also provide pregnancy testing, STD screening, adoption referrals, religious counseling, financial assistance, prenatal services, child-rearing resources and other services. <s>While they provide women with information related to abortion, pregnancy and childbirth, some</s> ''CPCs'' have been found to disseminate false medical information, usually but not exclusively about the health risks of abortion."

-- ] (] &sdot; ]) 04:18, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

== Mandatory Counseling ==

It's kinda interesting that reading the PP article you would never guess they vacuum wombs, and reading this article you would never guess that they save babies. The stench of POV in this article is overwhelming... Wait a sec... I'm going to open a window. This section is a baby step (pun intended) in fixing the article. I'm sure the good folks in SC and SD bloviated ad nauseum about the wonderful attributes of CPCs - let's add it already!

Anyway, Ros has asked me to revert S Carolina. Well, I don't think so: "It provides Internet links on the State Department of Health and Environmental Control website to pregnancy centers that offer free ultrasounds."

Also, this section should not be hidden in "Services". Don't you think 2 states (more on the way) mandating CPC counseling deserves it's own section? ] (]) 21:41, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

:Since you mentioned NPOV, then please stop using unreliable sources like "lifenews.com". Unless there is significant media coverage, I'm not sure we need info on pending state legislation yet. The SC bill has NOTHING to do with CPCs, from what I gather. Many states already have mandatory waiting periods. Many states have mandatory counseling. None, except the SD bill, specify that a CPC must do the counseling (well they specify that a "pregnancy help center" must do it). Your new section has some facts wrong and is misleading because of this. I think we should wait for the bill to pass, and gather some more reliable sources and see what we can say about it. I believe the SD bill is notable, and probably we will have the sources for coverage in this article. But what we have now is problematic for the above reasons. -]&nbsp;</sup>]] 23:16, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

::Lionel, you aren't helping yourself by ranting about abortion. Now, if it's really true that South Carolina mandates CPC counseling, you should be able to find a reliable source that says so. You haven't even provided an ''un''reliable source that says so. As Andrew says, "mandatory counseling" does not equal "mandatory CPC visit" - and, as I pointed out to you, South Carolina doesn't even have mandatory counseling! They have a mandatory review of printed material which includes ''the addresses of those local CPCs which provide ultrasounds''. I don't understand why you didn't revert yourself after this mistake was pointed out to you. ] (] &sdot; ]) 23:41, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

== Effectiveness ==

I think we need a section discussing CPC results from a NPOV perspective. I.e., how many women seek counseling, how many babies saved, etc. You know, stats & stuff... ] (]) 22:44, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

:Do you know of any sources which discuss this? Any scholarly analysis? What did you have in mind?-]&nbsp;</sup>]] 22:56, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

:Babies saved? POV. How about the neutral construction: how many babies born to CPC clients? ] (]) 22:58, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

::(2ec) As long as you're talking about "babies saved" and "vacuuming wombs", there's no possible way to perceive you as an NPOV good faith editor here. ] (]) 23:01, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

:::That's what I suggested to Maurauder40 above - the proposal had been raised in the past and I think there was general agreement, but no one got around to writing it. You might find sources in the talkpage archives. I sincerely advise against writing about "babies saved," though. (Even ''aside'' from the terminology problem, we have no way of getting this information. Binksternet's suggestion of "babies born to CPC clients" is not a useful measure because we do not know how many of those women were seeking abortions and how many were not, and I doubt we will be able to find a ''reliable'' source that talks about the number of women that were persuaded to carry to term.) ] (] &sdot; ]) 23:34, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

== Lifenews content moved from main article ==

I've moved the lifenews sourced content here. Feel free to keep working on the text, and find more appropriate ] and then readd when up to basic Misplaced Pages standards:

<blockquote>
<s>===History===
The beginnings of the crisis pregnency movement can be traced to Canada. In 1968 the first center was established by Birthright. Alternatives to Abortion, today known as Heartbeat International, was founded in 1971. Christian Action Council founded it's first center in Baltimore, Maryland. The year was 1980. Christian Action Council eventually would become Care Net.<ref>http://www.lifenews.com/2009/09/30/nat-5523</ref></s>
===Mandatory counseling===
{{Expand section|date=March 2011}}
In 2010, South Carolina enacted the "Right to Know" law. This law mandates a 24 hour waiting period, and pregnancy counseling, prior to obtaining an abortion.<ref>http://www.lifenews.com/2010/08/18/state-5362</ref> The South Dakota legislature has passed HB 1217 requiring a 72 hour waiting period and mandatory counseling from a crisis pregnancy center. Governor Dennis Daugaard, who is pro-life, has indicated that he is "inclined" to sign the bill into law, though he said that legal staff would first examine it "to make sure there’s no unintended consequences that haven’t been identified during the debate."<ref>http://www.lifenews.com/2011/03/04/south-dakota-governor-likely-to-sign-72-hour-abortion-wait</ref>
</blockquote>

Also, whoever added "anti-choice" to the article, please don't do that again. Thank you.-]&nbsp;</sup>]] 23:22, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

:I don't think it's a bad idea to include the South Dakota law, though it should be cited to a real source (KSFY has covered it) rather than Lifenews. The South Carolina section, however, is just false. doesn't even mandate pregnancy counseling, much less a visit to a CPC. The addresses of CPCs are among the information that a patient is required to look at, and the law was signed at a CPC. That's all. ] (] &sdot; ]) 23:30, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
::Andrew, are you saying that Lifenews is not RS when reporting on Christian-based orgs? You may want to peruse ] before responding. ] (]) 00:05, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:::They are reporting on state legislature. They are not reliable when it comes to that, are they? KC sums it up well. Use with extreme caution and with an introductory qualification.-]&nbsp;</sup>]] 00:24, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::::With attrib are they reliable for the History section? ] (]) 00:26, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::Why not directly cite "A Passion to Serve, A Vision for Life"? That is the source for the lifenews article. Page 6 of the 'report' has all the info. I'd be fine with restoring the content, except neither source says that Birthright in 1968 founded an actual center in Canada. Both sources say "pregnancy center network", seeming to signify the first founding of an organizing, parent group. Are you OK with changing the citation to the report directly? -]&nbsp;</sup>]] 01:27, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::Yes! ] (]) 01:29, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::Looks great! ] (]) 01:47, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

== Sonogram ==

About 2 mos ago a RfC was 6-4 to exclude a sonogram. Which is VERY DISAPPOINTING beecause it is a free pic. Anyway, does anyone object, besides Ros of course, to putting a sonogram in the article? I did mention that it is '''free''' and we don't have to screw around with fair use, right? ] (]) 23:59, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
:LOL @ "it was 6-4 to exclude, does anyone besides Ros object"? Will you notify past participants that we're re-hashing this, or shall I? ] (] &sdot; ]) 00:03, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::Do you think it's worth it? ] (]) 00:07, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:::Sure. It's only two months later, but we shouldn't just assume that the voting begins at 6-4. Maybe people have changed their minds. ] (] &sdot; ]) 00:13, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::::I think it is a bit in poor taste to do so. We don't know the affiliation or political leanings of the mother. Would you want your child to be the posterchild for abortion if you were pro-life? Would you want your child to be the posterchild for CPCs if you were pro-choice? Since the photo itself has nothing at all to do with CPCs, it did not come from one, it seems to be taking something out of context, an making it represent something which it doesn't. Furthermore, how does seeing a sonogram help us understand CPCs more? Some CPCs provide free diapers, should we have a photo of diapers? Some perform pregnancy tests, should we have a photo of a pregnancy test (on the other hand, if it was a photo taken inside of a CPC of a display which included such articles, or photo of other resources inside a CPC, then that is another story). Maybe someone could go inside a CPC that has a sonogram machine and take a picture of the examination room and sonogram ''in situ''. -]&nbsp;</sup>]] 00:29, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

::::Shouting "VERY DISAPPOINTING" does not help. The article is helped by ''appropriate'' images, not by ones that are characterized only by being free. Otherwise, the article would have thousands of free images. Count me as a 'no' vote for any kind sonogram which is not ''typical'' of what the first time CPC customer might see. No high-tech images, and no mid- or late-term images. Mostly, the typical experience is to see a ghostly shape which is difficult to identify as human. ] (]) 00:26, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::::The image inserted against consensus was one of a fetus at 16 weeks, too old in most jurisdictions to qualify for an abortion. Any image we use should be 8–10 weeks old. However, the image should be one that can be traced to a CPC, not a generic one of unknown source. ] (]) 00:37, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::What about a ? ] (]) 00:39, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::Sure, why not? ] (]) 00:42, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::Works for me, although I think an image ''of a CPC'' would still be better. Can anyone take one? ] (] &sdot; ]) 00:48, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::Incidentally, it could be argued that the raison d'être of CPCs is to show women sonograms. It is the most effective way of saving the baby. ] (]) 00:43, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::Saving the baby from what? Saving it from having a father who doesn't want it? Saving it from having a mother unprepared to deal with it? Saving it from possibly having a cocaine addiction upon birth? Do not use the term "saving the baby" when discussing this topic, please. ] (]) 00:46, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::{{ec}} Do you actually have anything to contribute with this comment, or are you just trying to say "save the baby" as many times as possible? ] (] &sdot; ]) 00:48, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::If anyone has questions about the previous sonogram pic, i.e. where it was taken, does the mother mind being on the CPC page, you can ask ]] (]) 00:50, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::::If you're going to advocate the use of the sonogram image, I think it would be a nice show of good faith, after your POV comments here and in your edit summaries, if you were to invite back the previous editors yourself. ] (] &sdot; ]) 00:56, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::::Once Andrew gets around to restoring the History section due to WP:RSN thread I posted establishing the Lifenews as reliable, we could snag a pic off of a CPC website and insert it with a fair use rationale. ] (]) 00:53, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::::I think it's unlikely that a fair use rationale could be found. We should be able to get a free image. ] (] &sdot; ]) 00:57, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::::Belatedly - your 6-4 appears to be inaccurate. I count 7-3 (Roscelese, Binksternet, Gaius Baltar, FormerIP, Doc James, WikiManOne, Qwyrxian / Haymaker, WhatamIdoing, Apollo). ] (] &sdot; ]) 01:12, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::::::Interesting... Well the "excludes" are short one, and with myself, Maurauder and NYYankees it's tied. That's assuming NYY can avoid getting blocked long enough to vote. And with a little bit of my infallible reasoning, I could probably sway Bink. Very interesting... ] (]) 01:24, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::::::The fact that you automatically assume they would vote with you speaks volumes about your reason for wanting to include this image. ] (] &sdot; ]) 01:28, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::::::::Excepting Bink, you think I assume too much? ] (]) 01:33, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::::::::I think your thought process was "They haven't expressed an opinion on the use of images, but I do know they oppose abortion." It's entirely possible that you're right about what their opinions will be if they weigh in, but a) assuming someone's vote without asking them is still a bad idea and b) you're denigrating them by suggesting that they will let their political convictions override a commitment to building a better encyclopedia. ] (] &sdot; ]) 01:38, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::::::::::We are talking about the same NYY aren't we? LOL!!!! ] (]) 01:40, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::::::::::Kidding and politics aside, the sonogram pic is extremely appropriate. It's a huge issue of contention out there and very notable. It's the main thing states mandate when they start restricing abortion. Land put it best "If wombs had windows, people would be much more reticent to abort babies." ''Both'' sides know this... ] (]) 01:45, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::::::::::::That's exactly why it ''isn't'' appropriate. ] (] &sdot; ]) 01:53, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::::::::::::"If wombs had windows"... There would be a great many fewer unwanted pregnancies. The guys would be too weirded out. Hey, as long as we're wishing for the impossible, why can't we say "if scrotums had on/off switches for sperm..." ] (]) 03:02, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
:Unless the sonogram came from a CPC, it is '''highly''' inappropriate to include it here. If nothing else, there are most likely BLP issues.--] (]) 03:07, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

== State funding ==

This section is ripe for expansion. Each legislative act to fund CPCs in their respective state created a public record and probably news coverage extolling the virtues of CPCs. We need these refs to balance the article. ] (]) 00:17, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

== Proposed legislation ==

Double standard? ] (]) 03:25, 6 March 2011 (UTC)

:Without a clear statement of your complaint, I can only guess. I guess that you are comparing your addition to the section under the heading "Proposed 'Stop Deceptive Advertising for Women's Services Act{{' "}}. That proposal was put forward again and again and again, and was commented upon widely. ] (]) 03:37, 6 March 2011 (UTC)

::Currently, this section is highly inappropriate. It is citing a primary source (or press release), and apparently giving a play for play detail of it's legislative advancement. This sort of material, and the associated commentary, are not encyclopedic, and not up to Misplaced Pages standards. I think this could easily be summed up in a single sentence saying it has been introduced and failed X number of times. And only add that if we can source it to something besides the bill track. If it is commented upon widely, then we should cite those. Also, just to be clear on my position, I think the SD bill is very notable (and is quite odd, because it is akin to something like the government forcing citizens to go to an alternative medicine practitioner and wait 3 days before taking any pharmaceuticals). I also would like to think such an odd bill would get media coverage which is suitably reliable for Misplaced Pages. My main concern was lifenews, followed by a concern that Misplaced Pages isn't necessarily a blog or online newspaper, and thus breaking, up-to-date news isn't always best or encyclopedic, as we should wait for significant coverage and dissemination of sources.-]&nbsp;</sup>]] 16:39, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
:::I've got no problem cutting down the Stop Deceptive Advertising section a bit. Let's name its sponsors and note which Congresses it was introduced in; we don't need the Maloney quote, but I think we should include the quote from the bill's text. (As a side note, Haymaker removed content about the Montgomery Cty. legislation on CPCs - I think what happened is that the Washington Times source it was cited to was removed by someone who thought it was only there to support the statement about Baltimore. Anyone care to restore it? The source can be found in old revisions.) ] (] &sdot; ]) 17:13, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
::::Per consensus and in keepign with Wikikpedia standards removing speculative content relating to "pending" legislation. ] (]) 00:19, 8 March 2011 (UTC)

== Use of questionable sources in false medical information section ==

This article relies heavily on several questionable sources: , , and another . These three sources are cited 27 times. We shouldn't be using pro-choice sources for an article about abortion when the legitimacy of certain groups is being questioned. ] (]) 23:54, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
:A while ago we had a review of all the individual sources and we decided that even though NARAL wouldn't normally be acceptable as a source on CPCs, these sources merely provided specific examples/details of a principle that was well-attested by non-partisan sources. But ], so let's discuss it again. (Certainly it isn't as though the information is unsupported without those sources.)
:Note, though, that your assessment of the ''Examiner'' source is incorrect. It's hosted on the Choice Ireland website, but it's from a newspaper, and it's a news piece rather than an editorial (see the "news" banner at the top of the page). If you can find the piece hosted elsewhere, that would be good too, but to treat it as a partisan or opinion source is wrong.
:-- ] (] &sdot; ]) 00:22, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
::My mistake about the Choice Ireland piece. I'll review the NARAL pieces in more detail. ] (]) 01:37, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

===Location of the section===
I don't think the false medical information subsection should go with the services, since the CPCs don't intend to provide false information or advertise it. Should the section be relocated, and if so, where? ] (]) 01:37, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
:I suggest that we restore the layout to the way it was before, but rename "services" to "activities." "Activities" makes more sense anyway, given that it currently includes subsections "Religious affiliation" and "Advertising methods." Does that address your problem with labeling false information as a "service"? ] (] &sdot; ]) 02:10, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
::Works for me. ] (]) 01:52, 8 March 2011 (UTC)
:::Why not refocus the "Religious affiliation" section on counseling, and move the affiliation stuff to the "Affiliations" section? Let's see how that looks before we get rid of "Services" alltogether. ] (]) 19:35, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
::::I get what you're saying, but I'm not sure what you're describing is the best way to go about it. It would be difficult to create a subsection for counseling, since that is basically ''what CPCs do''! The sonograms and the false medical information and the evangelism, when present, are part of that. Maybe it would be better to put something in the head of the "Services"/"Activities" section (I still think "activities" is better, because it removes any POV issue with regard to the medical info - it's provided as part of counseling, which is ostensibly a service, but is lying really a service? better to say "activities") to indicate in a general way that sonograms, religious material, false medical info, etc. may be part of the counseling provided.
::::I think I actually advocated a while ago for the removal of the "Affiliation" section. It's almost entirely redundant to content mentioned earlier, and what isn't mentioned earlier could be. Thoughts? ] (] &sdot; ]) 20:00, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
A note on the bit about "The NC Atty-General has never received any complaints" - including it is bizarre and unconstructive. No one has asserted that NC CPCs are the worst, no one has said that their provision of false information violates the law, the existing content reflects individual cases rather than general state-by-state situations, and the paper presumably mentions NC at all because ''it is an NC paper''. Why would we single out this one state, except for the fact that you're grasping for positive information about CPCs? ] (] &sdot; ]) 01:22, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

== Technical notes ==
As a favor, can I ask everyone to a) date templates so that a bot doesn't have to do it for you and b) stop using bare URLs as references? The latter is particularly annoying - besides that it is unsightly in the reference list, it also means that if the link goes dead we have absolutely no way of finding the story again. If you use a citation template that includes the title, the author's name, etc. there is a better chance of finding the story at a new address or in an archive. ] (] &sdot; ]) 01:22, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

== NARAL strategy ==

{{quote|The "Baltimore model" is a strategy concocted by NARAL to stop CPCs from "taking away their clients" according to Matt Bowman of the Alliance Defense Fund. The strategy is comprised of two steps:
#Arrange for the publication of news reports describing how CPCs "mislead women"
#Pro-choice activists collaborate with "sympathetic lawmakers" to push though laws which curtail CPCs' ability to assist women
The strategy was first deployed successfully in Baltimore City. An anti-CPC law was written by Stephanie Rawlings-Blake, upon request and lobbying by NARAL and Planned Parenthood. Rawlings-Blake has received special acknowledgments by the two organizations. NARAL was then instrumental in the passing of similiar legislation in Austin, Texas. According to Bowman this is "part of a nationwide strategy by pro-choice groups to force crisis pregnancy centers nationwide to post signs so that women intending to get abortions will not unwittingly enter." The CPCs targeted by these tactics are fighting back. Centro Tepeyac Women’s Center in Montgomery County has filed a lawsuit in Federal court to overturn the law based on free speech grounds. A similiar lawsuit was filed in Baltimore which was ultimately successful.}}
This is no more POV than the rest of the article. Well, maybe the "concocted" part. But that's fixable. Any objection to restoring with concocted removed? ''Afterall it's sourced...'' ] (]) 04:58, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
:Alliance Defense Fund is not a reliable source on NARAL's strategy. ] (] &sdot; ]) 05:09, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
::Washington Times is. Objection handled and I assume you're on board. Anymore '''Include''' votes besides Ros? ] (]) 05:20, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
:::Washington Times's RS status is irrelevant because it doesn't support your claim that NARAL is trying to steal CPCs' clients. The "...says a guy" afterthought isn't really an effective figleaf. ] (] &sdot; ]) 05:29, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
::::So when the source talks about CPCs are required to post signage, well, that's relevant, but the part about the NARAL strategy, no, that's not relevant? Well, why don't we just set a policy that anything detrimental to CPCs is relevant, and anything positive regarding CPCs is irrelevant. That solves everything! ] (]) 05:50, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::The source doesn't say that <s>this</s> is NARAL's strategy, so your consternation is just a bit unwarranted. ] (] &sdot; ]) 05:58, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::This is ridiculous. The first pro-lifer that restores my enlightened addition gets a ]. ] (]) 07:47, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::Dude, I've alluded to this before in the discussion about a sonogram image, but I'll say it outright now: ]. If you're going to let your political opinions take precedence over your commitment to building a better encyclopedia, working on political articles might be a bad idea for you. ] (] &sdot; ]) 07:57, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::Lionel, I'm on your side, but Roscelese is right that ]. I know it's easy to allege a liberal conspiracy on here, but the allegations won't help. That said, I support your edit. The Washington Times information is not derived from ADF but from , and their information comes from NARAL itself. ] (]) 18:49, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::No, the Women's eNews item was written by non-NARAL reporter Julia Marsh, who works for a Japanese newspaper: ''Yomiuri Shimbun''. Marsh also has been an editor at ''The Manhattan Times'', an associate editor at Huffington Post, and a reporter for Columbia News Service. Her contribution to Women's eNews is not a NARAL promotion—it is real reporting. ] (]) 19:02, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::{{ec}} I think we could put a statement in the "local ordinances" section that NARAL is behind some of these laws, and perhaps include a brief quote from the Women's eNews article if you want, but Bowman's opinion that it's an attempt to steal clients from CPCs (NARAL is not an abortion provider) has no place in this article. ] (] &sdot; ]) 19:19, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
There are some problematic phrasings going on. We shouldn't allow Matt Bowman to characterize the "Baltimore Model" from the get go. Bowman thinks NARAL is up in arms because they are loosing clients, but this is a very minor point from one individual, not the defining aspect. Next, it is odd that you say it is a 2 step approach, when the Julia Marsh piece makes it clear it is a 3 step approach. While perhaps the Times piece makes that unclear, the way it has been phrased here has introduced an inaccuracy. I don't like the scare quotes around "mislead women". Either quote more of the context from the release, or remove the quotes entirely. Saying NARAL was "instrumental" seems like unsourced commentary to me. Times said that they just took credit for it. Anyway, I see there is a new version in the article, so some of my comments regarding the old version no longer apply. I have made some changes which I think improve readability, accuracy, and NPOV. I'd be glad to discuss any of them in more detail. I think Lionel believes this story puts NARAL in a bad light, and was eager to get it in the article as a zing to that side of the debate. But I think when examined more critically (or phrased more neutrally), it isn't that bad, nor more importantly, that interesting or notable. It would be nice if there were more sources discussing the topic. Perhaps getting in the legal issues, the actual laws and courtcases may be a productive area of investigation. As it is, I feel it isn't that notable and doesn't really help the article much. But with more research and revision, and focusing more on the "disclosure laws" vs. "free speech" issue and court cases, I think we could build up the section to something worthwhile, which is why I don't support outright deletion. However, if additional research doesn't turn up anything, and we are just stuck with this on Times article, and the press release style piece from "womensenews.org", then I think the article may be better off without this section. -]&nbsp;</sup>]] 21:10, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
:] offer made in the spirit of ]. Upon reflection and in fairness to all parties involved, I'm expanding the offer to pro-abortion types and to any fetuses that survived their abortion and who are now productive members of society. ] (]) 00:15, 18 March 2011 (UTC)
::If you're buying I'll take a double-patty sammich with that processed cheese gluing the filets together... and a bit too much tartar sauce. Mmmm! ] (]) 00:21, 18 March 2011 (UTC)
:::I didn't know they made a double, Bink!!! My offer is only for a single, but you have to put the section back in... ] (]) 01:07, 18 March 2011 (UTC)
::::Bravo Arthur! Don't let the sauce stain your clothes. ] (]) 01:47, 18 March 2011 (UTC) ]
:::::Actually, I'm pro choice, even though I probably wouldn't be here if abortion had been legal 58 years ago. Personally, I think abortion should be safe, legal, and rare. I don't like CPCs misleading vulnerable young women, so I like what NARAL is doing. I think it is a good strategy. Having said all that, as a Misplaced Pages editor, I strongly support NPOV and the best possible references. I haven't exhaustively compared the DC Times article vs. the Women's ENews source vs. the "NARAL Strategy" part of this article. I'll leave it to others to ensure good balance and NPOV. I just wanted everyone to have the best sources available. Oh, and thanks for the virtual Filet-O-Fish. Yum! ] <sup><small>]</small></sup>/] 02:08, 18 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::I still don't think it needs the weight it's getting - it's a minor point to what is already a minor section. How's this, as a sentence in the "State and local ordinances" section? "Some campaigns to pass disclosure laws are supported by NARAL Pro-Choice America, which cites the ways in which 'the centers mislead women'." It is not necessary to include Bowman's opinion: neither he nor his statement have any credibility. ] (] &sdot; ]) 02:21, 18 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::Shows how much I know... all that talk about a section on "disclosure statements" must have sounded ignorant coming out of me. I just realized we already HAVE that section, titled "State and local ordinances". I think the ordinance section should be merged with the NARAL section, as they are not independent topics at all. We discuss Baltimore and Austin's ordinances in one section, then have a completely different section talking about Baltimore and Austin's ordinances. Really?? Why was this new section created in the first place. Gah. Show what happens when I'm not very active on Misplaced Pages, and don't keep up with the latest changes and such. Perhaps a sentence (or two) along the lines of Roscelese phrasing can be added in to the preceding section. I'm not completely opposed to Bowman's or the Time's commentary though. -]&nbsp;</sup>]] 02:33, 18 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::] I am so sorry NYY. I misread the history: you should've gotten the Filet. And by the looks of the tartar all over Arthur he's already scarfed it down. But wait, I found another! ] (]) 06:02, 18 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::But why have fast-food? I recommend homemade dairy kugel for all your meatless holidays...
:::::::::(And now, of course, in the "The following pages on the English Misplaced Pages link to this file" section...] and ], an odd combination.) ] (] &sdot; ]) 06:17, 18 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::::::Lionel, please deliver the filet to me within the next two hours or I will be forced to eat a delicious meatless meal of hard boiled eggs instead! ] (]) 21:53, 18 March 2011 (UTC)

==Neutrality==
The article is written from the POV that CPCs are bad. The word "false" appears 13 times, "deceptive/deception" 11 times, "midlead/misleading" 5 times. Total 29. I know word frequency ''doesn't mean anything'' in an article: let's just say it quantifies my point. Reading the article is a chore. Every other sentence refers to something false/deceptive/etc. I am not a proponent of Criticism sections, but it may be the only way to get a handle on the redundancy. ] (]) 22:36, 18 March 2011 (UTC)

:To me it reads okay. What you've quantified is your reaction to it, not its absolute neutrality, if there can be any such thing. There's no way a criticism section will make this article better. Criticisms are interwoven with CPC actions and reactions. ] (]) 23:32, 18 March 2011 (UTC)

:{{ec}}So find reliable sources that describe positive things they do, and add them. Easy.
:What would you propose putting in a criticism section? It seems to me that everything in it could easily be integrated into existing sections (which is why that's exactly what was done with the criticism section that used to exist). I don't see the point of separating "They sometimes advertise that they provide abortions" from "Some people don't like that they sometimes advertise that they provide abortions." A criticism section would ''create'' redundancy rather than ''reducing'' it. ] (] &sdot; ]) 23:35, 18 March 2011 (UTC)
::On Misplaced Pages, neutrality doesn't mean we present all views as equal. It means we represent views in relation to their prevalence in our sources, and that we don't take sides. If it appears we are critical of CPCs, it could be because the majority of our sources are critical of CPCs. If we present them in a bad light, it could be because most sources present them in a bad light. However, we do have to be careful of having bias in source selection. We could give the illusion of "most sources feeling X", by selectively citing only biased sources. We also have to be careful how we craft our sentences. Misplaced Pages itself shouldn't take sides on a controversial issue. We should not make general blanket statements supporting one side of a controversy, but instead attribute those views to the proper sources. But we also have to make clear what views (if any) are more prevalent. Neutrality does not mean it is our job to correct perceived wrongs. We don't have to treat both sides equally if our sourced don't. And perhaps this is the "liberal media" bias or what have you, but again, Misplaced Pages's place is not to correct those wrongs, just repeat what is found in sources. All this is just general advice. It has been a while since I have read through this article, and I am not commenting on any specifics, nor how well I feel we are currently accomplishing this. I don't think a simple pseudo-statistical analysis of how many times we use negative words is that helpful.-]&nbsp;</sup>]] 16:13, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
Words are important, and many of our sources and statements are from the abortion industry. - ] (]) 18:34, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
:There are a number of reasons this statement is false. ] (] &sdot; ]) 19:33, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
:One of the most heavily used documents in the list of references is from the U.S. House of Representatives. These people are from the "abortion industry", whatever that is? Most of the other sources are mainstream newspapers and magazines. Do these publications perform abortions? I think this statement of yours, Haymaker, is incorrect.
:I continue to question whether the POV tag is doing any good here. I don't see the problem defined clearly at all. If it is not actionable, the tag helps no one. ] (]) 19:38, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
::Is this NPOV? {{quote|Some campaigns to pass disclosure laws are supported by NARAL Pro-Choice America... which cites the ways in which "the centers ''mislead women''." ... NARAL's model, based on the one used in Baltimore, involves publishing studies on how CPCs ''mislead women''}}
::Seem redundant to anyone?] (]) 02:37, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
:::I also think it's redundant, but if I remember correctly, I'd already made one revert at the time I folded that from a separate section into the local ordinances paragraph, so I didn't want to remove anyone else's text. How about: 'Some campaigns to pass disclosure laws are supported by NARAL Pro-Choice America, a pro-choice political organization, which cites the ways in which "the centers mislead women." The organization took credit for the passage of the Austin law.' Avoids redundancy, avoids unnecessary information (their plan for passing laws includes talking to lawmakers? no really, do tell!) ] (] &sdot; ]) 04:08, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
::::AH HA! So you admit it! ] (]) 20:15, 23 March 2011 (UTC)

== Re: description of religious affiliation for CPCs ==

]]

Per ], the lead should reflect the article content, rather than (necessarily) any one specific source, so "run by conservative/pro-life Christians" would be fine. However, are you still in favor of "run according to a conservative Christian philosophy" or something like that? Could they be combined? (ie. "run by Christian pro-life supporters according to a conservative Christian philosophy" or something, or would that sound redundant?) ] (] &sdot;]) 16:44, 21 March 2011 (UTC)
:Alternately, "identify as Christian and are run on a conservative Christian philosophy." ] (] &sdot; ]) 20:21, 21 March 2011 (UTC)
::At this point, you understand my concern (that we not imply that all Christians are pro-life/anti-choice). The specific wording is not one that I'm that wrapped up in. However, I will point out that I am also concerned that whatever wording is used be supported by a source. The article had a citation to an article in the Austin Chronicle that didn't seem to say anything about CPCs being Christian. I would like to see a source that specifically says that most CPCs are run by pro-life conservative Christians. I'm not doubting the assertion. It's just that, without a reliable source, the assertion is susceptible to being characterized as]. --] (]) 03:48, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
:::Yeah, I got rid of the Austin source. Not actually sure how it got there - perhaps it was originally cited for something else in the lead and no one took it out as content shifted. (As for your other concerns - is the fact that thousands of centers ''require'' their employees to be Christian enough? We don't have a demographic survey - although it would be interesting if one could be found, to get age/sex breakdown and whatnot - but we do have that requirement, and no other source indicates that it isn't enforced.)] (] &sdot; ]) 04:59, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
::::I'd want to see what the source actually said. On the face of it, it would seem obvious that, if there are 4000 CPCs in the U.S., and "thousands of them" require their employees to be Christian, then most (meaning "more than half") have this requirement. However, "most" is a funny word than can be read to mean anything from "51%" to "90%" so some clarity is useful but difficult to do if there are no sources that provide this level of detail. It would be really easy to perform ] here unintentionally. The safest course is to stick to what the sources actually say rather than what we "know" to be true.
<s>::::Also, the question isn't really about whether a CPC employee is "Christian"; it's about what the CPCs mean when they assert this requirement. Would they say, "Hey! you're pro-choice and so you don't meet our definition of 'Christian'. You can't work here."? </s> ] (]) 17:45, 22 March 2011 (UTC)]]
::::--] (]) 15:01, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
:::::It's both. They require employees to oppose abortion, yes, but they ''also'' require them to be Christian. An anti-abortion Orthodox Jew could not work at a Care Net or CAPSS facility.
:::::Anyway - our sources state that the networks that make up a vast majority of CPCs both in the US and outside of it are Christian, by description/self-identification and also sometimes by other characteristics such as employment requirements or evangelism. You may disagree, but I don't think it's original research to look at sources that say "these 1000+ centers are Christian" and "these 1000+ centers are Christian" and "these hundreds of other centers are Christian" (for whatever value of the phrasing you'd like). That seems like a summary of the article/paragraph contents. ] (] &sdot; ]) 16:04, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
::::::Yeah... sorry. I think I went off the rails on that point. I think the problem is that I haven't read and absorbed all of the information in the article and the relevant information is in different places in the article. The article reads "Together, Care Net and Heartbeat International accounted for three quarters of CPCs in the United States, as of 2007." Since those two are both Christian organizations, we can assume that three quarters or more of CPCs in the U.S. are Christian. I think that sentence belongs closer to the beginning of the paragraph rather than being buried in the middle. (I just did that) --] (]) 17:45, 22 March 2011 (UTC)

== Religious affiliation ==

This section requires the reader to make an inference (that CPCs require employees to be pro-life). It would be better to make the point explicitly. Currently the text reads:
<blockquote>
Many CPCs require their staff to be Christian. For example, as a condition of affiliation, Care Net and the Canadian Association of Pregnancy Support Services, the two largest CPC organizations in the United States and Canada respectively, require each employee and volunteer of a prospective affiliate to comply with a statement of faith. CPCs unaffiliated with either of these may also require staff to be Christian.
</blockquote>


The point that is being made here (I assume) is that the Care Net Statement of Faith and the CAPSS Statement of Principles involves a commitment to being pro-life and anti-abortion. We should make that point explicitly by finding these statements of faith and quoting directly the principles that are related to opposition to abortion.


Here are a couple of sources that may be helpful:


http://www.prochoice.org/pubs_research/publications/downloads/public_policy/cpc_report.pdf
This source has a clear anti-CPC POV. However, if one is careful to separate opinion from fact, the source can be useful. In particular, look at page 6 of this source...
<blockquote>


== Worklist ==
Many CPCs are connected with religious organizations, but few disclose that fact in their advertising.37
Pearson’s CPC guide book states that, “he guiding principles for every Pearson Foundation Emergency
Pregnancy Service shall be: 1. To oppose abortion in all its forms… 2. To be free to talk about God and the
Mother’s relationship to Him…”38 Nevertheless, most CPCs do not initially disclose to women that they are
driven by a religious agenda and that they oppose abortion and birth control. In Canada, many CPCs not
affiliated with Birthright are a part of an umbrella organization known as the Christian Association of
Pregnancy Support Services (CAPSS). Affiliates must adhere to the CAPSS Statement of Faith, Sanctity of
Life Statement, Stewardship Policy, Statement of Principles, Counseling Code of Ethics, and Volunteer
Training Guidelines.39
CPCs offer their “services” to women of all faiths, but their programs are often driven by extreme religious
anti-abortion agendas. In some of their literature CPCs discuss religious messages about abortion and quote
biblical passages that they claim show that God does not support abortion.40 Care Net has a Volunteer Manual
that is full of religious messaging;41 however, it does not instruct volunteers to inform women who call or come to the centers that they are contacting a religious organization. The CAPSS Volunteer Manual instructs volunteers “never to advise or refer a single woman or man for contraceptives” since this would be inconsistent with the “clear command in Scripture to abstain from sexual intimacy outside of marriage.”42 None of these materials mention the numerous religions and religious individuals who support choice and reproductive freedom.43 Despite the CPCs’ claim that their first priority is to ensure the health of women, the name-filled banners reading “Babies Saved from Abortion” and “Salvations” which hung in the staff room of one CPC reveal a very
different agenda.44


This is my list of stuff to do in the article. Partly for my own reference, but also in case other people want to tackle them, of course.
</blockquote>


* try to get demographics of CPC clients: numbers, ages, etc. (need neutral sources for this, or very careful use of promotional sources) Numbers on how many people find CPCs when looking for abortion clinics would be awesome but might not exist. (we do however have two different stats on how many women in Ireland encounter a CPC when looking for non-directive crisis pregnancy counseling)
http://www.thestar.com/news/canada/article/844997
* include in "activities" a little information on the "delaying" tactic of CPCs (use existing sources, which I'm sure talk about it)
<blockquote>
* <s>consider integrating the court cases section to the advertisement section of the article, since they're all about that. Anyhow, the sections in the legal status section are somewhat arbitrary - as we mention in the local ordinances section, there have been court cases about that too, and I'm sure we could rustle up court cases about funding - info about mandatory counseling isn't a ''law'' but would still seem to belong.</s>
The CAPPS statement of principles state: "The CPC is committed to integrity in dealing with clients, earning their trust, and providing promised information and services. The CPC denounces any form of deception in its corporate advertising or conversation with clients, agencies or other individuals. The CPC does not recommend, provide or refer for abortion or abortifacients. However, the CPC is expected to respect the decision of a woman to obtain an abortion, and not to intimidate or judge a woman in this regard."
**court cases about funding?
</blockquote>
* '''', another court case. Like the others, state-level with no evident fallout, so it may be worth trimming all of them a bit. Though see immediately above re: desirability of section.
* bring things up to date (numbers, funding)
* integrate Ireland section (CPCs vs. legit pregnancy counseling) into other sections of article
* add to "activities" a subsection on adoption (, find more sources)
: Here's a great article on that very thing!
* do more with the sources we're aware of but haven't used yet, eg. in the external links, or some that I have bookmarked; there are probably also some that we already cite but could get more from.
* on CPCs' role in the anti-abortion movement (also from sources we have, eg. grassroots, fight)
* web advertising:


–] (] &sdot; ]) (not putting a date so this won't be archived)


*two articles regarding google removing CPC false advertising ] ]
--] (]) 15:23, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
:We could definitely include that as well. However, you seem confused: the statements of faith do require staff to be anti-abortion, yes, but also include the belief that "Our Lord Jesus Christ is God manifest in the flesh" (CAPSS)/"We believe in the deity of our Lord Jesus Christ" (Care Net). It isn't an assumption on our part that "opposes abortion" = "Christian," it's actually in the text. ] (] &sdot; ]) 16:04, 22 March 2011 (UTC)


==Lede NPOV issue==
There's a pretty egregious POV issue in the lede of this article that {{u|Binksternet}} and {{u|Avatar317}} have introduced while acting in good-faith with mostly reliable sourcing (we can ignore my sourcing concerns for this discussion; it's not relevant to the POV issue and is a reasonable judgement call either way per ]). Looking at our articles on the ] and ], it's pretty clear the established deference is towards exclusion of non-neutral terms from the lede sentence of articles on abortion. Concerns about the vitriolic language ("anti-women", "baby-killers", etc.) and more subtle POV'd lingo ("anti-choice", "pro-abortion") have seen these exclusions. Per an ongoing discussion (follow the link above) and Avatar's sourcing (thank you!), "fake abortion clinic" is clearly ''a'' term for CPCs among their opponents. However, including ''obviously'' POV charged language into the lede sentence on a delicate article is inappropriate. However, it is also obvious that both editors I've mentioned have been working on good-faith, if somewhat out of step with precedent. I hope to see their input and encourage discussion from anyone else who sees this! ~ ] (]) 02:05, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
:The term isn't strictly partisan as you portray it. It's also used by scholarly sources. four years earlier. with "Fake Abortion Clinics" as a sub-heading. ] (]) 02:17, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
::Should have asked to be pinged; my bad, please ping me in the future if you want to respond directly to me specifically. Academic sources are swell, but even they use the term in scare quotes for the first few mentions. We could probably find a few scholarly articles that use the terms I mentioned above (not the nastier ones) but that still does not mean that placing them in the lede sentence is any less charged and POV'd. Also, for those who had the same trouble with checking out the first source Binksternet—I am so sorry I almost abbreviated your name in a dreadful way, lmk if there's a way you prefer—the source comes from '']'' rather than "Women Health" as the .gov website claims. Thanks for the quick reply. ~ ] (]) 02:26, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
:::You can shorten my username to Bink if you prefer.
:::The understanding on Misplaced Pages generally is that the person initiating a talk page discussion will check in to see the responses, if any. Pinging that person isn't required; some folks would consider it pushy or just too much noise. I was responding to the topic, not to you personally.
:::The scholarly paper "Beyond ''Bray''" has on page 167 a discussion of crisis pregnancy centers under the heading "Fake Abortion Clinics". The first instance of the term ''crisis pregnancy centers'' is in quotes while "fake clinics" is never in quotes, flipping the situation you described: {{blockquote|In the 1970s, a Missouri-based anti-abortion organization called the Pearson Foundation issued a ninety-three page manual for setting up "crisis pregnancy centers." National groups such as the Christian Action Council and the National Institute of Family Life, began cooperating with individual operators to set up several thousand anti-abortion centers disguised as women's health clinics.These non-profit organizations call themselves "abortion clinics" or "abortion alternatives" but have no medical staff and do not offer abortions. The staff members use deception and religious threats to convince women not to terminate their pregnancies. Estimates of the number of fake clinics presently in operation in the United States range from 1500 to over 3000.}}
:::The author, ], a Harvard Law School doctoral candidate at the time, continues to call these places "fake clinics" in the remainder of the piece. ] (]) 03:01, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
::::Bink, fair judgement call on the ping but just a personal preference! Again, we aren't establishing the term as being viable (a matter for the redirect convo linked above) but the inclusion of obvious POV terms in ledes. In each case, we're looking at ideological persuasions resulting in preferred nomenclature used by only one side of a debate (some academic sources might or might not accept as a generic term). Per our last discussion, it's apparent you prefer precedence in other articles and I have presented that. Thanks for clarifying preferred shortening on name; I'll remember it should we get the chance to chat more! ~ ] (]) 03:36, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
:In my opinion, a QUALIFIED statement like we currently have in the lead: ..."sometimes called a pregnancy resource center (PRC), and '''a fake abortion clinic by supporters of abortion rights'''..." is NPOV. We are explicitly stating who (more often) uses that term.
:] states: "By the design of Misplaced Pages's software, an article can only have one title. When this title is a name, significant alternative names for the topic should be mentioned in the article, usually in the first sentence or paragraph." ---''']]''' 05:34, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
::{{re|Avatar317}} Apologies for belated response and ping (unsure if you're still watching this). This policy suggest significant alternative names, but we exclude significant alternative names of a derisive nature (again, see other abortion-related articles; see ] for an example of a ''potentially'' derisive name in use). The succeeding sentence of that policy also suggests a terminology section is necessary should we proceed with this third significant name in the lede. I agree on in-text attribution but am very disappointed it took going to the talk page to get that. ~ ] (]) 01:43, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
:::Except this name isn't derogatory; it is accurate: at least for a very high percentage of these clinics as evidenced by the fact that there are many deceptive advertising laws created against them because of their intentional deception. Many (maybe not ALL, but a very high percent) INTENTIONALLY try to deceive women into believing that they are an abortion clinic, so that women will visit them rather than an abortion clinic: so this name isn't derogatory, for the great majority of these centers (maybe all) it is descriptive. ---''']]''' 06:23, 23 September 2022 (UTC)


===Request for comment===
::I think I didn't express myself clearly and I may even have been confused along the way. Part of the problem is that we are talking about stuff that is discussed in three different parts of the article. It would be good to bring the points we've been discussing together once in the lead and in a single section in the article.
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Should the first sentence list the alternate name "fake abortion clinic"? ] (]) 18:38, 26 September 2022 (UTC)


====Discussion====
*'''Yes''', because "fake abortion clinic" is a term that is used by many sources to refer to these places. The term was used in scholarly journals starting in the 1990s. In 1990, J.A. Mertus published the scholarly paper "Fake abortion clinics: the threat to reproductive self-determination".<ref name=WH_1990> {{cite journal |last1=Mertus |first1=J A |date= |title=Fake abortion clinics: the threat to reproductive self-determination |url=https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/2309498/ |journal=Womens Health |volume= |issue= |pages= |doi=10.1300/J013v16n01_07 | access-date=2022-09-15 | quote=The establishment of "fake abortion clinics" poses a great threat to women's ability to make free and informed procreative decisions. Such clinics intentionally deceive pregnant women into believing that they provide a full range of women's health services when, in reality, they provide only a pregnancy test, accompanied by intense anti-abortion propaganda. }}</ref> In 1994, ] published the paper "Beyond ''Bray'' " with a subsection titled "Fake Abortion Clinics", putting "crisis pregnancy center" in quotes but giving fake abortion clinic and fake clinic as the standard term.<ref name=Eisenberg1994>{{cite journal |last=Eisenberg |first=Rebecca |authorlink=Rebecca Eisenberg |title=Beyond Bray: Obtaining Federal Jurisdiction to Stop Anti-Abortion Violence |date=1994 |url=https://heinonline.org/HOL/LandingPage?handle=hein.journals/yjfem6&div=10&id=&page= |journal=] |pages=167–170 |volume=6 |number=1 }} Originally written in late 1992 for Harvard Law School.</ref> Modern media pieces have used this term, for instance , the , and the . It's a negative term but it is seen widely enough to be listed. ] (]) 18:38, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
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*'''No'''. Why the hell does it need to be in the first sentence?
:] (]) 18:51, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
::Because it's an alternative term that is used in enough sources to qualify as significant. ] says the significant alternative names "should be mentioned in the article, usually in the first sentence or paragraph." ] (]) 23:55, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
*'''Yes'''. (I came here from the RfC listing.) There is sourcing for it, and this is a situation where NPOV indicates that it ''should'' be used. I looked at the lead section, and it strikes me as having some pretty serious POV problems, in that it tends to imply that most of these centers are legitimate medical centers that just happen to have a particular point of view. They aren't. They are set up to mislead. A properly NPOV and encyclopedic article here will present that fact dispassionately, not paper it over. --] (]) 19:28, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
**Following up, I'm OK with it being in a sentence other than the first one, so long as it's in the first paragraph of the lead. It should not, however, be treated as something that critics call it, because that's not accurate. It's what neutral observers call it. (Just as we wouldn't say that critics call ] pseudoscientific.) --] (]) 21:28, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
**And with this series of new edits: , I'm now satisfied with the overall NPOV of the lead section. --] (]) 18:26, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
***I was satisfied as of those edits, but with recent reverts by one editor, I'm no longer confident that it was a stable version. --] (]) 21:12, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''Yes''', per Bink's sourcing and Trypto's NPOV analysis. --] 19:58, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
*'''Yes''' per Bink and Tryptofish's reasoning. <span style="white-space:nowrap;font-family:'Trebuchet MS'"> — ] ] ] 😼 </span> 20:52, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
*'''No''', not in the first line. It is sourced so we should mention that it they are sometimes called this, but I think a good approach is that the subject themselves wouldn't use this term. So, I suggest the 2nd sentence could be something like "They are also referred to as "fake abortion clinics" by critics" or similar referenced statement. --] <sup style="color:black">]</sup> 21:10, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
**I could live with that approach, though I think it should be in the lead section. <span style="white-space:nowrap;font-family:'Trebuchet MS'"> — ] ] ] 😼 </span> 04:27, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
**:* I agree that it should be in lead paragraph but not necessarily the first sentence. I feel it is ], but I don't feel it is important enough for the very first sentence. <span style="background: black; color: white; font-family:Tahoma; padding:1px;">Dobble</span><span style="color:black; font-family:Tahoma; border: 1px solid black;">stein</span> 🎲 🎲 <span style="color: green;">]</span> 19:44, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
::The guideline ] allows for any position within the first paragraph. But "critics" is not entirely true; topic scholars have used the term neutrally, positioning the term "crisis pregnancy centers" as biased in the same fashion as "pro-life", which we do not use as a neutral term.
::Also, there is no source saying that the term "fake abortion clinics" is used by critics. That is a conclusion we might make as we attempt to summarize the sources. But some of the sources using that term are not simply critics—topic scholars such as Rebecca Eisenberg have used the term. ] (]) 04:54, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
:::So how about attributing the term to critics and to topic scholars? The "no" objections being raised here seem primarily concerned with wiki-voice being used. <span style="white-space:nowrap;font-family:'Trebuchet MS'"> — ] ] ] 😼 </span> 07:35, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
::::<s>'''No''', again. Hedging would be acceptable, but a better approach is something like "They are also referred to as "fake abortion clinics" by critics" or similar referenced statement. ] (]) 23:35, 11 October 2022 (UTC)</s>
::::::Striking the above comment as it is from a user (now blocked) trying to impersonate me (almost certainly connected to ]. --] <sup style="color:black">]</sup> 00:49, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
:::::Except that it's not just critics. It's also the media and topic scholars. ] (]) 23:41, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''No''' (invited by the bot) Unthinkable to do it in the voice of Misplaced Pages. Per the previous post, something attributed and with context like "They are also referred to as "fake abortion clinics" by critics" might be useful in the body of the article. This isn't info about the centers, it's info about what critics say about them. <b style="color: #0000cc;">''North8000''</b> (]) 21:37, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
*'''No''' For the reasons stated in my edit. It is not a particularly common name for crisis pregnancy centers, not even among their opponents. From doing a little Googling I found that "pro-life pregnancy center" was far more common and that "anti-abortion pregnancy center" was just about as common.] (]) 19:10, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
:]'s comments above manage to be wrong on two counts. The lead sentences definitely do not imply that that these are normal medical centers. Saying that a CPR "'' is a type of nonprofit organization established by anti-abortion groups to persuade pregnant women against having an abortion''" clearly establishes it as primarily a social and not primarily as a medical organization. As for saying that "fake abortion clinic" is what "neutral observers" call a CPR, its far less than common usage belies the fact. ] (]) 19:42, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
::Thanks for the ping. I stand by what I said. We can certainly agree to disagree on the current language of the lead section as a whole; these things are subjective. However, your argument about common usage should be tempered by what it says at ]. (It's written mainly in terms of notability, but it's also useful in the context of what we are discussing here.) The fact that a term gets more or fewer search engine hits has little bearing on its neutrality for purposes of NPOV. I'm not arguing that "fake" is the ''most common'' descriptor. (If it were, I'd argue for renaming this page.) I'm arguing that neutral observers consistently treat these centers as being fake. It's not just pro-choice critics who characterize them that way. Our NPOV policy requires that we characterize the page subject according to the preponderance of reliable sources, not according to splitting the difference between those sources and what the page subject would prefer. A neutral and encyclopedic article about these centers will describe them as fake versions of reproductive medicine clinics, intentionally designed to be deceptive. --] (]) 20:02, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
:::Thanks for your response. You would be more accurate in saying "''I'' consistently treat these centers as being fake". Where does the notion that "neutral observers consistently" do so come from, other than your wish? They certainly don't seem to use the term all that often; and for "fake abortion clinic" to be used as an alternate name in the first line of the article it really needs to be used either frequently or else formally. It passes neither test. ] (]) 20:28, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
::::You seem to be accusing me of being a POV pusher. Let's see how the RfC goes. --] (]) 20:34, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
*'''Comment'''. Lots of articles in websites, newspapers, magazines and journals refer to CPCs as fake clinics or fake abortion clinics or both. Here are more examples. These examples are listed only to prove the widespread and frequent usage of the term. ] (]) 22:13, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
:* by ]
:* by ]
::*Same story in ] UK.
:* by ]
:* by ]
:* by ]
:* by ]
:* by ]
:* by ]
:* by '']
:* by ]
:* by Rewire News Group
:* by Maine Family Planning
:* by ]
:* by HeyJane.co
:* by AbortionClinics.com
:* by reproaction.com
:* by ]
:* by ]
:* by ]
:* by '']''. "Crisis pregnancy centers" is presented in quotes as biased, but "fake abortion clinics" is given without quotes as the standard term.
:* by ]. "Crisis pregnancy centers" is presented in quotes as biased, but "fake abortion clinics" is given without quotes as the standard term.
:* by ]
:* by ]
:* by '']''
:* by Austin Women's Health Center
:* by Vice Media
:* by ''The Crime Report'', published by the ]
:* by '']''
:*In 1990, punk singer ] spray-painted the words "Fake abortion clinic, everyone" on the outside of a "teen pregnancy center" which had just opened in ]. Her boyfriend ] took the can of paint and added "God Is Gay". Hanna said the place was "a front for a right-wing operation telling teenage girls they’d go to hell if they had abortions." This pop culture anecdote was described in , , and .
:::I can observe that some of these sources are from groups that can be regarded as critics, such as Planned Parenthood and NARAL. But even so, these sources include Fortune, The Guardian (looks like a different author, by the way), The Hill, US News & World (by way of the Associated Press), and R29 (part of Vice Media). --] (]) 22:36, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
:::Some more sources are now listed here, and they include The Washington Post, Stat, CNBC, The LA Times, John Jay College, and USA Today. I think that, taken collectively, clearly takes it out of the narrow categories of critics and topic scholars, and into a significant swath of general use. --] (]) 18:48, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
*'''No''', I don't think it's an accurate description.--] (]) 00:54, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
*'''Yes''' The first time I wanted to visit this page, I typed in fake abortion clinic. This is clearly the most used name for this topic. The article could say that it is mostly called this way by critics. ] (]) 15:13, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
*'''Qualified yes''' fake abortion clinic is used as a redirect and is in common enough usage that it should have some explanation for the term and why it's used. That being said, I think anywhere in the lead paragraph is sufficient. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 15:19, 28 September 2022 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
::Impressive work by Binksternet, but we could find just as many, if not more, usages of the far less hostile term "anti-abortion pregnancy center" in reliable sources. Again, "fake abortion clinic" is not a suitable description in the first line of an encyclopedic article. ] (]) 17:46, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
:::To repeat yet again, the number of search engine hits is not the appropriate measure here, nor is the quantity of perceived hostility. --] (]) 17:54, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
*'''<strike>Skeptical</strike> no'''. I see that a lot of sourcing has been produced above of "neutral" sources describing these centers as "fake abortion clinics". Absent is any mention of a CPC describing itself as an "abortion clinic". For example, can anyone point to a CPC website where they call themselves an "abortion clinic"? Or where they state that they provide abortions? <ins>The diff from ] below convinced me that the label is not appropriate. Even a supporter of the label is, by the use of the word "or", implying that some CPC's are not in the business of claiming to be abortion clinics. See ], in particular the phrase "verifyable accuracy".</ins> ] (]) 19:12, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
**I just took a quick look at the first source listed on the long list just above (). It says: {{tq|When the researchers searched for “abortion clinic near me” and “abortion pill”, Google displayed a selection of 3 local providers in listings headed “abortion clinic” or “abortion pill” on its first results page. The research found that in some cases where there was only one registered abortion clinic in the whole state, Google instead directed users to fake clinics in their vicinity.}} --] (]) 19:19, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
::: I just did a search on "CPAP", and was on the first page of hits. I also tried a search on "fly Boston to New Haven", and the first page of hits included , which recommended train travel. A search on "Avis" got me on the first page. I even tried a search on "pregnancy crisis center", and the second hit was a Planned Parenthood page attacking them. The point is that searches often lead to related information, including from competing people and/or ideas. ] (]) 22:48, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
::::You are looking for CPCs describing themselves as abortion clinics? That's not the issue at hand. You are bringing up quite another matter—the central point of the article—a fact which is thoroughly covered in the article already: CPCs are in the business of tricking pregnant women into thinking they are abortion providers, abortion referral agencies, or at the very least the first step toward getting an abortion. This has been published fact for many decades, not in question. If you would like to challenge this aspect of the article, please start a new talk page topic with its own header. ] (]) 01:53, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
:::::If an entity is a "fake X", I would expect them to describe themselves as an "X". ] (]) 15:03, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
::::::That's an interesting expectation, and unrelated to the question at hand. For the purpose of this RfC, it doesn't matter in the slightest whether CPCs have called themselves abortion clinics. Other parties ''have'', and frequently enough to list. ] (]) 15:17, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
:::::::Thanks for your comments. They have helped to clarify the issue for me. If "other parties" describe them as something, then perhaps the "other parties" are faking, but the CPCs themselves are not. ] (]) 15:20, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
::::::::It sounds like you've made up your mind, which is fine. But it's untrue to characterize sources that describe them as fake as all being sources that, themselves, are faking. There are clearly some sources that are advocates against CPCs. But if we discount those sources, we still have multiple sources from mainstream news organizations that say the same thing. Our policies on this require us to base what we say on such independent secondary sources, and not on original research based on an editor's interpretation of whether or not the use of particular language in the names of CPCs is or is not intentionally misleading. --] (]) 20:07, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
:::::::::Is ] a Misplaced Pages policy? ] (]) 21:19, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
::::::::::It's an information page. We have a policy page at ]. --] (]) 16:50, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
:::::::::::Just to make sure we are clear, here. Your position is that, if something is sourced, but inaccurate, it belongs in an article, not withstanding the sentence at ] <i>All articles must strive for verifiable accuracy, citing reliable, authoritative sources, especially when the topic is controversial or is about a living person.</i> ] (]) 17:20, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
::::::::::::I think this is best expressed at the lead section of ]. We go by what reliable sources say is accurate. We do not go by what an editor thinks is accurate or inaccurate, because that would violate ]. That's what "verifiable accuracy" means. What I'm advocating for this page is accurate, according to ]. Obviously, I would never advocate content that reliable sources characterize as inaccurate. --] (]) 17:41, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
::::::::::@] you are misunderstanding Misplaced Pages policy. It doesn't matter whether the Moon Landing and Round Earth are TRUE, Neutrality requires that we accurately summarize what Reliable Sources say about them. Any arguments about whether they are true or not will be ignored. We do not waste time on anyone trying to debate the "truth" of Evolution, Global Warming, or any other topic. Similarly any attempt to argue whether "fake abortion clinic" is true will be ignored. The only thing that matters here is whether "fake abortion clinic" is actually in use as an alternate name, and whether that usage is sufficiently significant to mention. ] (]) 11:14, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''Yes''' : ] states: "By the design of Misplaced Pages's software, an article can only have one title. When this title is a name, significant alternative names for the topic should be mentioned in the article, '''usually in the first sentence or paragraph.'''" ---''']]''' 05:36, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''Yes''': Per the overwhelming sourcing provided by {{noping|Binksternet}}. The "they don't call themselves that" argument advanced by some is not in ] and is frankly completely irrelevant. The ] never called themselves that either, nor does ] call itself "Germany". ] (]) 17:53, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
*<s>Yes</s> - This is the way a huge number of reliable sources describe them. I support including it in the lead along the lines as it is currently (not in the first sentence). The arguments that a subject must describe ''itself'' in a certain way -- organizations which, as we cover in the article, have had many legal challenges ''specifically'' because they misrepresent themselves -- are intensely unpersuasive. &mdash; <samp>] <sup style="font-size:80%;">]</sup></samp> \\ 21:35, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
*:Just noticed this "yes" opinion which really should be a "no" since the proposition in question asks if "fake abortion" clinic should be in the first sentence while you have said that it shouldn't. ] (]) 04:31, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
*::My mistake. I misread the question as asking about the lead. I think it should be in the lead. Without time to revisit the sourcing right now, I'm just striking my boldtext vote for now. &mdash; <samp>] <sup style="font-size:80%;">]</sup></samp> \\ 13:41, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''Yes''' per ], extensive coverage in reliable sourcing that uses that term. To answer the arguments made above, saying that it is an alternative name is ''not'' using it in the article voice; it is just (accurately) covering the fact that that is how they are often called. Attributing this to "critics" is inappropriate because some of the sources using it are impartial news sources and even scholarly journals. Neither are names in common use required to be neutral or dispassionate in any case - we report the common names, we don't judge them. The question of whether the subjects themselves use the term is not a meaningful criteria. Likewise, arguments along the lines of "I don't think it's accurate" or "I don't think they present themselves as abortion clinics" are immaterial - to report it as an alternative name, we ''only'' care about whether it is commonly-used that way in high-quality sources, which it plainly is. --] (]) 15:25, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''Qualified Yes''' per Bink, Trypotofish, and Aquillion. If the sources call 'em that, then we get to call 'em that. However, we ''could'' use a more formal term, for example "posing as" or "impersonating," if that would be more encyclopedic. The issue I see is one of tone. The truth is behind paywalls and propaganda's free. Misplaced Pages should be as accurate as possible, and "fake" is accurate. ] (]) 00:42, 7 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''No''', as per the others. In fact we might want to remove pregnancy resource center too. ] (]) 13:25, 9 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''No''', Not unless we also include the term "Pro-life pregnancy center.", a term that is far more common. ] (]) 22:46, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
**Including "pro-life pregnancy center" would be supported by sources, so it looks like you would be in favor of the above proposal. ] (]) 22:55, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''No''' as the sources presented are certainly reliable but would set an impossible untenable precedent; do terms like "myth" or "heresy" deserve mention in the first sentence of articles like ] or ] or "pro-abortion" in ]? Of course, the best partial counterexample is ]. ~ ] (]) 23:05, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
*:{{Like}} ] (]) 23:11, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
*:I think the idea of using both terms in the lead is a good idea, and I would happily support it. As for setting a precedent, that's just not how WP works. No other page would be required to make content decisions based simply on a decision here, and the comparisons with Hinduism are exaggerated. --] (]) 16:26, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
*::I'd be fine with that. ] (]) 19:51, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
*:::If someone can point me to a source for it, I'll add it. --] (]) 19:59, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''No''' but I support including it in the lead, where it currently sits. The WP policy for alternate names being included in the lead sentence is not exclusive to the opening sentence; in fact, it says "or opening paragraph." Mission accomplished.
:Also, ], provide some sources for that argument like Blinkernet did above. I think you make a great point.] (]) 22:51, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
::I have only looked at the headlines, but so far I have found and . ] (]) 18:42, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
:::Lastly, Fox News uses it a lot, but I am not sure if it is reliable enough. ] (]) 18:51, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
::::I've added it: (as well as the corresponding redirect). --] (]) 23:06, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
:::::Thanks. I guess I am now in favor of the proposal also to include the term "Fake Pregnancy Center" per ]. ] (]) 02:00, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''No - Keep in First Paragraph''' It does not need to be in the FIRST sentence. The alternative name "Fake Abortion Clinic" is in fact prominently in the first paragraph, which is consistent with all Misplaced Pages policies. As edited this position allows the exact reason the name is used by scholars and other advocates to be stated <span style="color:red">(ie, language to the effect: CPCs are sometimes referred to as '''fake abortion clinics''' by scholars, the media, and supporters of ] '''due to deceptive advertising practices that may obscure the clinic's anti-abortion agenda to potential patients seeking abortions''')</span>. Placing this alternative name in the first sentence without elaboration is not helpful to the reader, and does not read naturally. –]<sup>⋉]</sup> 14:08, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''No''' – "fake abortion clinic" is a non-neutral ''description'' of a "pregnancy crisis centers". It is not another name for them according to the majority of sources that have been presented. The lead should remain the same; however, the sentence, which mentions "fake abortion clinic" in the lead, should say "described as" rather than "referred to as". Also, the phrase should not be bolded but rather only placed in quotation marks. --] (]) 02:45, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''No''' - The way it is now is the perfectly fine. Another option would be introducing it in the second sentence maybe. The issue with just presenting it as an alternative name is that it’s used under the connotation that CPC’s mislead people to believe they are running an abortion clinic, and that context couldn’t be easily translated to the reader through the first sentence. ]<sup>]</sup> 15:35, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''<s>Comment</s> No''' <s>I don't like that many</s> almost all of the sources that are mentioned to support this are from pro-choice organizations (i.e Planned Parenthood ect.) eta:regardless this can't be in wikipedia voice, and seems npov anyway ] (]) 23:01, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
::Actually, a bunch of those sources are mainstream media and topic scholars. Some are even pro-life. ] (]) 23:39, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
:::I should remove almost all, but the majority are pro-choice/femminist, i.e are not "center" I stand by that this should not be in wikipedia voice. ] (]) 01:06, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''Qualified yes'''. In the sources listed above, the name isn't described by them, but indicate that they are described as such. ] (]) 22:34, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''Lead'''. I'm not too particular about whether it's in the first sentence, and dedicating a separate sentence to it may well be more appropriate to explain the usage. There is abundant sourcing for this phrase being used, it is clearly significant to understanding the subject and why it is controversial. It is clearly ] to explain why this alternate term is used. ] (]) 11:26, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
*'''No'''. Its current position is appropriate, but the ] needs to be trimmed. ]] (]) 17:35, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
*:I grouped the sources so that readability is now improved. ---''']]''' 23:29, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
*::No, it's still citation overkill. And I don't understand why you made three footnotes with two each; why not just one with six? ]] (]) 01:24, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
*:::I'd suggest that editors propose which citations to remove and which to retain, here in talk. Since that's not the RfC topic, I'd also suggest making a separate subsection for that discussion. --] (]) 17:13, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
*:::Firstly, I oppose removing ANY of those citations, since as can be seen from the contentious discussion above, in my opinion, they are all needed. StAnselm (of all the editors who contributed to this discussion) is the only one arguing that there are too many sources - based not on POLICY but on an ESSAY which talks about readability concerns. I have fixed the readability concerns with my edit, and, as I said in my edit summary, I made 3 with 2 references each for easier readability on mouse-over of the reference tag. ---''']]''' 23:24, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
:::::Well, to be fair, nobody else is talking about it because it's not really part of this discussion. I'm happy to wait until the RfC is concluded before we address this issue. ]] (]) 04:25, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
:I agree. This viewpoint is one-sided and misleading to the reader. If a visit to a medical pregnancy clinic, along with a transcript of an interview perhaps with the CEO or RN's representing said clinic, would show a clearer picture of what pregnancy medical clinics such as these actually represent. This should not be an opinion piece from one viewpoint, but a deep dive on the ins and outs of a functioning pregnancy medical clinic. It does not make sense there are three pregnancy medical clinics and centers in the country for every Planned Parenthood facility, if other options were not needed. ] (]) 20:32, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
*'''No''' as per non-NPOV arguments above. ] (]) 02:29, 3 May 2024 (UTC)


===Views of medical associations===
::In brief, you don't have to be a conservative Christian to work in a CPC. You have to be Christian and you have to be opposed to abortion. That probably means you are going to be a conservative Christian but the CPCs don't make any requirements about your beliefs other than about abortion (and, in at least some cases, birth control).
In a lead-related disagreement that is closely intertwined with the discussion above, we have differing views of an attributed opinion that I sourced to two medical professional associations: , . In my opinion, it is better to attribute the opinion to the associations, than to say it vaguely in Misplaced Pages's voice. I also consider the source from the two associations, published in the '']'', is a reliable and due-weight source, with an ] ranking (per our page) of 9th out of 128 pediatrics journals and 30th out of 193 public health journals. I have notified WikiProject Medicine of this discussion, to get more opinions on the suitability of this material (). --] (]) 16:59, 30 September 2022 (UTC)


:The ATTRIBUTED statement (as you put it) is clearly better than an UNATTRIBUTED "some" which is ]. ---''']]''' 05:48, 1 October 2022 (UTC)


::An attributed quotation is is fine when it has due weight in an article. The quote in question doesn't for a variety of reasons. The lead is supposed to preview the body of the article. While it is true that the body contains criticisms of crisis pregnancy centers, no material from the quoted sources appears in the body. The quote is a throw-in from otherwise unused sources and not especially prominent ones. These are not America's leading obstetric, gynecological, or pediatric societies. Thus to feature their quote in the lead is most definitely giving them ]. Perhaps the quote could be placed in an appropriate section in the body of the article. ] (]) 16:35, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
Re birth control... the Catholics oppose birth control but it's not clear to me how Protestants view birth control. The CareNet website doesn't seem to say anything about it. The CAPSS Volunteer Manual instructs volunteers “never to advise or refer a single woman or man for contraceptives” since this would be inconsistent with the “clear command in Scripture to abstain from sexual intimacy outside of marriage.”
:::I have no problem with including the material in both the lead and farther down on the page. It's an odd criterion to say that only the leading medical society is eligible for us to cite. Ones that are legitimate medical societies that represent medical practice in their indicated fields are reliable sources, as we define RS, for the mainstream views of practitioners in those medical fields. I hope that some editors from ] will be able to advise us about these two societies. I'd also be happy to ask at ]. --] (]) 19:55, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
:::I've added it lower on the page, so that should take care of that. --] (]) 20:19, 1 October 2022 (UTC)


== Fixing the article to reflect a more NPOV, and to also be more globally focused. ==


Hello, @]. I have made this section on this talk page so we can discuss the changes I make before I proceed with new ones. I appreciate your suggestion of doing edits incrementally, and for this most recent one, I have edited the first portion of the article (the lead paragraphs). I won't edit anything else until we discuss and find consensus on the amended contents and new structure of the lead section.
::In the lead ... "Crisis pregnancy centers (CPCs), also known as pregnancy resource centers are non-profit organizations established to counsel women against having abortions.CPCs are typically run by pro-life Christians according to a conservative Christian philosophy, and often operate under the auspices of one of three groups:..."


I hope to have a productive conversation where we can work together to improve this article to reflect a more neutral point of view, whilst not adhering to one specific perspective. ] (]) 02:24, 10 May 2024 (UTC)


:<big><u>'''Here is the''' '''lead section I proposed, which I see as much more neutral and accurate than the current one.'''</u></big>
::In the section "Religious affiliation"... This section assumes that CPCs are opposed to abortion (well, we did already say that in the lead) but it doesn't make the linkage between Christianity and abortion. The primary goal of a CPC is not to evangelize; it is to prevent the abortion but evangelism is part of the process of preventing the abortion. We should more clearly indicate that the opposition to abortion is based on their understanding of Christian faith. (Yeah, it's kind of implied but the article would benefit from making the linkage explicit.)
:A '''crisis pregnancy center''' ('''CPC'''), sometimes called a '''pregnancy resource center''' ('''PRC''')<ref name="aboutheartbeat2">{{cite web |title=About Us |url=http://www.heartbeatinternational.org/services-about-us/about-us-home |url-status=dead |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20120531145616/http://www.heartbeatinternational.org/services-about-us/about-us-home |archive-date=May 31, 2012 |access-date=2010-11-26 |publisher=Heartbeat International}}</ref> or a '''pro-life pregnancy center''',<ref>{{cite news |last=Brown |first=Lauretta |date=July 8, 2022 |title=Pro-Life Pregnancy Centers Help Women – Why Are They Being Targeted? |url=https://www.ncregister.com/blog/pro-life-pregnancy-centers-targeted |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20221012184214/https://www.ncregister.com/blog/pro-life-pregnancy-centers-targeted |archive-date=October 12, 2022 |access-date=October 12, 2022 |newspaper=National Catholic Register}}</ref><ref>{{cite news |last=Pavone |first=Frank |date=March 20, 2018 |title=Why should a pro-life pregnancy center be forced to advertise abortion? |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/posteverything/wp/2018/03/20/why-should-a-pro-life-pregnancy-center-be-forced-to-advertise-abortion/ |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20191205041205/https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/posteverything/wp/2018/03/20/why-should-a-pro-life-pregnancy-center-be-forced-to-advertise-abortion/ |archive-date=December 5, 2019 |access-date=October 12, 2022 |newspaper=The Washington Post}}</ref> is a type of ] that typically offers counseling, ], and/or a variety of medical services from an ] perspective.<ref>{{Cite web |date=2024-03-02 |title=Why support for crisis pregnancy centers is surging after the end of Roe v. Wade |url=https://www.pbs.org/newshour/show/why-support-for-crisis-pregnancy-centers-is-surging-after-the-end-of-roe-v-wade |access-date=2024-05-08 |website=PBS NewsHour |language=en-us}}</ref> Many crisis pregnancy centers are established and/or supported by anti-abortion groups. Crisis pregnancy centers do not provide or refer for ]. Instead, CPCs often deter women from obtaining abortions and urge other alternatives instead.<ref name="Sonograms2">{{cite news |last=Chandler |first=Michael Alison |date=2006-09-09 |title=Antiabortion Centers Offer Sonograms to Further Cause |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/09/08/AR2006090801967_pf.html |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20061231113627/http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/09/08/AR2006090801967_pf.html |archive-date=2006-12-31 |access-date=2008-02-24 |newspaper=] |page=html}}</ref><ref name="Bazelon2">{{cite news |last=Bazelon |first=Emily |date=2007-01-21 |title=Is There a Post-Abortion Syndrome? |url=https://www.nytimes.com/2007/01/21/magazine/21abortion.t.html?pagewanted=1&_r=1&adxnnl=0&adxnnlx=1190386628-YJ8YY6wRm1G3NshX/wMaAg |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20090424092919/http://www.nytimes.com/2007/01/21/magazine/21abortion.t.html |archive-date=2009-04-24 |access-date=2007-11-06 |work=] |page=cover story}}</ref>
:In the ], there are an estimated 2,500 to 4,000 CPCs<ref name=":42">{{Cite web |last=Institute |first=Charlotte Lozier |date=2021-07-19 |title=Fact Sheet: Pregnancy Centers – Serving Women and Saving Lives (2020 Study) |url=https://lozierinstitute.org/fact-sheet-pregnancy-centers-serving-women-and-saving-lives-2020/ |access-date=2024-05-08 |website=Lozier Institute |language=en-US}}</ref><ref name=":22">Montoya, Melissa N, Colleen Judge-Golden, and Jonas J Swartz. 2022. “The Problems with Crisis Pregnancy Centers: Reviewing the Literature and Identifying New Directions for Future Research.” ''International Journal of Women’s Health'' 14 (June): 757–63. <nowiki>https://doi.org/10.2147/IJWH.S288861</nowiki>.</ref> that qualify as ]. Crisis pregnancy centers may provide pregnancy testing, ], prenatal care, ], STD testing, counseling, and/or other services.<ref name=":42" /><ref>{{cite web |date=2019 |title=The Truth About "Crisis Pregnancy Center" |url=https://www.care-net.org/hubfs/Downloads/The_Truth_About_Crisis_Pregnancy_Centers.pdf?hsCtaTracking=a06cb313-a1fe-45c0-813a-236ab3c8fbfe%7C19a83cca-5f9e-4352-8c70-bb7f26222f7c |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20220424180746/https://www.care-net.org/hubfs/Downloads/The_Truth_About_Crisis_Pregnancy_Centers.pdf?hsCtaTracking=a06cb313-a1fe-45c0-813a-236ab3c8fbfe%7C19a83cca-5f9e-4352-8c70-bb7f26222f7c |archive-date=24 April 2022 |access-date=11 October 2022 |publisher=] |location=], ]}}</ref> Some crisis pregnancy centers operate without medical licensing under varying degrees of regulation.<ref name="motherjones.com2">{{cite web |last=Redden |first=Molly |date=12 October 2015 |title=One State Finally Cracked Down on Deceptive Anti-Abortion Pregnancy Centers |url=https://www.motherjones.com/politics/2015/10/state-just-became-first-crack-down-deceptive-anti-abortion-pregnancy-centers |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20180614072144/https://www.motherjones.com/politics/2015/10/state-just-became-first-crack-down-deceptive-anti-abortion-pregnancy-centers/ |archive-date=14 June 2018 |access-date=9 July 2018 |work=]}}</ref> There are many more crisis pregnancy centers than abortion clinics in the United States. As of 2020, there were 807 ] in the United States.<ref name=":22" /><ref>Guttmacher Institute. 2022. “Guttmacher Institute Releases 2020 Abortion Provider Census with Important Data on US Abortion Landscape Before the Fall of Roe | Guttmacher Institute.” December 1, 2022. <nowiki>https://www.guttmacher.org/news-release/2022/guttmacher-institute-releases-2020-abortion-provider-census-important-data-us</nowiki>.</ref> Hundreds more CPCs operate outside of the United States; including in Canada, Latin America, Africa, and Europe.<ref>{{Cite web |last=Mehler Paperny |first=Anna |date=May 20, 2016 |title=Crisis pregnancy centres mislead women, report says |url=https://globalnews.ca/news/2703632/crisis-pregnancy-centres-mislead-women-report-says/ |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20200416234123/https://globalnews.ca/news/2703632/crisis-pregnancy-centres-mislead-women-report-says/ |archive-date=2020-04-16 |access-date=2020-04-19 |website=Global News |language=en}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |title=Worldwide Directory of Pregnancy Help |url=https://www.heartbeatinternational.org/worldwide-directory |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20200422200316/https://www.heartbeatinternational.org/worldwide-directory |archive-date=2020-04-22 |access-date=2020-04-19 |website=www.heartbeatinternational.org}}</ref><ref>{{Cite news |last=Albaladejo |first=Angelika |date=2017-10-26 |title=US groups pour millions into anti-abortion campaign in Latin America and Caribbean |url=https://www.theguardian.com/global-development/2017/oct/26/us-groups-pour-millions-into-anti-abortion-campaign-in-latin-america-and-caribbean |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20200113165907/https://www.theguardian.com/global-development/2017/oct/26/us-groups-pour-millions-into-anti-abortion-campaign-in-latin-america-and-caribbean |archive-date=2020-01-13 |access-date=2020-04-15 |work=The Guardian |language=en-GB |issn=0261-3077}}</ref>
:Many CPCs are run by ] groups that adhere to a ] and anti-abortion viewpoint,<ref name="grassroots2">{{Cite magazine |last=Gibbs |first=Nancy |date=February 15, 2007 |title=The Grass-Roots Abortion War |url=http://www.time.com/time/printout/0,8816,1590444,00.html |url-access=subscription |url-status=dead |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20070218124958/http://www.time.com/time/printout/0,8816,1590444,00.html |archive-date=February 18, 2007 |magazine=Time}}</ref> and they often operate in affiliation with one of three non-profit organizations: ], ], or ]. In 1993, the ] (NIFLA) was formed to provide legal advice to CPCs in the U.S.<ref name="Bazelon2" /><ref name="silverstein2">{{Cite book |last=Silverstein |first=Helena |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=bwglJ82CfgMC&pg=PA200 |title=Girls on the stand: how courts fail pregnant minors |publisher=NYU Press |year=2007 |isbn=9780814740316 |page=200}}</ref><ref name="aboutnifla2"> {{webarchive|url=https://web.archive.org/web/20100819225336/http://www.nifla.org/about-us-what-we-do.asp|date=August 19, 2010}}</ref> During the ] (2001–2009), U.S. CPCs received tens of millions of dollars in federal grants.<ref name="Edsall2">{{cite news |last=Edsall |first=Thomas B. |date=2006-03-22 |title=Grants Flow To Bush Allies On Social Issues |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/03/21/AR2006032101723_pf.html |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20080724030552/http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/03/21/AR2006032101723_pf.html |archive-date=2008-07-24 |access-date=2007-11-06 |newspaper=] |pages=A01}}</ref> {{As of|2015}}, more than half of U.S. state governments helped to fund CPCs directly or through the sale of ].<ref>{{cite web |last=Ludden |first=Jennifer |date=March 9, 2015 |title=States Fund Pregnancy Centers That Discourage Abortion |url=https://www.npr.org/sections/health-shots/2015/03/09/391877614/states-fund-pregnancy-centers-that-discourage-abortion |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20180402021020/https://www.npr.org/sections/health-shots/2015/03/09/391877614/states-fund-pregnancy-centers-that-discourage-abortion |archive-date=April 2, 2018 |access-date=April 4, 2018 |publisher=NPR}}</ref>
:Crisis pregnancy centers are controversial, especially in the United States. ] claim that such centers are obstructing and hectoring women by deterring them away from accessing abortions or accurate information about them.<ref name="star2">{{Cite news |last=Smith |first=Joanna |date=August 7, 2010 |title=Deception used in counselling women against abortion |url=https://www.thestar.com/news/canada/article/844997 |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20121023004336/http://www.thestar.com/news/canada/article/844997 |archive-date=October 23, 2012 |access-date=August 26, 2017 |work=Toronto Star}}</ref><ref name="rowlands2">{{cite journal |author=Rowlands S |year=2011 |title=Misinformation on abortion. |journal=Eur J Contracept Reprod Health Care |volume=16 |issue=4 |pages=233–40 |doi=10.3109/13625187.2011.570883 |pmid=21557713 |s2cid=13500769}}</ref> CPCs are also criticized for sometimes disseminating misinformation about the effectiveness of ] and the prevention of ].<ref>{{cite journal |last1=Bryant-Comstock |first1=Katelyn |last2=Bryant |first2=Amy G. |last3=Narasimhan |first3=Subasri |last4=Levi |first4=Erika E. |date=February 2016 |title=Information about Sexual Health on Crisis Pregnancy Center Web Sites: Accurate for Adolescents? |journal=Journal of Pediatric and Adolescent Gynecology |volume=29 |issue=1 |pages=22–25 |doi=10.1016/j.jpag.2015.05.008 |pmid=26493590}}</ref> CPCs are sometimes called "fake abortion clinics" by scholars, the media, and supporters of ], due to deceptive advertising that obscures the centers' opposition to abortion.<ref name="Eisenberg19942">{{cite journal |last=Eisenberg |first=Rebecca |date=1994 |title=Beyond Bray: Obtaining Federal Jurisdiction to Stop Anti-Abortion Violence |url=https://heinonline.org/HOL/LandingPage?handle=hein.journals/yjfem6&div=10&id=&page= |url-status=live |journal=] |volume=6 |pages=167–170 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20220921021715/https://heinonline.org/HOL/LandingPage?handle=hein.journals/yjfem6&div=10&id=&page= |archive-date=2022-09-21 |access-date=2022-09-23 |authorlink=Rebecca Eisenberg |number=1}} Originally written in late 1992 for Harvard Law School.</ref><ref>Multiple sources:


* {{cite news |last=Shah |first=Khushbu |date=2019-08-16 |title=Inside the 'fake clinics' where women are persuaded to carry pregnancies to term - Crisis pregnancy centers' give counseling, pregnancy tests – and outnumber abortion providers three to one in Georgia |url=https://www.theguardian.com/us-news/2019/aug/16/georgia-abortion-crisis-pregnancy-centers |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20220915224911/https://www.theguardian.com/us-news/2019/aug/16/georgia-abortion-crisis-pregnancy-centers |archive-date=2022-09-15 |access-date= |newspaper=] |pages= |quote=The Crossroads facility is one of thousands of “crisis pregnancy centers” that have appeared all over the US as a controversial part of the ongoing fight over women’s reproductive rights. Known as “fake clinics” by pro-choice activists, and coined pregnancy resource centers by anti-abortion supporters, they are accused of posing as medical centers aimed at helping pregnant women, or even looking like abortion clinics.}}
* {{cite journal |last1=Mertus |first1=J A |year=1990 |title=Fake abortion clinics: the threat to reproductive self-determination |url=https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/2309498/ |url-status=live |journal=Women's Health |volume=16 |issue=1 |pages=95–113 |doi=10.1300/J013v16n01_07 |pmid=2309498 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20220915195202/https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/2309498/ |archive-date=2022-09-15 |access-date=2022-09-15 |quote=The establishment of "fake abortion clinics" poses a great threat to women's ability to make free and informed procreative decisions. Such clinics intentionally deceive pregnant women into believing that they provide a full range of women's health services when, in reality, they provide only a pregnancy test, accompanied by intense anti-abortion propaganda.}}
* {{cite news |last=Dawson |first=Bethany |date=2022-08-21 |title=Fake abortion clinics now outnumber real ones 3 to 1, campaigners say, as pro-life activists try to pressure and shame women into abandoning terminations |url=https://www.insider.com/fake-abortion-clinics-now-outnumber-real-ones-3-to-1-2022-8 |newspaper=] |quote=Fake abortion clinics that try to trick pregnant women in states where abortion is now banned and are searching online for termination options were given an unprecedented boost after Roe v Wade was overturned earlier this year, campaigners argue. Research shows that thousands of clinics posing as health centers offering abortions are ideological pro-life hubs that aim to pressure and shame pregnant women into abandoning their termination plans.}}
* {{cite news |last=Goodwin |first=Shaun |date=2022-06-21 |title=Anti-abortion 'fake clinics' exist in Idaho. Here's what they are and how to spot them |url=https://www.idahostatesman.com/news/local/community/boise/article262545732.html |newspaper=] |quote=A “fake clinic,” also known as a crisis pregnancy center, is a clinic that advertises services similar to an abortion clinic, but with a different agenda. Instead of performing abortion services, the staff talks women through their options but ultimately attempts to discourage them from having an abortion. Fake clinics are often set up close to abortion clinics, according to Planned Parenthood, and advertise a range of services such as STD testing, but more often than not do not provide any substantive health care services. Although not outwardly offering abortion services, the clinics will advertise solutions for unintended pregnancies, pregnancy consultation and post-abortion care.}}
* {{cite news |last=Solis |first=Marie |date=2017-11-10 |title=Massachusetts Women's Health Center Actually a Fake Abortion Clinic, Says Watchdog Group |url=https://www.newsweek.com/massachusetts-womens-health-center-actually-fake-abortion-clinic-says-watchdog-708511 |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20220915224911/https://www.newsweek.com/massachusetts-womens-health-center-actually-fake-abortion-clinic-says-watchdog-708511 |archive-date=2022-09-15 |access-date=2022-09-15 |newspaper=] |quote=A Massachusetts health clinic is posing as an abortion provider to deliberately deceive women into not terminating pregnancies, a pro-choice group claims. The Attleboro Women's Health Center does not provide abortions, but rather uses underhanded tactics in attempts to prevent them, according to the Campaign for Accountability, which filed a complaint on Thursday with the state's attorney general. The health center's website prominently features headings on the "abortion pill" and "surgical abortion," includes extensive information on both pregnancy-terminating methods and offers the option of making an appointment at the top of the page. The site even includes price estimates for abortion procedures and advertises free abortion consultations. Users have to scour the site to find out that it actually does "not offer, recommend or refer for abortions or abortifacients."}}
* {{cite news |date=September 16, 2020 |title=NARAL identifies 59 'fake' abortion clinics in Virginia |url=https://www.wtvr.com/news/local-news/naral-identifies-59-fake-abortion-clinics-in-virginia |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20220915224916/https://www.wtvr.com/news/local-news/naral-identifies-59-fake-abortion-clinics-in-virginia |archive-date=September 15, 2022 |access-date=September 15, 2022 |work=] |location=], ] |quote=NARAL Pro-Choice Virginia released the findings of a decade-long study examining the strategies of "fake" abortion clinics known as "crisis pregnancy centers." The study identified 59 "fake clinics" throughout the Commonwealth, compared to only 16 licensed abortion providers. "Fake clinics" are not-for-profit centers that often advertise free pregnancy tests and other services to people facing unplanned pregnancies while "deceptively promoting an anti-abortion, anti-reproductive rights agenda."}}</ref> Legal and legislative action regarding CPCs has generally attempted to curb ],<ref>{{cite news |author=AP |date=21 September 1991 |title=Congressional Inquiry Examines Reports of Bogus Abortion Clinics |url=https://www.nytimes.com/1991/09/21/us/congressional-inquiry-examines-reports-of-bogus-abortion-clinics.html |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20130602124214/http://www.nytimes.com/1991/09/21/us/congressional-inquiry-examines-reports-of-bogus-abortion-clinics.html |archive-date=2 June 2013 |access-date=17 August 2013 |work=The New York Times}}</ref> targeting those that imply that they offer abortion services by requiring centers to disclose that they do not offer certain services or possess certain qualifications.<ref name="nyt2">{{Cite news |last=Lewin |first=Tamar |date=April 22, 1994 |title=Anti-Abortion Center's Ads Ruled Misleading |url=https://www.nytimes.com/1994/04/22/us/anti-abortion-center-s-ads-ruled-misleading.html?sq=crisis+pregnancy+centers&scp=9&st=cse |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20180729081601/https://www.nytimes.com/1994/04/22/us/anti-abortion-center-s-ads-ruled-misleading.html?sq=crisis+pregnancy+centers&scp=9&st=cse |archive-date=July 29, 2018 |access-date=July 29, 2018 |work=The New York Times}}</ref>
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::Thanks, @]. Let's take it one step at a time. You propose to change the lead sentence from "...established by anti-abortion groups primarily to persuade pregnant women not to have an abortion" to "...that typically offers counseling, prenatal care, and/or a variety of medical services from an anti-abortion perspective." I salute your intention to make this article more accurate and neutral, but I would argue that this change does neither; it obscures rather than illuminates. As indicated by the three reliable sources cited in the original version of the lead (and many more cited in rest of the article), these centers are created by anti-abortion groups, so the lead should say so. Moreover, the phrase "...from an anti-abortion perspective", uttered by the host of the NPR interview cited in the proposed version, is murkier than a lead sentence should be. Fortunately, we need not even look beyond the cited interview for a clearer description by a journalist from a reliable-source organization: "The point of a crisis pregnancy center, which is often known as an anti-abortion center, or even just a pregnancy center, is to convince people to continue their pregnancies"—in so many words, "to persuade pregnant women not to have an abortion". I have more thoughts about the rest of your proposed changes, but perhaps you'd like to continue talking about the lead? ] (]) 03:10, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
::{{re|DocZach}} Misplaced Pages's policy of Neutral Point of View is often NOT what new editors think it is. It is NOT to give ] just because there are two opinions on a subject, but rather it is to describe subjects as they are characterized in the ].
::Additionally, the lead should NOT be the place where you start making changes when you edit an article, per ]. ---''']]''' 05:43, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
:::Okay, let's focus on one body part at a time. I agree that the lead should be the last part to edit.
:::# I am fine with the way '''Origin''' is currently written. I have no disputes for that section.
:::# I have major disputes with the '''Activities''' section, and I will show the replacement for that section that I propose.
:::<big>'''Activities''' (proposed replacement)</big>
:::While CPCs often look like abortion clinics and are intentionally located near them,<ref name="Sonograms">{{cite news |last=Chandler |first=Michael Alison |date=2006-09-09 |title=Antiabortion Centers Offer Sonograms to Further Cause |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/09/08/AR2006090801967_pf.html |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20061231113627/http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/09/08/AR2006090801967_pf.html |archive-date=2006-12-31 |access-date=2008-02-24 |newspaper=] |page=html}}</ref><ref name="savannah">{{Cite news |last=Goers |first=Beth |date=October 23, 2008 |title=Pregnant? Worried? |url=https://www.connectsavannah.com/savannah/pregnant-worried/Content?oid=2160160 |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20200729013626/https://www.connectsavannah.com/savannah/pregnant-worried/Content?oid=2160160 |archive-date=July 29, 2020 |access-date=December 28, 2018 |work=Connect Savannah}}</ref> most do not provide abortions or even contraceptive care.<ref name="motherjones.com">{{cite web |last=Redden |first=Molly |date=12 October 2015 |title=One State Finally Cracked Down on Deceptive Anti-Abortion Pregnancy Centers |url=https://www.motherjones.com/politics/2015/10/state-just-became-first-crack-down-deceptive-anti-abortion-pregnancy-centers |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20180614072144/https://www.motherjones.com/politics/2015/10/state-just-became-first-crack-down-deceptive-anti-abortion-pregnancy-centers/ |archive-date=14 June 2018 |access-date=9 July 2018 |work=]}}</ref> However, 38% of CPCs do not clearly state that they don't provide abortions on their home page.<ref name=":3">American College of Obstetrics and Gynecology. n.d. “Issue Brief: Crisis Pregnancy Centers.” Accessed April 10, 2024. <nowiki>https://www.acog.org/advocacy/abortion-is-essential/trending-issues/issue-brief-crisis-pregnancy-centers</nowiki>.</ref> CPCs often offer services such as free pregnancy tests, prenatal care, ultrasounds, STD testing, and/or classes for budgeting and resume building.<ref>{{Cite web |last=Institute |first=Charlotte Lozier |date=2021-07-19 |title=Fact Sheet: Pregnancy Centers – Serving Women and Saving Lives (2020 Study) |url=https://lozierinstitute.org/fact-sheet-pregnancy-centers-serving-women-and-saving-lives-2020/ |access-date=2024-05-08 |website=Lozier Institute |language=en-US}}</ref> A few CPCs also provide contraceptives.<ref>{{Cite web |date=2019-11-15 |title=Christian pregnancy centers to offer women contraceptives |url=https://apnews.com/article/e8640b10a242493e90a258a8cbe9cfee |access-date=2024-05-08 |website=AP News |language=en}}</ref> Some even supply clothing, maternity housing, food, financial support, and other supplies.<ref name="NYT Church Groups">{{cite news |author=Banerjee, Neela |date=2 February 2005 |title=Church Groups Turn to Sonogram to Turn Women From Abortions |url=https://www.nytimes.com/2005/02/02/national/02pregnant.html? |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20130616042338/http://www.nytimes.com/2005/02/02/national/02pregnant.html |archive-date=16 June 2013 |access-date=18 August 2013 |work=The New York Times}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |title=Guiding Star Ministries |url=https://www.guidingstar.org/ |access-date=2024-05-08 |website=Guiding Star Ministries}}</ref>
:::There is a trend toward CPCs obtaining some form of medical certification to be able to expand their abilities and marketing. One such example is to be able to perform ] in an attempt to convince women to carry their pregnancies to term.<ref name="wpost">{{Cite news |last=Cooperman |first=Alan |date=February 21, 2002 |title=Abortion Battle: Prenatal Care or Pressure Tactics? |url=http://www.highbeam.com/doc/1P2-324539.html |url-status=dead |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20150924192525/http://www.highbeam.com/doc/1P2-324539.html |archive-date=September 24, 2015 |newspaper=Washington Post}}</ref><ref name="aboutnifla"> {{webarchive|url=https://web.archive.org/web/20100819225336/http://www.nifla.org/about-us-what-we-do.asp|date=August 19, 2010}}</ref><ref>{{cite news |author=Leland, John |date=16 January 2006 |title=Some Abortion Foes Forgo Politics for Quiet Talk |url=https://www.nytimes.com/2006/01/16/national/16abortion.html? |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20130625155737/http://www.nytimes.com/2006/01/16/national/16abortion.html? |archive-date=25 June 2013 |access-date=18 August 2013 |work=The New York Times}}</ref><ref name="indyweek">{{Cite news |last=Solow |first=Barbara |date=June 18, 2003 |title=Medicine or ministry? |url=http://www.indyweek.com/indyweek/medicine-or-ministry/Content?oid=1189657 |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20101117211649/http://www.indyweek.com/indyweek/medicine-or-ministry/Content?oid=1189657 |archive-date=November 17, 2010 |access-date=December 8, 2010 |work=]}}</ref> They may also provide screening for ], adoption referrals, religious counseling, post-abortion counseling, financial assistance, prenatal services, child-rearing resources and other services.<ref name="Bazelon">{{cite news |last=Bazelon |first=Emily |date=2007-01-21 |title=Is There a Post-Abortion Syndrome? |url=https://www.nytimes.com/2007/01/21/magazine/21abortion.t.html?pagewanted=1&_r=1&adxnnl=0&adxnnlx=1190386628-YJ8YY6wRm1G3NshX/wMaAg |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20090424092919/http://www.nytimes.com/2007/01/21/magazine/21abortion.t.html |archive-date=2009-04-24 |access-date=2007-11-06 |work=] |page=cover story}}</ref><ref name="wpost" /><ref name="artl">{{cite web |date=2011-02-04 |title=Arkansas Right To Life – Abortion Alternatives Adoption Help Pregnancy Centers |url=http://www.artl.org/alternatives.html |url-status=dead |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20110725014706/http://www.artl.org/alternatives.html |archive-date=2011-07-25 |access-date=2011-03-18 |publisher=Artl.org}}</ref><ref name="Klife">{{cite web |date=2010-01-15 |title=Celebrate Sanctity of Human Life Week with K-LIFE! &#124; K-LIFE FM |url=http://www.klife.org/concerts/celebrate-sanctity-of-human-life-week-with-k-life |url-status=dead |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20110106082838/http://www.klife.org/concerts/celebrate-sanctity-of-human-life-week-with-k-life |archive-date=2011-01-06 |access-date=2011-03-18 |publisher=Klife.org}}</ref> Peer counselors are typically covered by mandated reporting laws with regard to statutory rape, and they are encouraged to ask about the age of the woman and the biological father.<ref name="mandated"> {{webarchive|url=https://web.archive.org/web/20101201142524/http://www.atcmag.com/v10n2/|date=December 1, 2010}}</ref>
:::CPCs have been criticized by supporters of abortion rights for providing misleading and/or graphic information or content to patients.<ref>{{cite news |author=Kaufman, Marc |date=18 July 2006 |title=Pregnancy Centers Found to Give False Information on Abortion |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/07/17/AR2006071701145.html |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20130801004231/http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/07/17/AR2006071701145.html |archive-date=1 August 2013 |access-date=18 August 2013 |newspaper=The Washington Post}}</ref><ref>{{cite news |author=Silverman, Julia |date=9 May 2007 |title=States React to Crisis Pregnancy Centers |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2007/05/09/AR2007050900291.html |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20121107120035/http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2007/05/09/AR2007050900291.html |archive-date=7 November 2012 |access-date=18 August 2013 |newspaper=The Washington Post}}</ref> Their advertising campaigns have been criticized as being carefully designed to reach groups they perceive as being more inclined towards seeking abortion, such as young women, women of color, and those from lower socioeconomic backgrounds. Often, they place billboards near educational institutions and utilize public transportation and bus shelters for promotion.<ref name=":3" /> For example, Care Net's "Urban Initiative" specifically aims to attract Black and Latina women by advertising on platforms like the Black Entertainment Network (BET) and drawing parallels between abortion and historical instances of oppression, such as ].<ref name=":2">Montoya, Melissa N, Colleen Judge-Golden, and Jonas J Swartz. 2022. “The Problems with Crisis Pregnancy Centers: Reviewing the Literature and Identifying New Directions for Future Research.” ''International Journal of Women’s Health'' 14 (June): 757–63. <nowiki>https://doi.org/10.2147/IJWH.S288861</nowiki>.</ref>
:::The ], an independent abortion-providing agency,<ref>{{cite web |title=Abortion Services, Pregnancy Advice, Counselling and Contraception – BPAS |url=https://www.bpas.org/about-our-charity/ |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20190128112026/https://www.bpas.org/about-our-charity/ |archive-date=2019-01-28 |access-date=2016-08-01 |website=www.bpas.org}}</ref> stated that young women were particularly vulnerable to religiously influenced anti-abortion "Crisis Pregnancy Centres", unregulated by the ], because many of the women knew less about the healthcare system or did not want to consult their ].<ref name="LES">{{Cite news |last=Lydall |first=Ross |date=February 11, 2014 |title=Clinics "tell women that abortions cause cancer" |work=] |page=10}}</ref> CPCs have focused on what they call "underserved" communities in an attempt to lower the high rates of abortion in communities of color.<ref name=":1">{{Cite journal |last=Morrison |first=Jill |date=2019 |title=Resuscitating the Black Body: Reproductive Justice as Resistance to the State's Property Interest in Black Women's Reproductive Capacity |url=https://heinonline.org/hol-cgi-bin/get_pdf.cgi?handle=hein.journals/yjfem31&section=6 |journal=Yale Journal of Law and Feminism |volume=31 |pages=35–56}}</ref>
:::Some jurisdictions are passing legislation that designates crisis pregnancy centers as ]. In the ], CPCs are considered ] where parents may surrender custody of newborn infants.<ref>{{cite web |title=Boy given up in LC's first Safe Haven case (3/12): Headline News |url=http://www.americanpress.com/lc/blogs/wpnewssum/?p=5165 |url-status=dead |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20110707133108/http://www.americanpress.com/lc/blogs/wpnewssum/?p=5165 |archive-date=2011-07-07 |access-date=2011-03-18 |publisher=Americanpress.com}}</ref>
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:::'''I will explain major changes that make this replacement necessary:'''
:::# The claim that '''most''' crisis pregnancy centers are both unlicensed and do '''not''' provide medical services is '''false'''. First of all, the sourced paper that is given as a reference for that claim doesn't mention anything about how "most crisis pregnancy centers are unlicensed/do not provide medical services." Second of all, the Guttmacher Institute is not an unbiased source for matters concerning abortion. The Guttmacher Institute was literally founded as a subsidiary to Planned Parenthood, and they blatantly state on their website that they are pro-abortion and fighting for abortion rights, asking people to donate for it. And the claim that '''most''' crisis pregnancy centers offer '''no''' medical services is so obviously absurd. Of course almost all of them offer at least one type of "medical service." I doubt there is even a noticeable fraction of such centers that don't offer pregnancy tests or some form of prenatal care. Therefore, a simple fix to this problem is to change the wording of '''most''' to '''many'''. I would even argue that we should change it to '''some''', but I am attempting to find compromise here.
:::# Something you may have noticed as one of the things I tried changing in the lead paragraphs is the claim that ''"''CPCs do not offer contraceptives.''"'' This is false. Numerous CPCs, at least in recent years, have begun offering contraceptives. Most of the contraceptives offered are condoms, but some now even provide forms of birth control. This is also something I added in my proposal of the "Activities" section when I said "A few CPCs also provide contraceptives." https://apnews.com/article/e8640b10a242493e90a258a8cbe9cfee
:::# When talking about CPCs being criticized, I believe it is profoundly important to specify who is criticizing them. The obvious fact of the matter is that they are criticized by proponents of abortion rights, and it is only proper to include that in the statement about them being criticized.
:::# The comment about "racial targeting" is a blatant violation of NPOV. If anything, Planned Parenthood is "racial targeting" by launching their initiative to help people of color get more abortions, and for having most of their clinics in minority neighborhoods. Accusing CPCs in general of "racial targeting" makes no sense, and we already have a part that talks about how some of their efforts involve reaching out to people of color, inviting them to seek resources at their clinics. Many organizations of a wide variety of purposes have efforts to reach out to minority groups, and we don't ascribe them as engaging in "racial targeting" or "sexuality targeting."
:::# The most '''egregious''' part of this article that is completely a biased point of view is the "conclusion" of the Activities section: ''Overall, CPCs may offer support to individuals deliberating whether or not to proceed with their pregnancy but also potentially offer misleading information about abortion-related care and referrals. Pregnant individuals have the right to have access to truthful guidance, decision-making assistance, and appropriate resources to make the best choice for themselves regarding their pregnancy or abortion.'' I don't even know if I need to explain why that is one of the most improper, unprofessional, and biased things you could include in an article like this. It is a direct endorsement of abortion rights and a direct point of view about what "pregnant individuals should have the right to do."
:::# In my proposal, I added a portion at the end to include about how many of these CPCs are being recognized as "safe havens" and emergency-care facilities under safe-haven laws.
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:::I have tried my best to fully explain all of the changes to this section. I won't propose changes to other sections until we can find a consensus for the '''Activities''' section. I look forward to coming to an agreement. ] (]) 02:29, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
::::Thanks, DocZach. I agree with your changes, with one specific exception and with a proposal for a further change to the top two paragraphs. The specific exception is to your point #3, about this proposed text: "CPCs have been criticized by supporters of abortion rights for providing misleading and/or graphic information or content to patients." I agree that criticisms should note who's doing the criticizing, but in this case, we can simply plainly state, as backed up by plenty of reliable sources, that "Many CPCs provide misleading and/or graphic information or content to patients." More broadly, I think we could condense the top two paragraphs under a topic sentence—something like:
::::"To fulfill their mission of persuading pregnant women not to get abortions, CPCs offer a variety of services; among the more common ones are free pregnancy tests, prenatal care, screening for sexually transmitted infections, and adoption referrals. Some offer counseling, including religious counseling and post-abortion counseling. (Peer counselors are typically covered by mandated reporting laws with regard to statutory rape, and they are encouraged to ask about the age of the woman and the biological father.) Some supply material support: clothing, maternity housing, food, financial support, and other supplies. Some offer training in such topics as budgeting, resume building, and child-rearing. A few CPCs provide contraceptives. An increasing number of CPCs obtain some form of medical certification to be able to expand their abilities and marketing; for example, permission to perform sonograms in an attempt to convince women to carry their pregnancies to term.
::::"When pregnant women come in for these services, CPCs attempt to persuade—or, anti-abortion groups say, hector or manipulate—them to forgo an abortion. Many provide misleading and/or graphic information or content. CPCs often look like abortion clinics and are intentionally located near them; 38% of CPCs do not clearly state that they don't provide abortions on their home page..."
::::What do you think? ] (]) 18:06, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::<big>'''New proposal for "Activities" section with your suggestions in-mind:'''</big>
:::::While crisis pregnancy centers often look like and are intentionally located near abortion clinics,<ref name="Sonograms">{{cite news |last=Chandler |first=Michael Alison |date=2006-09-09 |title=Antiabortion Centers Offer Sonograms to Further Cause |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/09/08/AR2006090801967_pf.html |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20061231113627/http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/09/08/AR2006090801967_pf.html |archive-date=2006-12-31 |access-date=2008-02-24 |newspaper=] |page=html}}</ref><ref name="savannah">{{Cite news |last=Goers |first=Beth |date=October 23, 2008 |title=Pregnant? Worried? |url=https://www.connectsavannah.com/savannah/pregnant-worried/Content?oid=2160160 |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20200729013626/https://www.connectsavannah.com/savannah/pregnant-worried/Content?oid=2160160 |archive-date=July 29, 2020 |access-date=December 28, 2018 |work=Connect Savannah}}</ref> most CPCs do not provide abortions or abortion referrals.<ref name="motherjones.com">{{cite web |last=Redden |first=Molly |date=12 October 2015 |title=One State Finally Cracked Down on Deceptive Anti-Abortion Pregnancy Centers |url=https://www.motherjones.com/politics/2015/10/state-just-became-first-crack-down-deceptive-anti-abortion-pregnancy-centers |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20180614072144/https://www.motherjones.com/politics/2015/10/state-just-became-first-crack-down-deceptive-anti-abortion-pregnancy-centers/ |archive-date=14 June 2018 |access-date=9 July 2018 |work=]}}</ref> However, 38% of CPCs do not clearly state that they do not provide abortions on their homepage.<ref name=":3">American College of Obstetrics and Gynecology. n.d. “Issue Brief: Crisis Pregnancy Centers.” Accessed April 10, 2024. <nowiki>https://www.acog.org/advocacy/abortion-is-essential/trending-issues/issue-brief-crisis-pregnancy-centers</nowiki>.</ref> In order to fulfill their mission of encouraging women to continue their pregnancies, CPCs often offer services such as free pregnancy tests, prenatal care, ultrasounds, ], adoption resources, and/or classes for budgeting and resume building.<ref>{{Cite web |last=Institute |first=Charlotte Lozier |date=2021-07-19 |title=Fact Sheet: Pregnancy Centers – Serving Women and Saving Lives (2020 Study) |url=https://lozierinstitute.org/fact-sheet-pregnancy-centers-serving-women-and-saving-lives-2020/ |access-date=2024-05-08 |website=Lozier Institute |language=en-US}}</ref><ref name="artl">{{cite web |date=2011-02-04 |title=Arkansas Right To Life – Abortion Alternatives Adoption Help Pregnancy Centers |url=http://www.artl.org/alternatives.html |url-status=dead |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20110725014706/http://www.artl.org/alternatives.html |archive-date=2011-07-25 |access-date=2011-03-18 |publisher=Artl.org}}</ref> A few CPCs also provide contraceptives.<ref>{{Cite web |date=2019-11-15 |title=Christian pregnancy centers to offer women contraceptives |url=https://apnews.com/article/e8640b10a242493e90a258a8cbe9cfee |access-date=2024-05-08 |website=AP News |language=en}}</ref> Some even supply clothing, maternity housing, food, financial support, and other supplies.<ref name="NYT Church Groups">{{cite news |author=Banerjee, Neela |date=2 February 2005 |title=Church Groups Turn to Sonogram to Turn Women From Abortions |url=https://www.nytimes.com/2005/02/02/national/02pregnant.html? |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20130616042338/http://www.nytimes.com/2005/02/02/national/02pregnant.html |archive-date=16 June 2013 |access-date=18 August 2013 |work=The New York Times}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |title=Guiding Star Ministries |url=https://www.guidingstar.org/ |access-date=2024-05-08 |website=Guiding Star Ministries}}</ref> There is a trend toward CPCs obtaining some form of medical certification to be able to expand their abilities and marketing. One such example is to be able to perform ] in an attempt to convince women to carry their pregnancies to term.<ref>{{Cite news |last=Banerjee |first=Neela |date=2005-02-02 |title=Church Groups Turn to Sonogram to Turn Women From Abortions |url=https://www.nytimes.com/2005/02/02/us/church-groups-turn-to-sonogram-to-turn-women-from-abortions.html |access-date=2024-05-12 |work=The New York Times |language=en-US |issn=0362-4331}}</ref>
:::::CPCs have been widely criticized by supporters of abortion rights for providing misleading and/or graphic information or content to patients.<ref>{{cite news |author=Kaufman, Marc |date=18 July 2006 |title=Pregnancy Centers Found to Give False Information on Abortion |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/07/17/AR2006071701145.html |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20130801004231/http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/07/17/AR2006071701145.html |archive-date=1 August 2013 |access-date=18 August 2013 |newspaper=The Washington Post}}</ref><ref>{{cite news |author=Silverman, Julia |date=9 May 2007 |title=States React to Crisis Pregnancy Centers |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2007/05/09/AR2007050900291.html |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20121107120035/http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2007/05/09/AR2007050900291.html |archive-date=7 November 2012 |access-date=18 August 2013 |newspaper=The Washington Post}}</ref> Their advertising campaigns have been criticized as being carefully designed to reach groups they perceive as being more inclined towards seeking abortion, such as young women, women of color, and those from lower socioeconomic backgrounds. Often, they place billboards near educational institutions and utilize public transportation and bus shelters for promotion.<ref name=":3" /> For example, Care Net's "Urban Initiative" specifically aims to attract Black and Latina women by advertising on platforms like the Black Entertainment Network (BET) and drawing parallels between abortion and historical instances of oppression, such as ].<ref name=":2">Montoya, Melissa N, Colleen Judge-Golden, and Jonas J Swartz. 2022. “The Problems with Crisis Pregnancy Centers: Reviewing the Literature and Identifying New Directions for Future Research.” ''International Journal of Women’s Health'' 14 (June): 757–63. <nowiki>https://doi.org/10.2147/IJWH.S288861</nowiki>.</ref>
:::::The ], an independent abortion-providing agency,<ref>{{cite web |title=Abortion Services, Pregnancy Advice, Counselling and Contraception – BPAS |url=https://www.bpas.org/about-our-charity/ |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20190128112026/https://www.bpas.org/about-our-charity/ |archive-date=2019-01-28 |access-date=2016-08-01 |website=www.bpas.org}}</ref> stated that young women were particularly vulnerable to religiously influenced anti-abortion "Crisis Pregnancy Centres", unregulated by the ], because many of the women knew less about the healthcare system or did not want to consult their ].<ref name="LES">{{Cite news |last=Lydall |first=Ross |date=February 11, 2014 |title=Clinics "tell women that abortions cause cancer" |work=] |page=10}}</ref> CPCs have focused on what they call "underserved" communities in an attempt to lower the high rates of abortion in communities of color.<ref name=":1">{{Cite journal |last=Morrison |first=Jill |date=2019 |title=Resuscitating the Black Body: Reproductive Justice as Resistance to the State's Property Interest in Black Women's Reproductive Capacity |url=https://heinonline.org/hol-cgi-bin/get_pdf.cgi?handle=hein.journals/yjfem31&section=6 |journal=Yale Journal of Law and Feminism |volume=31 |pages=35–56}}</ref>
:::::Some jurisdictions are passing legislation that designates crisis pregnancy centers as ]. In the ], CPCs are considered ] where parents may surrender custody of newborn infants.<ref>{{cite web |title=Boy given up in LC's first Safe Haven case (3/12): Headline News |url=http://www.americanpress.com/lc/blogs/wpnewssum/?p=5165 |url-status=dead |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20110707133108/http://www.americanpress.com/lc/blogs/wpnewssum/?p=5165 |archive-date=2011-07-07 |access-date=2011-03-18 |publisher=Americanpress.com}}</ref>
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:::::I have combined the first two paragraphs like you suggested, and have also incorporated some of your suggestions. What are your thoughts on the new proposal? @] ] (]) 20:27, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::DocZach, I am glad that you approve of consolidating the various sentences about services. But I think we could better begin this Activities section with a ]: a sentence that expresses the main idea of the paragraph (or passage) in which it occurs. This is a topic sentence: "To fulfill their mission of persuading pregnant women to forgo abortions, CPCs offer a variety of services..." This is not a topic sentence: "While crisis pregnancy centers often look like and are intentionally located near abortion clinics, most CPCs do not provide abortions or abortion referrals." Rather, it is evidence to support a topic sentence—either of a paragraph that describes CPCs' services or, as in my proposed text, of a paragraph describing their manipulative or deceptive practices. ] (]) 21:52, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::Also, you have not responded to my critique of "CPCs have been widely criticized by supporters of abortion rights for providing misleading and/or graphic information or content to patients," but we can come back to that after we work out how to begin the section itself. ] (]) 21:53, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::::<big>'''Here is my final proposal for the Activities section (bolded parts are where I've implemented your suggestions):'''</big>
::::::::'''In order to fulfill their mission of persuading women to continue their pregnancies''', CPCs often offer services such as free pregnancy tests, prenatal care, ultrasounds, ], adoption resources, and/or classes for budgeting and resume building.<ref>{{Cite web |last=Institute |first=Charlotte Lozier |date=2021-07-19 |title=Fact Sheet: Pregnancy Centers – Serving Women and Saving Lives (2020 Study) |url=https://lozierinstitute.org/fact-sheet-pregnancy-centers-serving-women-and-saving-lives-2020/ |access-date=2024-05-08 |website=Lozier Institute |language=en-US}}</ref><ref name="artl">{{cite web |date=2011-02-04 |title=Arkansas Right To Life – Abortion Alternatives Adoption Help Pregnancy Centers |url=http://www.artl.org/alternatives.html |url-status=dead |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20110725014706/http://www.artl.org/alternatives.html |archive-date=2011-07-25 |access-date=2011-03-18 |publisher=Artl.org}}</ref> A few CPCs also provide contraceptives.<ref>{{Cite web |date=2019-11-15 |title=Christian pregnancy centers to offer women contraceptives |url=https://apnews.com/article/e8640b10a242493e90a258a8cbe9cfee |access-date=2024-05-08 |website=AP News |language=en}}</ref> Some even supply clothing, maternity housing, food, financial support, and other supplies.<ref name="NYT Church Groups">{{cite news |author=Banerjee, Neela |date=2 February 2005 |title=Church Groups Turn to Sonogram to Turn Women From Abortions |url=https://www.nytimes.com/2005/02/02/national/02pregnant.html? |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20130616042338/http://www.nytimes.com/2005/02/02/national/02pregnant.html |archive-date=16 June 2013 |access-date=18 August 2013 |work=The New York Times}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |title=Guiding Star Ministries |url=https://www.guidingstar.org/ |access-date=2024-05-08 |website=Guiding Star Ministries}}</ref> There is a trend toward CPCs obtaining some form of medical certification to be able to expand their abilities and marketing. One such example is to be able to perform ] in an attempt to convince women to carry their pregnancies to term.<ref>{{Cite news |last=Banerjee |first=Neela |date=2005-02-02 |title=Church Groups Turn to Sonogram to Turn Women From Abortions |url=https://www.nytimes.com/2005/02/02/us/church-groups-turn-to-sonogram-to-turn-women-from-abortions.html |access-date=2024-05-12 |work=The New York Times |language=en-US |issn=0362-4331}}</ref> While crisis pregnancy centers often look like and are intentionally located near abortion clinics,<ref name="Sonograms">{{cite news |last=Chandler |first=Michael Alison |date=2006-09-09 |title=Antiabortion Centers Offer Sonograms to Further Cause |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/09/08/AR2006090801967_pf.html |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20061231113627/http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/09/08/AR2006090801967_pf.html |archive-date=2006-12-31 |access-date=2008-02-24 |newspaper=] |page=html}}</ref><ref name="savannah">{{Cite news |last=Goers |first=Beth |date=October 23, 2008 |title=Pregnant? Worried? |url=https://www.connectsavannah.com/savannah/pregnant-worried/Content?oid=2160160 |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20200729013626/https://www.connectsavannah.com/savannah/pregnant-worried/Content?oid=2160160 |archive-date=July 29, 2020 |access-date=December 28, 2018 |work=Connect Savannah}}</ref> most CPCs do not provide abortions or abortion referrals.<ref name="motherjones.com">{{cite web |last=Redden |first=Molly |date=12 October 2015 |title=One State Finally Cracked Down on Deceptive Anti-Abortion Pregnancy Centers |url=https://www.motherjones.com/politics/2015/10/state-just-became-first-crack-down-deceptive-anti-abortion-pregnancy-centers |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20180614072144/https://www.motherjones.com/politics/2015/10/state-just-became-first-crack-down-deceptive-anti-abortion-pregnancy-centers/ |archive-date=14 June 2018 |access-date=9 July 2018 |work=]}}</ref> However, 38% of CPCs do not clearly state that they do not provide abortions on their homepage.<ref name=":3">American College of Obstetrics and Gynecology. n.d. “Issue Brief: Crisis Pregnancy Centers.” Accessed April 10, 2024. <nowiki>https://www.acog.org/advocacy/abortion-is-essential/trending-issues/issue-brief-crisis-pregnancy-centers</nowiki>.</ref>
::::::::CPCs have been widely criticized by supporters of abortion rights for providing misleading and/or graphic information or content to patients '''to dissuade them from obtaining abortions'''.<ref>{{cite news |author=Kaufman, Marc |date=18 July 2006 |title=Pregnancy Centers Found to Give False Information on Abortion |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/07/17/AR2006071701145.html |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20130801004231/http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/07/17/AR2006071701145.html |archive-date=1 August 2013 |access-date=18 August 2013 |newspaper=The Washington Post}}</ref><ref>{{cite news |author=Silverman, Julia |date=9 May 2007 |title=States React to Crisis Pregnancy Centers |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2007/05/09/AR2007050900291.html |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20121107120035/http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2007/05/09/AR2007050900291.html |archive-date=7 November 2012 |access-date=18 August 2013 |newspaper=The Washington Post}}</ref> Their advertising campaigns have been criticized as being carefully designed to reach groups they perceive as being more inclined towards seeking abortion, such as young women, women of color, and those from lower socioeconomic backgrounds. Often, they place billboards near educational institutions and utilize public transportation and bus shelters for promotion.<ref name=":3" /> For example, Care Net's "Urban Initiative" specifically aims to attract Black and Latina women by advertising on platforms like the Black Entertainment Network (BET) and drawing parallels between abortion and historical instances of oppression, such as ].<ref name=":2">Montoya, Melissa N, Colleen Judge-Golden, and Jonas J Swartz. 2022. “The Problems with Crisis Pregnancy Centers: Reviewing the Literature and Identifying New Directions for Future Research.” ''International Journal of Women’s Health'' 14 (June): 757–63. <nowiki>https://doi.org/10.2147/IJWH.S288861</nowiki>.</ref> The ], an independent abortion-providing agency,<ref>{{cite web |title=Abortion Services, Pregnancy Advice, Counselling and Contraception – BPAS |url=https://www.bpas.org/about-our-charity/ |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20190128112026/https://www.bpas.org/about-our-charity/ |archive-date=2019-01-28 |access-date=2016-08-01 |website=www.bpas.org}}</ref> warned about the lack of regulation on CPCs by the ] in that young women were dissuaded from abortion without full knowledge of their legal options or the consultation of their ].<ref name="LES">{{Cite news |last=Lydall |first=Ross |date=February 11, 2014 |title=Clinics "tell women that abortions cause cancer" |work=] |page=10}}</ref> CPCs have focused on what they call "underserved" communities in an attempt to lower the high rates of abortion in communities of color.<ref name=":1">{{Cite journal |last=Morrison |first=Jill |date=2019 |title=Resuscitating the Black Body: Reproductive Justice as Resistance to the State's Property Interest in Black Women's Reproductive Capacity |url=https://heinonline.org/hol-cgi-bin/get_pdf.cgi?handle=hein.journals/yjfem31&section=6 |journal=Yale Journal of Law and Feminism |volume=31 |pages=35–56}}</ref>
::::::::Some jurisdictions are passing legislation that designates crisis pregnancy centers as ]. In the ], CPCs are considered ] where parents may surrender custody of newborn infants.<ref>{{cite web |title=Boy given up in LC's first Safe Haven case (3/12): Headline News |url=http://www.americanpress.com/lc/blogs/wpnewssum/?p=5165 |url-status=dead |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20110707133108/http://www.americanpress.com/lc/blogs/wpnewssum/?p=5165 |archive-date=2011-07-07 |access-date=2011-03-18 |publisher=Americanpress.com}}</ref>
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::::::::I have moved things around so that the topic sentence is first. I also condensed the section into three paragraphs. I have '''bolded''' parts where I incorporated your suggestions. @] ] (]) 07:54, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::::Hi, DocZach, and thanks. I'm not sure what you mean by "final proposal," but it's good to move down the line about some CPCs resembling abortion clinics. The first passage of bold text differs from my suggestion, which is "To fulfill their mission of persuading pregnant women to forgo abortions..." It's my contention that this is a more straightforward way to express the mission than the euphemistic "...to continue their pregnancies". If the pregnant woman did nothing, her pregnancy would continue, barring miscarriage or other circumstance. That's the default. CPCs exist to keep her from choosing a different action. Would you care to discuss? ] (]) 16:16, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::::::Alright, I see your point. We can change the phrasing of the topic sentence to "'''In order to fulfill their mission of persuading women to forgo abortions."''' With that implemented, do you agree with the new proposal for the section? ] (]) 19:33, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::::::1) I'd prefer the first sentence to read: "In order to fulfill their mission of persuading women to forgo abortions, CPC's advertise and offer pregnancy support services for women with unintended pregnancies. These services often include free pregnancy tests, prenatal care,...."
:::::::::::2) A minor but substantial change: "...most CPCs do not provide abortions or abortion referrals." should be changed to "...CPCs do not provide abortions or abortion referrals." because, according the listed source (MotherJones) and probably every other source in the article, *NO* CPC's provide abortions or abortion referrals.
:::::::::::3) The second to last sentence "Some jurisdictions...." should be removed because the source (AmericanPress.com) doesn't say that CPC's are designated as emergency care facilities; the following sentence "In the State of Louisiana, CPCs are considered safe-haven zones..." is correct.
:::::::::::Otherwise, it looks mostly ok, except for some syntax errors and unacceptable sources which I can fix one-by-one after you replace that section part. ---''']]''' 00:39, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::::::::1) I agree and have no objection.
::::::::::::2) I agree and have no objection.
::::::::::::3) I agree, and will remove the "emergency care facilities" part.
::::::::::::I will implement the changes now, and feel free to fix formatting if there are any mistakes. I greatly appreciate your willingness to compromise and work with me to help improve the article.
::::::::::::cc: @] @]
::::::::::::Also, I will propose my next suggestions in regards to other sections of the article after you (@]) let me know when everything is set in regards to formatting or syntax (or whatever you were saying) of the Activities section. ] (]) 03:40, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::::::::Let me know if you are okay with this:
:::::::::::::In regards to point 3 that you brought up, I moved the part about Louisiana safe-haven zones (the one sentence that was at the end) to be at the end of the first paragraph instead. Imo, it didn't make much sense for it to have its own paragraph, and I think it's good to keep the section as two paragraphs as they each have their own distinct purpose. ] (]) 03:56, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::::::::::@], @], I think we're getting there! You propose: <blockquote>In order to fulfill their mission of persuading women to forgo abortions, CPCs advertise and offer pregnancy support services for women with unintended pregnancies. These services often include free pregnancy tests, prenatal care, ultrasounds, STD testing, adoption resources, and/or classes for budgeting and resume building. Some supply clothing, maternity housing, food, financial support, and other supplies. In 2020, one Texas chain of CPCs began providing contraceptives to unmarried women, stating that they wanted to help reduce unplanned pregnancies. There is a trend toward CPCs obtaining some form of medical certification to be able to expand their abilities and marketing. One such example is to be able to perform sonograms in an attempt to convince women to carry their pregnancies to term. While CPCs often look like and are intentionally located near abortion clinics, CPCs do not provide abortions or abortion referrals. However, 38% of CPCs do not clearly state that they do not provide abortions on their homepage. In some jurisdictions, such the State of Louisiana, CPCs are considered safe-haven zones where parents may surrender custody of newborn infants.</blockquote>
::::::::::::::I propose:
::::::::::::::<blockquote>"To fulfill their mission of persuading pregnant women not to get abortions, CPCs advertise and offer pregnancy support services for women with unintended pregnancies. Among the more common ones are free pregnancy tests, prenatal care, screening for sexually transmitted infections, and adoption referrals. Some offer counseling, including religious counseling and post-abortion counseling. Some supply material support: clothing, maternity housing, food, financial support, and other supplies. Some offer training in such topics as budgeting, resume building, and child-rearing. An increasing number of CPCs obtain some form of medical certification to be able to expand their abilities and marketing; for example, permission to perform sonograms in an attempt to convince women to carry their pregnancies to term. In some jurisdictions, such the State of Louisiana, CPCs are considered safe-haven zones where parents may surrender custody of newborn infants. In 2020, one Texas chain of CPCs began providing contraceptives to unmarried women, stating that they wanted to help reduce unplanned pregnancies.</blockquote>
::::::::::::::This version presents the services in somewhat more orderly fashion: "common" ones, counseling, material support, training, and medical. It also spells out "STD" and eliminates the ungainly "and/or". It moves the mention of contraception to the end because that is not a service directly for, as the topic sentence says, "women with unintended pregnancies". Finally, it leaves the sentence about non-provision of abortion services and lookalike clinics for the next paragraph. What do you think? ] (]) 11:05, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::::::::::✅ I have no objection. What do you think about PRR's suggestion, @]? ] (]) 17:24, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::::::::::::I prefer the "forgo abortions" because these centers are definitely NOT targeting women who already decided they want to keep their child and need all sorts of material help because they are poor.
::::::::::::::::I now thought of what I think is a better first sentence: "To fulfill their mission of persuading women with unintended pregnancies to forgo abortions, CPCs advertise and offer pregnancy support services."
::::::::::::::::The rest I agree with. ---''']]''' 00:37, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::::::::::::I would disagree with adding the "unintended pregnancies" part to the topic sentence. CPCs provide services to mothers whether their pregnancy was intended or not. Some women have gotten pregnant intentionally, but then they may have experienced an event such as their partner leaving them that may have led them to start considering abortion, and CPCs are purposed to help those women as well. ] (]) 01:55, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::::::::::::::It was already in the topic sentence, I just changed the order. Maybe it should be "unwanted pregnancies"? ---''']]''' 05:15, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::::::::::::::I would just say:
:::::::::::::::::::''To fulfill their mission of persuading pregnant women to forgo abortions, CPCs advertise and offer pregnancy support services.''
:::::::::::::::::::Because if we use unintended, then that leaves out the people who did intend to get pregnant but for some reason are considering abortion down the line. And if we use unwanted, then that leaves out the people who do want the baby, but who feel like they need an abortion for a specific concern such as economics. ] (]) 07:24, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::::::::::::::::Alternatively, it could be:
::::::::::::::::::::''To fulfill their mission of persuading women with unintended, unwanted, or difficult pregnancies to forgo abortions, CPCs advertise and offer pregnancy support services.'' ] (]) 07:27, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::::::::::::::::Although I see ]'s point about CPCs being more concerned with stopping abortion than supporting babies, I think we need not load up this sentence with adjectives; I support ]'s "To fulfill their mission of persuading pregnant women to forgo abortions, CPCs advertise and offer pregnancy support services." ] (]) 13:58, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::::::::::::::::::I'm ok with that. ---''']]''' 02:26, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::::::::::::::::::Nice work, all. I will update the paragraph to: <blockquote>To fulfill their mission of persuading pregnant women to forgo abortions, CPCs advertise and offer pregnancy support services. Among the more common ones are free pregnancy tests, prenatal care, screening for sexually transmitted infections, and adoption referrals. Some offer counseling, including religious counseling and post-abortion counseling. Some supply material support: clothing, maternity housing, food, financial support, and other supplies. Some offer training in such topics as budgeting, resume building, and child-rearing. An increasing number of CPCs obtain some form of medical certification to be able to expand their abilities and marketing; for example, permission to perform sonograms in an attempt to convince women to carry their pregnancies to term. In some jurisdictions, such the State of Louisiana, CPCs are considered safe-haven zones where parents may surrender custody of newborn infants. In 2020, one Texas chain of CPCs began providing contraceptives to unmarried women, stating that they wanted to help reduce unplanned pregnancies.</blockquote>
And I'm moving this text from the article pending our discussion on how to incorporate it in the next paragraph: "While CPCs often look like and are intentionally located near abortion clinics,<ref name="Sonograms">{{cite news |last=Chandler |first=Michael Alison |date=2006-09-09 |title=Antiabortion Centers Offer Sonograms to Further Cause |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/09/08/AR2006090801967_pf.html |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20061231113627/http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/09/08/AR2006090801967_pf.html |archive-date=2006-12-31 |access-date=2008-02-24 |newspaper=] |page=html}}</ref><ref name="savannah">{{Cite news |last=Goers |first=Beth |date=October 23, 2008 |title=Pregnant? Worried? |url=https://www.connectsavannah.com/savannah/pregnant-worried/Content?oid=2160160 |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20200729013626/https://www.connectsavannah.com/savannah/pregnant-worried/Content?oid=2160160 |archive-date=July 29, 2020 |access-date=December 28, 2018 |work=Connect Savannah}}</ref> CPCs do not provide abortions or abortion referrals.<ref name="motherjones.com">{{cite web |last=Redden |first=Molly |date=12 October 2015 |title=One State Finally Cracked Down on Deceptive Anti-Abortion Pregnancy Centers |url=https://www.motherjones.com/politics/2015/10/state-just-became-first-crack-down-deceptive-anti-abortion-pregnancy-centers |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20180614072144/https://www.motherjones.com/politics/2015/10/state-just-became-first-crack-down-deceptive-anti-abortion-pregnancy-centers/ |archive-date=14 June 2018 |access-date=9 July 2018 |work=]}}</ref> However, 38% of CPCs do not clearly state that they do not provide abortions on their homepage.<ref name=":3">American College of Obstetrics and Gynecology. n.d. “Issue Brief: Crisis Pregnancy Centers.” Accessed April 10, 2024. <nowiki>https://www.acog.org/advocacy/abortion-is-essential/trending-issues/issue-brief-crisis-pregnancy-centers</nowiki>.</ref>" ] (]) 03:10, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
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:DocZach, this article is already a good summary of its topic. It doesn't need any kind of major changes with regard to Misplaced Pages's policy of ]. Your POV tag at the top is out of order. Minor tweaks to wording can be discussed, but major shifts in direction are not indicated. We have followed the best sources about the topic, especially scholarly works published in scholarly journals, which are the highest sources available. Just about every scholarly work characterizes CPCs as having a false front. That's why this article must continue to tell the reader about the falsehood inherent in the great majority of CPCs. It's critically important to the topic. Your proposed version is a whitewash. Any such version which ignores scholarly analysis is not going to gain adherents on this talk page. ] (]) 04:00, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
::In the section "Affiliation"... This section says "Most crisis pregnancy centers are affiliated with several major pro-life organizations that fund CPCs." Yes! And most of these organizations are Christian charities. But why do we need to have a separate section on this that is so far from the "Religious affiliation" section? If we could merge "Affiliation" and "Religious affiliation" sections, the article would make a more cogent presentation of the facts.
:Also, the topic is primarily related to the United States. Trying to make it "global" will be an exercise in futility. Certainly we will welcome any information coming from non-US observers, but by far the most CPC activity is in the US. Don't try to fix a problem that doesn't exist. ] (]) 04:04, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
::In regards to the global situation, the lead says "Hundreds more CPCs operate outside of the U.S., including in Canada, Latin America, Africa, and Europe" but provides practically no detail on countries outside the US in the the actual body. In Canada, for example, there's been political debate about whether or not such places should be funded on a federal level, how more exist than actual abortion clinics, and how they're often the only option in rural areas. ] ] 05:05, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
:::Since you have the facts at hand, you would be welcome to add information about Canada. Even so, the other countries are dancing to the US tune; it's mainly US-based groups which have been pushing the CPC concept upon other countries. ] (]) 06:08, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
:I was not the individual to add the global warning, first of all. Second of all, you should have completely read all of my disputes before randomly removing the NPOV tag when clearly this article is a POV mess. You don't get to decide yourself to remove the tag just because you think this article is so fantastic. This article endorses a "right to access abortion" explicitly in that it literally says it at the conclusion of the Analysis section. It is also incredibly biased and written very poorly, for reasons I have already explained, and that I would really appreciate if you read. ] (]) 05:13, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
::And YOU don't get to tag the article just because YOU think it is terrible.
::Tag specific cases where you think the statement does not properly paraphrase the source, or does so in a biased way. ---''']]''' 05:34, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
:::I have already cited examples, one of the most prominent being the conclusion of the '''Activities''' section, which presents an '''OPINIONATED CONCLUSION''' in ].
:::''Overall, CPCs may offer support to individuals deliberating whether or not to proceed with their pregnancy but also potentially offer misleading information about abortion-related care and referrals. '''Pregnant individuals have the right to have access to truthful guidance, decision-making assistance, and appropriate resources to make the best choice for themselves regarding their pregnancy or abortion.'''''
:::And in respond to your comments about me adding the NPOV tag, I will also emphasize that YOU don't get to remove the tag from the article just because YOU and ONE or TWO other people are persistent on keeping this article, a very obvious essay-like critique piece on CPCs, in its current state. ] (]) 07:36, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
::The purpose of tagging an article at the top is to attract editors who will then proceed to fix it. If the article has multiple active and involved editors, no tag is necessary. Per ], a tag should be removed "If it reasonably appears that the template did not belong when placed" or if "there is consensus on the talk page (or elsewhere) as to how to address the flagged issue, and you are reasonably implementing those changes." One person cannot insist that the tag must stay; that's not how consensus works. ] (]) 06:02, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
:::That specific part asks people to '''discuss''' with the placer before removing it, and it is for when editors have '''mistakenly''' placed the notice or the notice was placed in error. None of the aforementioned requirements for the reason you are claiming were met. And there is not a consensus yet. We are working on coming to one if you looked above the block of sources, and you are more than welcome to help find a compromise if you are legitimately interested in improving the article. ] (]) 07:58, 14 May 2024 (UTC)


== "CPCs deceive pregnant women..." ==


The above blanket lead statement should either be changed or eliminated altogether. The original statement in this place, sourced to the <nowiki>''</nowiki><nowiki>]</nowiki><nowiki>''</nowiki> read "CPCs aim not to educate and inform but to deceive, hector, and manipulate pregnant women attempting to learn about their pregnancy options." Since this wording obviously included strong POV it was shortened to to the simpler statement. But even this wording is not suitable unless quoted from the source. There is already plenty in the lead to showthat CPCs often use their own "facts" in talking to clients about abortion. ] (]) 19:01, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
::--] (]) 17:29, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
:::I agree that the "Affiliation" section is almost entirely redundant (I've been advocating getting rid of it for a while - I think the only info that isn't covered elsewhere is the name of one of the UK orgs, which doesn't even have an article). As for the linkage between Christianity and abortion, I'm sure we could find quotes from CPC org websites that make that linkage. (Care Net says that its ultimate aim is to share the love of Jesus or something like that, but that seems a leeeetle bit short of the sort of linkage we'd need.) ] (] &sdot; ]) 22:02, 22 March 2011 (UTC)

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Worklist

This is my list of stuff to do in the article. Partly for my own reference, but also in case other people want to tackle them, of course.

  • try to get demographics of CPC clients: numbers, ages, etc. (need neutral sources for this, or very careful use of promotional sources) Numbers on how many people find CPCs when looking for abortion clinics would be awesome but might not exist. (we do however have two different stats on how many women in Ireland encounter a CPC when looking for non-directive crisis pregnancy counseling)
  • include in "activities" a little information on the "delaying" tactic of CPCs (use existing sources, which I'm sure talk about it)
  • consider integrating the court cases section to the advertisement section of the article, since they're all about that. Anyhow, the sections in the legal status section are somewhat arbitrary - as we mention in the local ordinances section, there have been court cases about that too, and I'm sure we could rustle up court cases about funding - this info about mandatory counseling isn't a law but would still seem to belong.
    • court cases about funding?
  • Boes v. Deschu, another court case. Like the others, state-level with no evident fallout, so it may be worth trimming all of them a bit. Though see immediately above re: desirability of section.
  • bring things up to date (numbers, funding)
  • integrate Ireland section (CPCs vs. legit pregnancy counseling) into other sections of article
  • add to "activities" a subsection on adoption (, find more sources)
Here's a great article on that very thing! Shotgun Adoption
  • do more with the sources we're aware of but haven't used yet, eg. in the external links, or some that I have bookmarked; there are probably also some that we already cite but could get more from.
  • on CPCs' role in the anti-abortion movement (also from sources we have, eg. grassroots, fight)
  • web advertising:

Roscelese (talkcontribs) (not putting a date so this won't be archived)

  • two articles regarding google removing CPC false advertising ] ]

Lede NPOV issue

There's a pretty egregious POV issue in the lede of this article that Binksternet and Avatar317 have introduced while acting in good-faith with mostly reliable sourcing (we can ignore my sourcing concerns for this discussion; it's not relevant to the POV issue and is a reasonable judgement call either way per WP:BI). Looking at our articles on the Abortion-rights movements and Anti-abortion movements, it's pretty clear the established deference is towards exclusion of non-neutral terms from the lede sentence of articles on abortion. Concerns about the vitriolic language ("anti-women", "baby-killers", etc.) and more subtle POV'd lingo ("anti-choice", "pro-abortion") have seen these exclusions. Per an ongoing discussion (follow the link above) and Avatar's sourcing (thank you!), "fake abortion clinic" is clearly a term for CPCs among their opponents. However, including obviously POV charged language into the lede sentence on a delicate article is inappropriate. However, it is also obvious that both editors I've mentioned have been working on good-faith, if somewhat out of step with precedent. I hope to see their input and encourage discussion from anyone else who sees this! ~ Pbritti (talk) 02:05, 21 September 2022 (UTC)

The term isn't strictly partisan as you portray it. It's also used by scholarly sources. Here's a scholarly journal that uses it. Here's another from the same author four years earlier. And another journal with "Fake Abortion Clinics" as a sub-heading. Binksternet (talk) 02:17, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
Should have asked to be pinged; my bad, please ping me in the future if you want to respond directly to me specifically. Academic sources are swell, but even they use the term in scare quotes for the first few mentions. We could probably find a few scholarly articles that use the terms I mentioned above (not the nastier ones) but that still does not mean that placing them in the lede sentence is any less charged and POV'd. Also, for those who had the same trouble with checking out the first source Binksternet—I am so sorry I almost abbreviated your name in a dreadful way, lmk if there's a way you prefer—the source comes from Women & Health rather than "Women Health" as the .gov website claims. Thanks for the quick reply. ~ Pbritti (talk) 02:26, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
You can shorten my username to Bink if you prefer.
The understanding on Misplaced Pages generally is that the person initiating a talk page discussion will check in to see the responses, if any. Pinging that person isn't required; some folks would consider it pushy or just too much noise. I was responding to the topic, not to you personally.
The scholarly paper "Beyond Bray" has on page 167 a discussion of crisis pregnancy centers under the heading "Fake Abortion Clinics". The first instance of the term crisis pregnancy centers is in quotes while "fake clinics" is never in quotes, flipping the situation you described:

In the 1970s, a Missouri-based anti-abortion organization called the Pearson Foundation issued a ninety-three page manual for setting up "crisis pregnancy centers." National groups such as the Christian Action Council and the National Institute of Family Life, began cooperating with individual operators to set up several thousand anti-abortion centers disguised as women's health clinics.These non-profit organizations call themselves "abortion clinics" or "abortion alternatives" but have no medical staff and do not offer abortions. The staff members use deception and religious threats to convince women not to terminate their pregnancies. Estimates of the number of fake clinics presently in operation in the United States range from 1500 to over 3000.

The author, Rebecca Eisenberg, a Harvard Law School doctoral candidate at the time, continues to call these places "fake clinics" in the remainder of the piece. Binksternet (talk) 03:01, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
Bink, fair judgement call on the ping but just a personal preference! Again, we aren't establishing the term as being viable (a matter for the redirect convo linked above) but the inclusion of obvious POV terms in ledes. In each case, we're looking at ideological persuasions resulting in preferred nomenclature used by only one side of a debate (some academic sources might or might not accept as a generic term). Per our last discussion, it's apparent you prefer precedence in other articles and I have presented that. Thanks for clarifying preferred shortening on name; I'll remember it should we get the chance to chat more! ~ Pbritti (talk) 03:36, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
In my opinion, a QUALIFIED statement like we currently have in the lead: ..."sometimes called a pregnancy resource center (PRC), and a fake abortion clinic by supporters of abortion rights..." is NPOV. We are explicitly stating who (more often) uses that term.
WP:OTHERNAMES states: "By the design of Misplaced Pages's software, an article can only have one title. When this title is a name, significant alternative names for the topic should be mentioned in the article, usually in the first sentence or paragraph." ---Avatar317 05:34, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
@Avatar317: Apologies for belated response and ping (unsure if you're still watching this). This policy suggest significant alternative names, but we exclude significant alternative names of a derisive nature (again, see other abortion-related articles; see The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints for an example of a potentially derisive name in use). The succeeding sentence of that policy also suggests a terminology section is necessary should we proceed with this third significant name in the lede. I agree on in-text attribution but am very disappointed it took going to the talk page to get that. ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:43, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
Except this name isn't derogatory; it is accurate: at least for a very high percentage of these clinics as evidenced by the fact that there are many deceptive advertising laws created against them because of their intentional deception. Many (maybe not ALL, but a very high percent) INTENTIONALLY try to deceive women into believing that they are an abortion clinic, so that women will visit them rather than an abortion clinic: so this name isn't derogatory, for the great majority of these centers (maybe all) it is descriptive. ---Avatar317 06:23, 23 September 2022 (UTC)

Request for comment

Should the first sentence list the alternate name "fake abortion clinic"? Binksternet (talk) 18:38, 26 September 2022 (UTC)

Discussion

  • Yes, because "fake abortion clinic" is a term that is used by many sources to refer to these places. The term was used in scholarly journals starting in the 1990s. In 1990, J.A. Mertus published the scholarly paper "Fake abortion clinics: the threat to reproductive self-determination". In 1994, Rebecca Eisenberg published the paper "Beyond Bray " with a subsection titled "Fake Abortion Clinics", putting "crisis pregnancy center" in quotes but giving fake abortion clinic and fake clinic as the standard term. Modern media pieces have used this term, for instance The Guardian in the UK, the Idaho Statesman newspaper, Newsweek magazine and the Insider.com website. It's a negative term but it is seen widely enough to be listed. Binksternet (talk) 18:38, 26 September 2022 (UTC)

References

  1. Mertus, J A. "Fake abortion clinics: the threat to reproductive self-determination". Womens Health. doi:10.1300/J013v16n01_07. Retrieved 2022-09-15. The establishment of "fake abortion clinics" poses a great threat to women's ability to make free and informed procreative decisions. Such clinics intentionally deceive pregnant women into believing that they provide a full range of women's health services when, in reality, they provide only a pregnancy test, accompanied by intense anti-abortion propaganda.
  2. Eisenberg, Rebecca (1994). "Beyond Bray: Obtaining Federal Jurisdiction to Stop Anti-Abortion Violence". Yale Journal of Law and Feminism. 6 (1): 167–170. Originally written in late 1992 for Harvard Law School.
  • No. Why the hell does it need to be in the first sentence?
Elizium23 (talk) 18:51, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
Because it's an alternative term that is used in enough sources to qualify as significant. WP:OTHERNAMES says the significant alternative names "should be mentioned in the article, usually in the first sentence or paragraph." Binksternet (talk) 23:55, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Yes. (I came here from the RfC listing.) There is sourcing for it, and this is a situation where NPOV indicates that it should be used. I looked at the lead section, and it strikes me as having some pretty serious POV problems, in that it tends to imply that most of these centers are legitimate medical centers that just happen to have a particular point of view. They aren't. They are set up to mislead. A properly NPOV and encyclopedic article here will present that fact dispassionately, not paper it over. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:28, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
    • Following up, I'm OK with it being in a sentence other than the first one, so long as it's in the first paragraph of the lead. It should not, however, be treated as something that critics call it, because that's not accurate. It's what neutral observers call it. (Just as we wouldn't say that critics call faith healing pseudoscientific.) --Tryptofish (talk) 21:28, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
    • And with this series of new edits: , I'm now satisfied with the overall NPOV of the lead section. --Tryptofish (talk) 18:26, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Yes, per Bink's sourcing and Trypto's NPOV analysis. --SarekOfVulcan (talk) 19:58, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Yes per Bink and Tryptofish's reasoning.  — SMcCandlish ¢ 😼  20:52, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
  • No, not in the first line. It is sourced so we should mention that it they are sometimes called this, but I think a good approach is that the subject themselves wouldn't use this term. So, I suggest the 2nd sentence could be something like "They are also referred to as "fake abortion clinics" by critics" or similar referenced statement. --ZimZalaBim 21:10, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
The guideline WP:OTHERNAMES allows for any position within the first paragraph. But "critics" is not entirely true; topic scholars have used the term neutrally, positioning the term "crisis pregnancy centers" as biased in the same fashion as "pro-life", which we do not use as a neutral term.
Also, there is no source saying that the term "fake abortion clinics" is used by critics. That is a conclusion we might make as we attempt to summarize the sources. But some of the sources using that term are not simply critics—topic scholars such as Rebecca Eisenberg have used the term. Binksternet (talk) 04:54, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
So how about attributing the term to critics and to topic scholars? The "no" objections being raised here seem primarily concerned with wiki-voice being used.  — SMcCandlish ¢ 😼  07:35, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
No, again. Hedging would be acceptable, but a better approach is something like "They are also referred to as "fake abortion clinics" by critics" or similar referenced statement. ZimAlakaZam (talk) 23:35, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
Striking the above comment as it is from a user (now blocked) trying to impersonate me (almost certainly connected to Misplaced Pages:Administrators'_noticeboard/Incidents#AnubisIbizu. --ZimZalaBim 00:49, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
Except that it's not just critics. It's also the media and topic scholars. Binksternet (talk) 23:41, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
  • No (invited by the bot) Unthinkable to do it in the voice of Misplaced Pages. Per the previous post, something attributed and with context like "They are also referred to as "fake abortion clinics" by critics" might be useful in the body of the article. This isn't info about the centers, it's info about what critics say about them. North8000 (talk) 21:37, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
  • No For the reasons stated in my edit. It is not a particularly common name for crisis pregnancy centers, not even among their opponents. From doing a little Googling I found that "pro-life pregnancy center" was far more common and that "anti-abortion pregnancy center" was just about as common.Goodtablemanners (talk) 19:10, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
Tryptofish's comments above manage to be wrong on two counts. The lead sentences definitely do not imply that that these are normal medical centers. Saying that a CPR " is a type of nonprofit organization established by anti-abortion groups to persuade pregnant women against having an abortion" clearly establishes it as primarily a social and not primarily as a medical organization. As for saying that "fake abortion clinic" is what "neutral observers" call a CPR, its far less than common usage belies the fact. Goodtablemanners (talk) 19:42, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
Thanks for the ping. I stand by what I said. We can certainly agree to disagree on the current language of the lead section as a whole; these things are subjective. However, your argument about common usage should be tempered by what it says at WP:HITS. (It's written mainly in terms of notability, but it's also useful in the context of what we are discussing here.) The fact that a term gets more or fewer search engine hits has little bearing on its neutrality for purposes of NPOV. I'm not arguing that "fake" is the most common descriptor. (If it were, I'd argue for renaming this page.) I'm arguing that neutral observers consistently treat these centers as being fake. It's not just pro-choice critics who characterize them that way. Our NPOV policy requires that we characterize the page subject according to the preponderance of reliable sources, not according to splitting the difference between those sources and what the page subject would prefer. A neutral and encyclopedic article about these centers will describe them as fake versions of reproductive medicine clinics, intentionally designed to be deceptive. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:02, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
Thanks for your response. You would be more accurate in saying "I consistently treat these centers as being fake". Where does the notion that "neutral observers consistently" do so come from, other than your wish? They certainly don't seem to use the term all that often; and for "fake abortion clinic" to be used as an alternate name in the first line of the article it really needs to be used either frequently or else formally. It passes neither test. Goodtablemanners (talk) 20:28, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
You seem to be accusing me of being a POV pusher. Let's see how the RfC goes. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:34, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Comment. Lots of articles in websites, newspapers, magazines and journals refer to CPCs as fake clinics or fake abortion clinics or both. Here are more examples. These examples are listed only to prove the widespread and frequent usage of the term. Binksternet (talk) 22:13, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
I can observe that some of these sources are from groups that can be regarded as critics, such as Planned Parenthood and NARAL. But even so, these sources include Fortune, The Guardian (looks like a different author, by the way), The Hill, US News & World (by way of the Associated Press), and R29 (part of Vice Media). --Tryptofish (talk) 22:36, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
Some more sources are now listed here, and they include The Washington Post, Stat, CNBC, The LA Times, John Jay College, and USA Today. I think that, taken collectively, clearly takes it out of the narrow categories of critics and topic scholars, and into a significant swath of general use. --Tryptofish (talk) 18:48, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
Impressive work by Binksternet, but we could find just as many, if not more, usages of the far less hostile term "anti-abortion pregnancy center" in reliable sources. Again, "fake abortion clinic" is not a suitable description in the first line of an encyclopedic article. Goodtablemanners (talk) 17:46, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
To repeat yet again, the number of search engine hits is not the appropriate measure here, nor is the quantity of perceived hostility. --Tryptofish (talk) 17:54, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Skeptical no. I see that a lot of sourcing has been produced above of "neutral" sources describing these centers as "fake abortion clinics". Absent is any mention of a CPC describing itself as an "abortion clinic". For example, can anyone point to a CPC website where they call themselves an "abortion clinic"? Or where they state that they provide abortions? The diff from User:Binksternet below convinced me that the label is not appropriate. Even a supporter of the label is, by the use of the word "or", implying that some CPC's are not in the business of claiming to be abortion clinics. See WP:5P2, in particular the phrase "verifyable accuracy". Adoring nanny (talk) 19:12, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
    • I just took a quick look at the first source listed on the long list just above (). It says: When the researchers searched for “abortion clinic near me” and “abortion pill”, Google displayed a selection of 3 local providers in listings headed “abortion clinic” or “abortion pill” on its first results page. The research found that in some cases where there was only one registered abortion clinic in the whole state, Google instead directed users to fake clinics in their vicinity. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:19, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
I just did a search on "CPAP", and was on the first page of hits. I also tried a search on "fly Boston to New Haven", and the first page of hits included , which recommended train travel. A search on "Avis" got me on the first page. I even tried a search on "pregnancy crisis center", and the second hit was a Planned Parenthood page attacking them. The point is that searches often lead to related information, including from competing people and/or ideas. Adoring nanny (talk) 22:48, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
You are looking for CPCs describing themselves as abortion clinics? That's not the issue at hand. You are bringing up quite another matter—the central point of the article—a fact which is thoroughly covered in the article already: CPCs are in the business of tricking pregnant women into thinking they are abortion providers, abortion referral agencies, or at the very least the first step toward getting an abortion. This has been published fact for many decades, not in question. If you would like to challenge this aspect of the article, please start a new talk page topic with its own header. Binksternet (talk) 01:53, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
If an entity is a "fake X", I would expect them to describe themselves as an "X". Adoring nanny (talk) 15:03, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
That's an interesting expectation, and unrelated to the question at hand. For the purpose of this RfC, it doesn't matter in the slightest whether CPCs have called themselves abortion clinics. Other parties have, and frequently enough to list. Binksternet (talk) 15:17, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
Thanks for your comments. They have helped to clarify the issue for me. If "other parties" describe them as something, then perhaps the "other parties" are faking, but the CPCs themselves are not. Adoring nanny (talk) 15:20, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
It sounds like you've made up your mind, which is fine. But it's untrue to characterize sources that describe them as fake as all being sources that, themselves, are faking. There are clearly some sources that are advocates against CPCs. But if we discount those sources, we still have multiple sources from mainstream news organizations that say the same thing. Our policies on this require us to base what we say on such independent secondary sources, and not on original research based on an editor's interpretation of whether or not the use of particular language in the names of CPCs is or is not intentionally misleading. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:07, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
Is WP:5P2 a Misplaced Pages policy? Adoring nanny (talk) 21:19, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
It's an information page. We have a policy page at WP:NPOV. --Tryptofish (talk) 16:50, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
Just to make sure we are clear, here. Your position is that, if something is sourced, but inaccurate, it belongs in an article, not withstanding the sentence at WP:5P2 All articles must strive for verifiable accuracy, citing reliable, authoritative sources, especially when the topic is controversial or is about a living person. Adoring nanny (talk) 17:20, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
I think this is best expressed at the lead section of WP:Verifiability. We go by what reliable sources say is accurate. We do not go by what an editor thinks is accurate or inaccurate, because that would violate WP:No original research. That's what "verifiable accuracy" means. What I'm advocating for this page is accurate, according to reliable sources. Obviously, I would never advocate content that reliable sources characterize as inaccurate. --Tryptofish (talk) 17:41, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
@Adoring nanny you are misunderstanding Misplaced Pages policy. It doesn't matter whether the Moon Landing and Round Earth are TRUE, Neutrality requires that we accurately summarize what Reliable Sources say about them. Any arguments about whether they are true or not will be ignored. We do not waste time on anyone trying to debate the "truth" of Evolution, Global Warming, or any other topic. Similarly any attempt to argue whether "fake abortion clinic" is true will be ignored. The only thing that matters here is whether "fake abortion clinic" is actually in use as an alternate name, and whether that usage is sufficiently significant to mention. Alsee (talk) 11:14, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Yes : WP:OTHERNAMES states: "By the design of Misplaced Pages's software, an article can only have one title. When this title is a name, significant alternative names for the topic should be mentioned in the article, usually in the first sentence or paragraph." ---Avatar317 05:36, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Yes: Per the overwhelming sourcing provided by Binksternet. The "they don't call themselves that" argument advanced by some is not in WP:OTHERNAMES and is frankly completely irrelevant. The Byzantine Empire never called themselves that either, nor does Germany call itself "Germany". Loki (talk) 17:53, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Yes - This is the way a huge number of reliable sources describe them. I support including it in the lead along the lines as it is currently (not in the first sentence). The arguments that a subject must describe itself in a certain way -- organizations which, as we cover in the article, have had many legal challenges specifically because they misrepresent themselves -- are intensely unpersuasive. — Rhododendrites \\ 21:35, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
    Just noticed this "yes" opinion which really should be a "no" since the proposition in question asks if "fake abortion" clinic should be in the first sentence while you have said that it shouldn't. Goodtablemanners (talk) 04:31, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
    My mistake. I misread the question as asking about the lead. I think it should be in the lead. Without time to revisit the sourcing right now, I'm just striking my boldtext vote for now. — Rhododendrites \\ 13:41, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Yes per WP:OTHERNAMES, extensive coverage in reliable sourcing that uses that term. To answer the arguments made above, saying that it is an alternative name is not using it in the article voice; it is just (accurately) covering the fact that that is how they are often called. Attributing this to "critics" is inappropriate because some of the sources using it are impartial news sources and even scholarly journals. Neither are names in common use required to be neutral or dispassionate in any case - we report the common names, we don't judge them. The question of whether the subjects themselves use the term is not a meaningful criteria. Likewise, arguments along the lines of "I don't think it's accurate" or "I don't think they present themselves as abortion clinics" are immaterial - to report it as an alternative name, we only care about whether it is commonly-used that way in high-quality sources, which it plainly is. --Aquillion (talk) 15:25, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Qualified Yes per Bink, Trypotofish, and Aquillion. If the sources call 'em that, then we get to call 'em that. However, we could use a more formal term, for example "posing as" or "impersonating," if that would be more encyclopedic. The issue I see is one of tone. The truth is behind paywalls and propaganda's free. Misplaced Pages should be as accurate as possible, and "fake" is accurate. Darkfrog24 (talk) 00:42, 7 October 2022 (UTC)
  • No, as per the others. In fact we might want to remove pregnancy resource center too. Emir of Misplaced Pages (talk) 13:25, 9 October 2022 (UTC)
  • No, Not unless we also include the term "Pro-life pregnancy center.", a term that is far more common. Scorpions13256 (talk) 22:46, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
  • No as the sources presented are certainly reliable but would set an impossible untenable precedent; do terms like "myth" or "heresy" deserve mention in the first sentence of articles like Hinduism or Arminianism or "pro-abortion" in Abortion rights movement? Of course, the best partial counterexample is Creation myth. ~ Pbritti (talk) 23:05, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
    👍 Like Scorpions13256 (talk) 23:11, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
    I think the idea of using both terms in the lead is a good idea, and I would happily support it. As for setting a precedent, that's just not how WP works. No other page would be required to make content decisions based simply on a decision here, and the comparisons with Hinduism are exaggerated. --Tryptofish (talk) 16:26, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
    I'd be fine with that. Scorpions13256 (talk) 19:51, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
    If someone can point me to a source for it, I'll add it. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:59, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
  • No but I support including it in the lead, where it currently sits. The WP policy for alternate names being included in the lead sentence is not exclusive to the opening sentence; in fact, it says "or opening paragraph." Mission accomplished.
Also, Scorpions13256, provide some sources for that argument like Blinkernet did above. I think you make a great point.Pickalittletalkalittle (talk) 22:51, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
I have only looked at the headlines, but so far I have found this, this this, and this. Scorpions13256 (talk) 18:42, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
Lastly, Fox News uses it a lot, but I am not sure if it is reliable enough. Scorpions13256 (talk) 18:51, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
I've added it: (as well as the corresponding redirect). --Tryptofish (talk) 23:06, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
Thanks. I guess I am now in favor of the proposal also to include the term "Fake Pregnancy Center" per WP:NPOV. Scorpions13256 (talk) 02:00, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
  • No - Keep in First Paragraph It does not need to be in the FIRST sentence. The alternative name "Fake Abortion Clinic" is in fact prominently in the first paragraph, which is consistent with all Misplaced Pages policies. As edited this position allows the exact reason the name is used by scholars and other advocates to be stated (ie, language to the effect: CPCs are sometimes referred to as fake abortion clinics by scholars, the media, and supporters of abortion rights due to deceptive advertising practices that may obscure the clinic's anti-abortion agenda to potential patients seeking abortions). Placing this alternative name in the first sentence without elaboration is not helpful to the reader, and does not read naturally. –Zfish118 14:08, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
  • No – "fake abortion clinic" is a non-neutral description of a "pregnancy crisis centers". It is not another name for them according to the majority of sources that have been presented. The lead should remain the same; however, the sentence, which mentions "fake abortion clinic" in the lead, should say "described as" rather than "referred to as". Also, the phrase should not be bolded but rather only placed in quotation marks. --Guest2625 (talk) 02:45, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
  • No - The way it is now is the perfectly fine. Another option would be introducing it in the second sentence maybe. The issue with just presenting it as an alternative name is that it’s used under the connotation that CPC’s mislead people to believe they are running an abortion clinic, and that context couldn’t be easily translated to the reader through the first sentence. Iamreallygoodatcheckers 15:35, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Comment No I don't like that many almost all of the sources that are mentioned to support this are from pro-choice organizations (i.e Planned Parenthood ect.) eta:regardless this can't be in wikipedia voice, and seems npov anyway Bedfordres (talk) 23:01, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
Actually, a bunch of those sources are mainstream media and topic scholars. Some are even pro-life. Binksternet (talk) 23:39, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
I should remove almost all, but the majority are pro-choice/femminist, i.e are not "center" I stand by that this should not be in wikipedia voice. Bedfordres (talk) 01:06, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Qualified yes. In the sources listed above, the name isn't described by them, but indicate that they are described as such. SWinxy (talk) 22:34, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Lead. I'm not too particular about whether it's in the first sentence, and dedicating a separate sentence to it may well be more appropriate to explain the usage. There is abundant sourcing for this phrase being used, it is clearly significant to understanding the subject and why it is controversial. It is clearly WP:Due weight to explain why this alternate term is used. Alsee (talk) 11:26, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
  • No. Its current position is appropriate, but the citation overkill needs to be trimmed. StAnselm (talk) 17:35, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
    I grouped the sources so that readability is now improved. ---Avatar317 23:29, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
    No, it's still citation overkill. And I don't understand why you made three footnotes with two each; why not just one with six? StAnselm (talk) 01:24, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
    I'd suggest that editors propose which citations to remove and which to retain, here in talk. Since that's not the RfC topic, I'd also suggest making a separate subsection for that discussion. --Tryptofish (talk) 17:13, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
    Firstly, I oppose removing ANY of those citations, since as can be seen from the contentious discussion above, in my opinion, they are all needed. StAnselm (of all the editors who contributed to this discussion) is the only one arguing that there are too many sources - based not on POLICY but on an ESSAY which talks about readability concerns. I have fixed the readability concerns with my edit, and, as I said in my edit summary, I made 3 with 2 references each for easier readability on mouse-over of the reference tag. ---Avatar317 23:24, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
Well, to be fair, nobody else is talking about it because it's not really part of this discussion. I'm happy to wait until the RfC is concluded before we address this issue. StAnselm (talk) 04:25, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
I agree. This viewpoint is one-sided and misleading to the reader. If a visit to a medical pregnancy clinic, along with a transcript of an interview perhaps with the CEO or RN's representing said clinic, would show a clearer picture of what pregnancy medical clinics such as these actually represent. This should not be an opinion piece from one viewpoint, but a deep dive on the ins and outs of a functioning pregnancy medical clinic. It does not make sense there are three pregnancy medical clinics and centers in the country for every Planned Parenthood facility, if other options were not needed. 71.9.48.5 (talk) 20:32, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

Views of medical associations

In a lead-related disagreement that is closely intertwined with the discussion above, we have differing views of an attributed opinion that I sourced to two medical professional associations: , . In my opinion, it is better to attribute the opinion to the associations, than to say it vaguely in Misplaced Pages's voice. I also consider the source from the two associations, published in the Journal of Adolescent Health, is a reliable and due-weight source, with an impact factor ranking (per our page) of 9th out of 128 pediatrics journals and 30th out of 193 public health journals. I have notified WikiProject Medicine of this discussion, to get more opinions on the suitability of this material (). --Tryptofish (talk) 16:59, 30 September 2022 (UTC)

The ATTRIBUTED statement (as you put it) is clearly better than an UNATTRIBUTED "some" which is WP:WEASELWORDS. ---Avatar317 05:48, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
An attributed quotation is is fine when it has due weight in an article. The quote in question doesn't for a variety of reasons. The lead is supposed to preview the body of the article. While it is true that the body contains criticisms of crisis pregnancy centers, no material from the quoted sources appears in the body. The quote is a throw-in from otherwise unused sources and not especially prominent ones. These are not America's leading obstetric, gynecological, or pediatric societies. Thus to feature their quote in the lead is most definitely giving them undue weight. Perhaps the quote could be placed in an appropriate section in the body of the article. Goodtablemanners (talk) 16:35, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
I have no problem with including the material in both the lead and farther down on the page. It's an odd criterion to say that only the leading medical society is eligible for us to cite. Ones that are legitimate medical societies that represent medical practice in their indicated fields are reliable sources, as we define RS, for the mainstream views of practitioners in those medical fields. I hope that some editors from WP:MED will be able to advise us about these two societies. I'd also be happy to ask at WP:RSN. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:55, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
I've added it lower on the page, so that should take care of that. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:19, 1 October 2022 (UTC)

Fixing the article to reflect a more NPOV, and to also be more globally focused.

Hello, @Avatar317. I have made this section on this talk page so we can discuss the changes I make before I proceed with new ones. I appreciate your suggestion of doing edits incrementally, and for this most recent one, I have edited the first portion of the article (the lead paragraphs). I won't edit anything else until we discuss and find consensus on the amended contents and new structure of the lead section.

I hope to have a productive conversation where we can work together to improve this article to reflect a more neutral point of view, whilst not adhering to one specific perspective. DocZach (talk) 02:24, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

Here is the lead section I proposed, which I see as much more neutral and accurate than the current one.
A crisis pregnancy center (CPC), sometimes called a pregnancy resource center (PRC) or a pro-life pregnancy center, is a type of nonprofit organization that typically offers counseling, prenatal care, and/or a variety of medical services from an anti-abortion perspective. Many crisis pregnancy centers are established and/or supported by anti-abortion groups. Crisis pregnancy centers do not provide or refer for abortions. Instead, CPCs often deter women from obtaining abortions and urge other alternatives instead.
In the United States, there are an estimated 2,500 to 4,000 CPCs that qualify as medical clinics. Crisis pregnancy centers may provide pregnancy testing, sonograms, prenatal care, ultrasounds, STD testing, counseling, and/or other services. Some crisis pregnancy centers operate without medical licensing under varying degrees of regulation. There are many more crisis pregnancy centers than abortion clinics in the United States. As of 2020, there were 807 abortion clinics in the United States. Hundreds more CPCs operate outside of the United States; including in Canada, Latin America, Africa, and Europe.
Many CPCs are run by Christian groups that adhere to a socially conservative and anti-abortion viewpoint, and they often operate in affiliation with one of three non-profit organizations: Care Net, Heartbeat International, or Birthright International. In 1993, the National Institute of Family and Life Advocates (NIFLA) was formed to provide legal advice to CPCs in the U.S. During the presidency of George W. Bush (2001–2009), U.S. CPCs received tens of millions of dollars in federal grants. As of 2015, more than half of U.S. state governments helped to fund CPCs directly or through the sale of Choose Life license plates.
Crisis pregnancy centers are controversial, especially in the United States. Abortion rights activists claim that such centers are obstructing and hectoring women by deterring them away from accessing abortions or accurate information about them. CPCs are also criticized for sometimes disseminating misinformation about the effectiveness of condoms and the prevention of sexually transmitted infections. CPCs are sometimes called "fake abortion clinics" by scholars, the media, and supporters of abortion rights, due to deceptive advertising that obscures the centers' opposition to abortion. Legal and legislative action regarding CPCs has generally attempted to curb deceptive advertising, targeting those that imply that they offer abortion services by requiring centers to disclose that they do not offer certain services or possess certain qualifications.
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cc: @PRRfan @Avatar317 DocZach (talk) 02:44, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

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  24. Multiple sources:
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    • Dawson, Bethany (2022-08-21). "Fake abortion clinics now outnumber real ones 3 to 1, campaigners say, as pro-life activists try to pressure and shame women into abandoning terminations". Insider Inc. Fake abortion clinics that try to trick pregnant women in states where abortion is now banned and are searching online for termination options were given an unprecedented boost after Roe v Wade was overturned earlier this year, campaigners argue. Research shows that thousands of clinics posing as health centers offering abortions are ideological pro-life hubs that aim to pressure and shame pregnant women into abandoning their termination plans.
    • Goodwin, Shaun (2022-06-21). "Anti-abortion 'fake clinics' exist in Idaho. Here's what they are and how to spot them". Idaho Statesman. A "fake clinic," also known as a crisis pregnancy center, is a clinic that advertises services similar to an abortion clinic, but with a different agenda. Instead of performing abortion services, the staff talks women through their options but ultimately attempts to discourage them from having an abortion. Fake clinics are often set up close to abortion clinics, according to Planned Parenthood, and advertise a range of services such as STD testing, but more often than not do not provide any substantive health care services. Although not outwardly offering abortion services, the clinics will advertise solutions for unintended pregnancies, pregnancy consultation and post-abortion care.
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Thanks, @DocZach. Let's take it one step at a time. You propose to change the lead sentence from "...established by anti-abortion groups primarily to persuade pregnant women not to have an abortion" to "...that typically offers counseling, prenatal care, and/or a variety of medical services from an anti-abortion perspective." I salute your intention to make this article more accurate and neutral, but I would argue that this change does neither; it obscures rather than illuminates. As indicated by the three reliable sources cited in the original version of the lead (and many more cited in rest of the article), these centers are created by anti-abortion groups, so the lead should say so. Moreover, the phrase "...from an anti-abortion perspective", uttered by the host of the NPR interview cited in the proposed version, is murkier than a lead sentence should be. Fortunately, we need not even look beyond the cited interview for a clearer description by a journalist from a reliable-source organization: "The point of a crisis pregnancy center, which is often known as an anti-abortion center, or even just a pregnancy center, is to convince people to continue their pregnancies"—in so many words, "to persuade pregnant women not to have an abortion". I have more thoughts about the rest of your proposed changes, but perhaps you'd like to continue talking about the lead? PRRfan (talk) 03:10, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
@DocZach: Misplaced Pages's policy of Neutral Point of View is often NOT what new editors think it is. It is NOT to give WP:FALSEBALANCE just because there are two opinions on a subject, but rather it is to describe subjects as they are characterized in the WP:BESTSOURCES.
Additionally, the lead should NOT be the place where you start making changes when you edit an article, per WP:LEADFOLLOWSBODY. ---Avatar317 05:43, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Okay, let's focus on one body part at a time. I agree that the lead should be the last part to edit.
  1. I am fine with the way Origin is currently written. I have no disputes for that section.
  2. I have major disputes with the Activities section, and I will show the replacement for that section that I propose.
Activities (proposed replacement)
While CPCs often look like abortion clinics and are intentionally located near them, most do not provide abortions or even contraceptive care. However, 38% of CPCs do not clearly state that they don't provide abortions on their home page. CPCs often offer services such as free pregnancy tests, prenatal care, ultrasounds, STD testing, and/or classes for budgeting and resume building. A few CPCs also provide contraceptives. Some even supply clothing, maternity housing, food, financial support, and other supplies.
There is a trend toward CPCs obtaining some form of medical certification to be able to expand their abilities and marketing. One such example is to be able to perform sonograms in an attempt to convince women to carry their pregnancies to term. They may also provide screening for sexually transmitted infections, adoption referrals, religious counseling, post-abortion counseling, financial assistance, prenatal services, child-rearing resources and other services. Peer counselors are typically covered by mandated reporting laws with regard to statutory rape, and they are encouraged to ask about the age of the woman and the biological father.
CPCs have been criticized by supporters of abortion rights for providing misleading and/or graphic information or content to patients. Their advertising campaigns have been criticized as being carefully designed to reach groups they perceive as being more inclined towards seeking abortion, such as young women, women of color, and those from lower socioeconomic backgrounds. Often, they place billboards near educational institutions and utilize public transportation and bus shelters for promotion. For example, Care Net's "Urban Initiative" specifically aims to attract Black and Latina women by advertising on platforms like the Black Entertainment Network (BET) and drawing parallels between abortion and historical instances of oppression, such as slavery.
The British Pregnancy Advisory Service, an independent abortion-providing agency, stated that young women were particularly vulnerable to religiously influenced anti-abortion "Crisis Pregnancy Centres", unregulated by the National Health Service, because many of the women knew less about the healthcare system or did not want to consult their family GP. CPCs have focused on what they call "underserved" communities in an attempt to lower the high rates of abortion in communities of color.
Some jurisdictions are passing legislation that designates crisis pregnancy centers as emergency care facilities. In the State of Louisiana, CPCs are considered safe-haven zones where parents may surrender custody of newborn infants.
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I will explain major changes that make this replacement necessary:
  1. The claim that most crisis pregnancy centers are both unlicensed and do not provide medical services is false. First of all, the sourced paper that is given as a reference for that claim doesn't mention anything about how "most crisis pregnancy centers are unlicensed/do not provide medical services." Second of all, the Guttmacher Institute is not an unbiased source for matters concerning abortion. The Guttmacher Institute was literally founded as a subsidiary to Planned Parenthood, and they blatantly state on their website that they are pro-abortion and fighting for abortion rights, asking people to donate for it. And the claim that most crisis pregnancy centers offer no medical services is so obviously absurd. Of course almost all of them offer at least one type of "medical service." I doubt there is even a noticeable fraction of such centers that don't offer pregnancy tests or some form of prenatal care. Therefore, a simple fix to this problem is to change the wording of most to many. I would even argue that we should change it to some, but I am attempting to find compromise here.
  2. Something you may have noticed as one of the things I tried changing in the lead paragraphs is the claim that "CPCs do not offer contraceptives." This is false. Numerous CPCs, at least in recent years, have begun offering contraceptives. Most of the contraceptives offered are condoms, but some now even provide forms of birth control. This is also something I added in my proposal of the "Activities" section when I said "A few CPCs also provide contraceptives." https://apnews.com/article/e8640b10a242493e90a258a8cbe9cfee
  3. When talking about CPCs being criticized, I believe it is profoundly important to specify who is criticizing them. The obvious fact of the matter is that they are criticized by proponents of abortion rights, and it is only proper to include that in the statement about them being criticized.
  4. The comment about "racial targeting" is a blatant violation of NPOV. If anything, Planned Parenthood is "racial targeting" by launching their initiative to help people of color get more abortions, and for having most of their clinics in minority neighborhoods. Accusing CPCs in general of "racial targeting" makes no sense, and we already have a part that talks about how some of their efforts involve reaching out to people of color, inviting them to seek resources at their clinics. Many organizations of a wide variety of purposes have efforts to reach out to minority groups, and we don't ascribe them as engaging in "racial targeting" or "sexuality targeting."
  5. The most egregious part of this article that is completely a biased point of view is the "conclusion" of the Activities section: Overall, CPCs may offer support to individuals deliberating whether or not to proceed with their pregnancy but also potentially offer misleading information about abortion-related care and referrals. Pregnant individuals have the right to have access to truthful guidance, decision-making assistance, and appropriate resources to make the best choice for themselves regarding their pregnancy or abortion. I don't even know if I need to explain why that is one of the most improper, unprofessional, and biased things you could include in an article like this. It is a direct endorsement of abortion rights and a direct point of view about what "pregnant individuals should have the right to do."
  6. In my proposal, I added a portion at the end to include about how many of these CPCs are being recognized as "safe havens" and emergency-care facilities under safe-haven laws.
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I have tried my best to fully explain all of the changes to this section. I won't propose changes to other sections until we can find a consensus for the Activities section. I look forward to coming to an agreement. DocZach (talk) 02:29, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
Thanks, DocZach. I agree with your changes, with one specific exception and with a proposal for a further change to the top two paragraphs. The specific exception is to your point #3, about this proposed text: "CPCs have been criticized by supporters of abortion rights for providing misleading and/or graphic information or content to patients." I agree that criticisms should note who's doing the criticizing, but in this case, we can simply plainly state, as backed up by plenty of reliable sources, that "Many CPCs provide misleading and/or graphic information or content to patients." More broadly, I think we could condense the top two paragraphs under a topic sentence—something like:
"To fulfill their mission of persuading pregnant women not to get abortions, CPCs offer a variety of services; among the more common ones are free pregnancy tests, prenatal care, screening for sexually transmitted infections, and adoption referrals. Some offer counseling, including religious counseling and post-abortion counseling. (Peer counselors are typically covered by mandated reporting laws with regard to statutory rape, and they are encouraged to ask about the age of the woman and the biological father.) Some supply material support: clothing, maternity housing, food, financial support, and other supplies. Some offer training in such topics as budgeting, resume building, and child-rearing. A few CPCs provide contraceptives. An increasing number of CPCs obtain some form of medical certification to be able to expand their abilities and marketing; for example, permission to perform sonograms in an attempt to convince women to carry their pregnancies to term.
"When pregnant women come in for these services, CPCs attempt to persuade—or, anti-abortion groups say, hector or manipulate—them to forgo an abortion. Many provide misleading and/or graphic information or content. CPCs often look like abortion clinics and are intentionally located near them; 38% of CPCs do not clearly state that they don't provide abortions on their home page..."
What do you think? PRRfan (talk) 18:06, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
New proposal for "Activities" section with your suggestions in-mind:
While crisis pregnancy centers often look like and are intentionally located near abortion clinics, most CPCs do not provide abortions or abortion referrals. However, 38% of CPCs do not clearly state that they do not provide abortions on their homepage. In order to fulfill their mission of encouraging women to continue their pregnancies, CPCs often offer services such as free pregnancy tests, prenatal care, ultrasounds, STD testing, adoption resources, and/or classes for budgeting and resume building. A few CPCs also provide contraceptives. Some even supply clothing, maternity housing, food, financial support, and other supplies. There is a trend toward CPCs obtaining some form of medical certification to be able to expand their abilities and marketing. One such example is to be able to perform sonograms in an attempt to convince women to carry their pregnancies to term.
CPCs have been widely criticized by supporters of abortion rights for providing misleading and/or graphic information or content to patients. Their advertising campaigns have been criticized as being carefully designed to reach groups they perceive as being more inclined towards seeking abortion, such as young women, women of color, and those from lower socioeconomic backgrounds. Often, they place billboards near educational institutions and utilize public transportation and bus shelters for promotion. For example, Care Net's "Urban Initiative" specifically aims to attract Black and Latina women by advertising on platforms like the Black Entertainment Network (BET) and drawing parallels between abortion and historical instances of oppression, such as slavery.
The British Pregnancy Advisory Service, an independent abortion-providing agency, stated that young women were particularly vulnerable to religiously influenced anti-abortion "Crisis Pregnancy Centres", unregulated by the National Health Service, because many of the women knew less about the healthcare system or did not want to consult their family GP. CPCs have focused on what they call "underserved" communities in an attempt to lower the high rates of abortion in communities of color.
Some jurisdictions are passing legislation that designates crisis pregnancy centers as emergency care facilities. In the State of Louisiana, CPCs are considered safe-haven zones where parents may surrender custody of newborn infants.
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I have combined the first two paragraphs like you suggested, and have also incorporated some of your suggestions. What are your thoughts on the new proposal? @PRRfan DocZach (talk) 20:27, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
DocZach, I am glad that you approve of consolidating the various sentences about services. But I think we could better begin this Activities section with a topic sentence: a sentence that expresses the main idea of the paragraph (or passage) in which it occurs. This is a topic sentence: "To fulfill their mission of persuading pregnant women to forgo abortions, CPCs offer a variety of services..." This is not a topic sentence: "While crisis pregnancy centers often look like and are intentionally located near abortion clinics, most CPCs do not provide abortions or abortion referrals." Rather, it is evidence to support a topic sentence—either of a paragraph that describes CPCs' services or, as in my proposed text, of a paragraph describing their manipulative or deceptive practices. PRRfan (talk) 21:52, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
Also, you have not responded to my critique of "CPCs have been widely criticized by supporters of abortion rights for providing misleading and/or graphic information or content to patients," but we can come back to that after we work out how to begin the section itself. PRRfan (talk) 21:53, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
Here is my final proposal for the Activities section (bolded parts are where I've implemented your suggestions):
In order to fulfill their mission of persuading women to continue their pregnancies, CPCs often offer services such as free pregnancy tests, prenatal care, ultrasounds, STD testing, adoption resources, and/or classes for budgeting and resume building. A few CPCs also provide contraceptives. Some even supply clothing, maternity housing, food, financial support, and other supplies. There is a trend toward CPCs obtaining some form of medical certification to be able to expand their abilities and marketing. One such example is to be able to perform sonograms in an attempt to convince women to carry their pregnancies to term. While crisis pregnancy centers often look like and are intentionally located near abortion clinics, most CPCs do not provide abortions or abortion referrals. However, 38% of CPCs do not clearly state that they do not provide abortions on their homepage.
CPCs have been widely criticized by supporters of abortion rights for providing misleading and/or graphic information or content to patients to dissuade them from obtaining abortions. Their advertising campaigns have been criticized as being carefully designed to reach groups they perceive as being more inclined towards seeking abortion, such as young women, women of color, and those from lower socioeconomic backgrounds. Often, they place billboards near educational institutions and utilize public transportation and bus shelters for promotion. For example, Care Net's "Urban Initiative" specifically aims to attract Black and Latina women by advertising on platforms like the Black Entertainment Network (BET) and drawing parallels between abortion and historical instances of oppression, such as slavery. The British Pregnancy Advisory Service, an independent abortion-providing agency, warned about the lack of regulation on CPCs by the National Health Service in that young women were dissuaded from abortion without full knowledge of their legal options or the consultation of their family GP. CPCs have focused on what they call "underserved" communities in an attempt to lower the high rates of abortion in communities of color.
Some jurisdictions are passing legislation that designates crisis pregnancy centers as emergency care facilities. In the State of Louisiana, CPCs are considered safe-haven zones where parents may surrender custody of newborn infants.
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I have moved things around so that the topic sentence is first. I also condensed the section into three paragraphs. I have bolded parts where I incorporated your suggestions. @PRRfan DocZach (talk) 07:54, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
Hi, DocZach, and thanks. I'm not sure what you mean by "final proposal," but it's good to move down the line about some CPCs resembling abortion clinics. The first passage of bold text differs from my suggestion, which is "To fulfill their mission of persuading pregnant women to forgo abortions..." It's my contention that this is a more straightforward way to express the mission than the euphemistic "...to continue their pregnancies". If the pregnant woman did nothing, her pregnancy would continue, barring miscarriage or other circumstance. That's the default. CPCs exist to keep her from choosing a different action. Would you care to discuss? PRRfan (talk) 16:16, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
Alright, I see your point. We can change the phrasing of the topic sentence to "In order to fulfill their mission of persuading women to forgo abortions." With that implemented, do you agree with the new proposal for the section? DocZach (talk) 19:33, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
1) I'd prefer the first sentence to read: "In order to fulfill their mission of persuading women to forgo abortions, CPC's advertise and offer pregnancy support services for women with unintended pregnancies. These services often include free pregnancy tests, prenatal care,...."
2) A minor but substantial change: "...most CPCs do not provide abortions or abortion referrals." should be changed to "...CPCs do not provide abortions or abortion referrals." because, according the listed source (MotherJones) and probably every other source in the article, *NO* CPC's provide abortions or abortion referrals.
3) The second to last sentence "Some jurisdictions...." should be removed because the source (AmericanPress.com) doesn't say that CPC's are designated as emergency care facilities; the following sentence "In the State of Louisiana, CPCs are considered safe-haven zones..." is correct.
Otherwise, it looks mostly ok, except for some syntax errors and unacceptable sources which I can fix one-by-one after you replace that section part. ---Avatar317 00:39, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
1) I agree and have no objection.
2) I agree and have no objection.
3) I agree, and will remove the "emergency care facilities" part.
I will implement the changes now, and feel free to fix formatting if there are any mistakes. I greatly appreciate your willingness to compromise and work with me to help improve the article.
cc: @Avatar317 @PRRfan
Also, I will propose my next suggestions in regards to other sections of the article after you (@Avatar317) let me know when everything is set in regards to formatting or syntax (or whatever you were saying) of the Activities section. DocZach (talk) 03:40, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
Let me know if you are okay with this:
In regards to point 3 that you brought up, I moved the part about Louisiana safe-haven zones (the one sentence that was at the end) to be at the end of the first paragraph instead. Imo, it didn't make much sense for it to have its own paragraph, and I think it's good to keep the section as two paragraphs as they each have their own distinct purpose. DocZach (talk) 03:56, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
@DocZach, @Avatar317, I think we're getting there! You propose:

In order to fulfill their mission of persuading women to forgo abortions, CPCs advertise and offer pregnancy support services for women with unintended pregnancies. These services often include free pregnancy tests, prenatal care, ultrasounds, STD testing, adoption resources, and/or classes for budgeting and resume building. Some supply clothing, maternity housing, food, financial support, and other supplies. In 2020, one Texas chain of CPCs began providing contraceptives to unmarried women, stating that they wanted to help reduce unplanned pregnancies. There is a trend toward CPCs obtaining some form of medical certification to be able to expand their abilities and marketing. One such example is to be able to perform sonograms in an attempt to convince women to carry their pregnancies to term. While CPCs often look like and are intentionally located near abortion clinics, CPCs do not provide abortions or abortion referrals. However, 38% of CPCs do not clearly state that they do not provide abortions on their homepage. In some jurisdictions, such the State of Louisiana, CPCs are considered safe-haven zones where parents may surrender custody of newborn infants.

I propose:

"To fulfill their mission of persuading pregnant women not to get abortions, CPCs advertise and offer pregnancy support services for women with unintended pregnancies. Among the more common ones are free pregnancy tests, prenatal care, screening for sexually transmitted infections, and adoption referrals. Some offer counseling, including religious counseling and post-abortion counseling. Some supply material support: clothing, maternity housing, food, financial support, and other supplies. Some offer training in such topics as budgeting, resume building, and child-rearing. An increasing number of CPCs obtain some form of medical certification to be able to expand their abilities and marketing; for example, permission to perform sonograms in an attempt to convince women to carry their pregnancies to term. In some jurisdictions, such the State of Louisiana, CPCs are considered safe-haven zones where parents may surrender custody of newborn infants. In 2020, one Texas chain of CPCs began providing contraceptives to unmarried women, stating that they wanted to help reduce unplanned pregnancies.

This version presents the services in somewhat more orderly fashion: "common" ones, counseling, material support, training, and medical. It also spells out "STD" and eliminates the ungainly "and/or". It moves the mention of contraception to the end because that is not a service directly for, as the topic sentence says, "women with unintended pregnancies". Finally, it leaves the sentence about non-provision of abortion services and lookalike clinics for the next paragraph. What do you think? PRRfan (talk) 11:05, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
✅ I have no objection. What do you think about PRR's suggestion, @Avatar317? DocZach (talk) 17:24, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
I prefer the "forgo abortions" because these centers are definitely NOT targeting women who already decided they want to keep their child and need all sorts of material help because they are poor.
I now thought of what I think is a better first sentence: "To fulfill their mission of persuading women with unintended pregnancies to forgo abortions, CPCs advertise and offer pregnancy support services."
The rest I agree with. ---Avatar317 00:37, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
I would disagree with adding the "unintended pregnancies" part to the topic sentence. CPCs provide services to mothers whether their pregnancy was intended or not. Some women have gotten pregnant intentionally, but then they may have experienced an event such as their partner leaving them that may have led them to start considering abortion, and CPCs are purposed to help those women as well. DocZach (talk) 01:55, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
It was already in the topic sentence, I just changed the order. Maybe it should be "unwanted pregnancies"? ---Avatar317 05:15, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
I would just say:
To fulfill their mission of persuading pregnant women to forgo abortions, CPCs advertise and offer pregnancy support services.
Because if we use unintended, then that leaves out the people who did intend to get pregnant but for some reason are considering abortion down the line. And if we use unwanted, then that leaves out the people who do want the baby, but who feel like they need an abortion for a specific concern such as economics. DocZach (talk) 07:24, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
Alternatively, it could be:
To fulfill their mission of persuading women with unintended, unwanted, or difficult pregnancies to forgo abortions, CPCs advertise and offer pregnancy support services. DocZach (talk) 07:27, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
Although I see Avatar317's point about CPCs being more concerned with stopping abortion than supporting babies, I think we need not load up this sentence with adjectives; I support DocZach's "To fulfill their mission of persuading pregnant women to forgo abortions, CPCs advertise and offer pregnancy support services." PRRfan (talk) 13:58, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
I'm ok with that. ---Avatar317 02:26, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
Nice work, all. I will update the paragraph to:

To fulfill their mission of persuading pregnant women to forgo abortions, CPCs advertise and offer pregnancy support services. Among the more common ones are free pregnancy tests, prenatal care, screening for sexually transmitted infections, and adoption referrals. Some offer counseling, including religious counseling and post-abortion counseling. Some supply material support: clothing, maternity housing, food, financial support, and other supplies. Some offer training in such topics as budgeting, resume building, and child-rearing. An increasing number of CPCs obtain some form of medical certification to be able to expand their abilities and marketing; for example, permission to perform sonograms in an attempt to convince women to carry their pregnancies to term. In some jurisdictions, such the State of Louisiana, CPCs are considered safe-haven zones where parents may surrender custody of newborn infants. In 2020, one Texas chain of CPCs began providing contraceptives to unmarried women, stating that they wanted to help reduce unplanned pregnancies.

And I'm moving this text from the article pending our discussion on how to incorporate it in the next paragraph: "While CPCs often look like and are intentionally located near abortion clinics, CPCs do not provide abortions or abortion referrals. However, 38% of CPCs do not clearly state that they do not provide abortions on their homepage." PRRfan (talk) 03:10, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

  • Just a friendly reminder that named references only need to be defined one time, then we just use the name of the reference for subsequent uses. Please always check your work for cite errors. Thanks. Isaidnoway (talk) 05:40, 16 May 2024 (UTC)

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DocZach, this article is already a good summary of its topic. It doesn't need any kind of major changes with regard to Misplaced Pages's policy of WP:NPOV. Your POV tag at the top is out of order. Minor tweaks to wording can be discussed, but major shifts in direction are not indicated. We have followed the best sources about the topic, especially scholarly works published in scholarly journals, which are the highest sources available. Just about every scholarly work characterizes CPCs as having a false front. That's why this article must continue to tell the reader about the falsehood inherent in the great majority of CPCs. It's critically important to the topic. Your proposed version is a whitewash. Any such version which ignores scholarly analysis is not going to gain adherents on this talk page. Binksternet (talk) 04:00, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
Also, the topic is primarily related to the United States. Trying to make it "global" will be an exercise in futility. Certainly we will welcome any information coming from non-US observers, but by far the most CPC activity is in the US. Don't try to fix a problem that doesn't exist. Binksternet (talk) 04:04, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
In regards to the global situation, the lead says "Hundreds more CPCs operate outside of the U.S., including in Canada, Latin America, Africa, and Europe" but provides practically no detail on countries outside the US in the the actual body. In Canada, for example, there's been political debate about whether or not such places should be funded on a federal level, how more exist than actual abortion clinics, and how they're often the only option in rural areas. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 05:05, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
Since you have the facts at hand, you would be welcome to add information about Canada. Even so, the other countries are dancing to the US tune; it's mainly US-based groups which have been pushing the CPC concept upon other countries. Binksternet (talk) 06:08, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
I was not the individual to add the global warning, first of all. Second of all, you should have completely read all of my disputes before randomly removing the NPOV tag when clearly this article is a POV mess. You don't get to decide yourself to remove the tag just because you think this article is so fantastic. This article endorses a "right to access abortion" explicitly in that it literally says it at the conclusion of the Analysis section. It is also incredibly biased and written very poorly, for reasons I have already explained, and that I would really appreciate if you read. DocZach (talk) 05:13, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
And YOU don't get to tag the article just because YOU think it is terrible.
Tag specific cases where you think the statement does not properly paraphrase the source, or does so in a biased way. ---Avatar317 05:34, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
I have already cited examples, one of the most prominent being the conclusion of the Activities section, which presents an OPINIONATED CONCLUSION in WP:WIKIVOICE.
Overall, CPCs may offer support to individuals deliberating whether or not to proceed with their pregnancy but also potentially offer misleading information about abortion-related care and referrals. Pregnant individuals have the right to have access to truthful guidance, decision-making assistance, and appropriate resources to make the best choice for themselves regarding their pregnancy or abortion.
And in respond to your comments about me adding the NPOV tag, I will also emphasize that YOU don't get to remove the tag from the article just because YOU and ONE or TWO other people are persistent on keeping this article, a very obvious essay-like critique piece on CPCs, in its current state. DocZach (talk) 07:36, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
The purpose of tagging an article at the top is to attract editors who will then proceed to fix it. If the article has multiple active and involved editors, no tag is necessary. Per WP:WTRMT, a tag should be removed "If it reasonably appears that the template did not belong when placed" or if "there is consensus on the talk page (or elsewhere) as to how to address the flagged issue, and you are reasonably implementing those changes." One person cannot insist that the tag must stay; that's not how consensus works. Binksternet (talk) 06:02, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
That specific part asks people to discuss with the placer before removing it, and it is for when editors have mistakenly placed the notice or the notice was placed in error. None of the aforementioned requirements for the reason you are claiming were met. And there is not a consensus yet. We are working on coming to one if you looked above the block of sources, and you are more than welcome to help find a compromise if you are legitimately interested in improving the article. DocZach (talk) 07:58, 14 May 2024 (UTC)

"CPCs deceive pregnant women..."

The above blanket lead statement should either be changed or eliminated altogether. The original statement in this place, sourced to the '']'' read "CPCs aim not to educate and inform but to deceive, hector, and manipulate pregnant women attempting to learn about their pregnancy options." Since this wording obviously included strong POV it was shortened to to the simpler statement. But even this wording is not suitable unless quoted from the source. There is already plenty in the lead to showthat CPCs often use their own "facts" in talking to clients about abortion. Goodtablemanners (talk) 19:01, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

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